PEE Paragraphs Gatsby
PEE Paragraphs Gatsby
PARAGRAPHS
Write a PEEL paragraph explaining the reader’s first impression of
the character Jay Gatsby.
PEEL
Point = Main point (topic sentence)
Evidence = A quotation used to strengthen your point
Explain = Explain your point and your quotation
Link = Concluding idea (link it back to your
point)
P – MAKE YOUR POINT
Point There is an adequate topic sentence There is good topic sentence :There is an excellent topic sentence
Evidence Comments are mostly supported by an adequate Comments are mostly supported by a Comments are mostly supported by
references/ quotation from the text good references/ quotation from the text an excellent references/ quotation
from the text
Explain Adequate explanation of the point Good explanation of the point Excellent explanation of the point
Adequate analysis of reasons and issues Good analysis of reasons and issues Excellent analysis of reasons and
issues
Mechanics Adequate control of standard writing Good control of standard Excellent control of
conventions, such as spelling, writing conventions, such as standard writing
(including Correct capitalization, punctuation (2 or more spelling, capitalization, conventions, such as
Spelling and errors) punctuation (1-2 errors) spelling, capitalization,
Punctuation) Adequate use of a range of mostly Effective control of a range of punctuation
grammatically accurate language grammatically accurate Excellent combination of a
structures for the specific purpose language structures for the range of grammatically
and effect, including clauses and specific purpose and effect, accurate language
sentences (2 or more errors) including clauses and structures for the specific
sentences (1-2 errors) purpose and effect,
including clauses and
sentences
(No errors)
Link Adequate link back to the main point Good link back to the main Excellent link back to the main
or the following paragraph. point or the following paragraph point or the following
paragraph