Wydick 6th Edition Slides - Chapter 2

Exercises
Source: Richard C. Wydick & Amy E. Sloan

Plain English for Lawyers, Chapter 2 (6th ed. 2019)
Exercise 1
Your sentences should have a higher proportion of working words to
glue words
Revise this sentence - 1
• In point of fact 350 grams of J-12 plastic explosive, seven detonating

devices, and one 50-foot roll of insulated copper wire were
discovered by the federal security inspectors at the airline gate hidden
on the accused’s person at the time he was detained and arrested.
• In point of fact 350 grams of J-12 plastic explosive, seven detonating devices, and
one 50-foot roll of insulated copper wire were discovered by the federal security
inspectors at the airline gate hidden on the accused’s person at the time he was
detained and arrested. (45 words total/28 working words)
Sentence 1 revised
• The federal security inspectors discovered 350 grams of J-12 plastic

explosives, seven detonating devices, and 50 feet of insulated copper
wire hidden on the accused’s person when they detained and
arrested him at the airline gate.
• The federal security inspectors discovered 350 grams of J-12 plastic explosives,
seven detonating devices, and 50 feet of insulated copper wire hidden on the
accused’s person when they detained and arrested him at the airline gate. (36
words total/27 working words)
Revise these sentences - 2
• There is nothing in the loan agreement, as we read its terms and

conditions, that could be construed to allow prepayment of the loan
by the borrower and simultaneous termination of the City’s equity
share. Prepayment of the loan will not affect the City’s equity share,
which will remain due on upon either upon the sale of the property in
question or upon the occurrence of any of the breaches specified in
said loan agreement. (73 words total)
Sentences 2 revised
• We do not read the loan agreement as allowing a borrower both to

repay and simultaneously terminate the City’s equity share.
Prepayment will not affect the equity share. It will remain due upon
either the sale of the property or the occurrence of any breach
specified in the agreement. (51 words total)
• When entering into a loan agreement regarding the settlement of a

claim made by a client, a lawyer must not offer or agree to a provision
that imposes a restriction on the right of a lawyer to practice law,
including the right to undertake the representation of or take
particular actions on behalf of other clients or potential clients with
similar claims. (62 words total)
Sentence 3 revised
• In settling a client’s claim, an attorney must not offer or make an

agreement that restricts the lawyer’s right to practice law, including
the right to represent or act for other persons. (32 words total)
Exercise 2
Use one or two words in the place compound constructions
• For the purpose of controlling how his art collection could be

displayed subsequent to his death, the doctor created a very
restrictive trust with a view to keeping everything as it exactly was
during his lifetime.
Sentence 1 revised
• To control how his art collection could be displayed after his death,
the doctor created a very restrictive trust, hoping to keep everything
exactly as it was during his lifetime.
• In relation to the enormous charitable gift claimed by the taxpayer,

inasmuch as she failed to submit an appraiser’s report with reference
to the donated bronze sculpture, we propose to disallow the
deduction in accordance with the Revenue Department’s standard
operating procedure.
Sentence 2 revised
• Concerning the taxpayer’s enormous charitable gift deduction, she did

not submit an appraisal of the donated bronze sculpture. Therefore,
we propose to disallow the deduction, as the Revenue Department’s
standard operating procedure requires.
Revise these sentences - 3
• The relief sought by the plaintiff in connection with this case is in the
nature of a mandatory injunction. Prior to the merger of law and
equity, only a court of Chancery could grant such relief.
Sentences 3 revised
• The plaintiff seeks relief similar to a mandatory injunction. Before the

merger of law and equity, only a court of Chancery could grant that
kind of relief.
• In order to raise funds, the charity’s organizers held a silent auction

on the ground that a game of chance would not be permitted by
virtue of state gaming law.
Sentence 4 revised
• To raise funds, the charity’s organizers held a silent auction because a

game of chance would not be permitted by state gaming law.
Exercise 3
Avoid word-wasting expressions and other surplus words
• Because of the fact that parties in many instances can find a sufficient
number of points of agreement to resolve a lawsuit before trial, there
is no doubt but that mediation can be effective in reducing the
backlog of pending cases.
Sentence 1 revised
• Because parties can often find enough points of agreement to resolve

a lawsuit before trial, mediation can doubtless be effective in reducing
the backlog of pending cases.
• At such time as the court issues a scheduling order, the case will
proceed to discovery.
Sentence 2 revised
• When the court issues a scheduling order, the case will proceed to
discovery.
• Subsequent to the court’s ruling, the defendant filed a notice of

appeal.
Sentence 3 revised
• After the court’s ruling, the defendants filed a notice of appeal.

• This is a situation in which mandatory injunctive relief is

inappropriate.
Sentence 4 revised
• Mandatory injunctive relief is inappropriate here.

• Despite the fact that at this point in time the statute of limitations has
passed, the plaintiff just filed a complaint alleging negligence.
Sentence 5 revised
• Although the statute of limitations has now passed, the plaintiff just
filed a complaint alleging negligence.
• Commencement of construction is prohibited until such time has your

plans receive the approval of the design review committee.
Sentence 6 revised
• You cannot begin construction until the design review committee

approves the plan.
• In the majority of instances, the insurance adjuster will, at the outset,

deny the claim.
Sentence 7 revised
• Usually, the insurance adjuster will start by denying the claim.

• The auditors review the file on an annual basis.

Sentence 8 revised
• The auditors review the file annually.

• Given the fact that the regulations are hard to understand, inspectors
issue citations for violations more frequently than was formerly the
case.
Sentence 9 revised
• Because the regulations are hard to understand, inspectors issue

citations for violations more often now.
• Instigation of a lawsuit in the absence of a good faith belief that the

underlying claim is supported by a sound legal and factual basis can
result in professional discipline of the attorney, in addition to the
imposition of litigation sanctions on both the attorney and on the
client as well.
Sentence 10 revised
• An attorney can be disciplined for suing without a good faith belief

that the claim is legally and factually sound, and both the attorney
and the client are subject to litigation sanctions as well.
Exercise 4
Focus on the actor, action, and object
• There are three interrelated reasons that might be the motivation for
a person to make a gift of significant size to a charitable organization.
Sentence 1 revised
• A person might make a significant gift to charity for three interrelated

reasons.
• First, it is often the case that the person is motivated by a desire to

benefit the charity in question.
Sentence 2 revised
• First, the person often primarily wants to help the charity.

• There is often the issue of avoiding the capital gains tax, which is
frequently the second reason why a person might donate an asset
that has sharply increased in value during the time that the person
owned it.
Sentence 3 revised
• Second, the person might want to avoid capital gains tax by giving the
charity an asset that is now much more valuable than it was when the
person acquired it.
• In the event that the person is exceedingly wealthy, it is possible that

a third reason a large charitable donation might be made is for the
purpose of reducing the amount of estate taxes due at the time of his
or her death.
Sentence 4 revised
• Third, if the person is very wealthy, a large charitable gift can reduce
the estate tax that must be paid when the person dies.
• It is important for tax lawyers and estate planners to show clients the
multiple ways gifts to charity can produce beneficial results at tax
time.
Sentence 5 revised
• Tax lawyers and estate planners should show clients how their natural
desire to give to charity can also reduce their taxes.
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Exercises

Source: Richard C. Wydick & Amy E. Sloan

• In point of fact 350 grams of J-12 plastic explosive, seven detonating

• The federal security inspectors discovered 350 grams of J-12 plastic

• There is nothing in the loan agreement, as we read its terms and

• We do not read the loan agreement as allowing a borrower both to

• When entering into a loan agreement regarding the settlement of a

• In settling a client’s claim, an attorney must not offer or make an

• For the purpose of controlling how his art collection could be

• In relation to the enormous charitable gift claimed by the taxpayer,

• Concerning the taxpayer’s enormous charitable gift deduction, she did

• The plaintiff seeks relief similar to a mandatory injunction. Before the

• In order to raise funds, the charity’s organizers held a silent auction

• To raise funds, the charity’s organizers held a silent auction because a

• Because parties can often find enough points of agreement to resolve

• Subsequent to the court’s ruling, the defendant filed a notice of

• After the court’s ruling, the defendants filed a notice of appeal.

• This is a situation in which mandatory injunctive relief is

• Mandatory injunctive relief is inappropriate here.

• Commencement of construction is prohibited until such time has your

• You cannot begin construction until the design review committee

• In the majority of instances, the insurance adjuster will, at the outset,

• Usually, the insurance adjuster will start by denying the claim.

• The auditors review the file on an annual basis.

• The auditors review the file annually.

• Because the regulations are hard to understand, inspectors issue

• Instigation of a lawsuit in the absence of a good faith belief that the

• An attorney can be disciplined for suing without a good faith belief

• A person might make a significant gift to charity for three interrelated

• First, it is often the case that the person is motivated by a desire to

• First, the person often primarily wants to help the charity.

• In the event that the person is exceedingly wealthy, it is possible that

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