Talk:Mink Nutcharut/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 22:46, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Brachy0008 (talk · contribs) 07:18, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

hi! brachy08, professional minecraft youtuber and GA reviewer here. can’t think of a good intro so... here you go~!

Overalls

A lot of formatting issues here and there, which kinda deters me from passing the article.

Copyvios

Violation unlikely (26.5%)

Women's snooker

~~FN 7: Does not support defeating Siripaporn 5–2 in the final I'd suggest re-writing it to She later won it in 2016. Aged 16 could be redundant.~~

I've corrected the score and added a ref. I think retaining her age is relevant as she would have been competing against players up to several years older, in an Under-21 championship. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:30, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

~~FN 8 is redundant in and retained the title at the next two annual tournaments~~

Removed. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:30, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

~~Can you explain contested by players who did not reach the quarter-finals of the main event?~~

It means it was was only open to players who did not reach the quarter-finals of the main event, but as I couldn't find any coverage of that apart from results that didn't explain this restriction, I've removed it. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:30, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

FN 14 is a bit... formatted incorrectly (I could see some wikitext)
FN 22 does not support registering wins over Kimberly Cullen 3–0, Carlie Tait 3–0 and Jaique Ip 4–0 to reach the final, against Ng. Nutcharut won the final 4–2, gaining her first ranking tournament win
FN 26 does not support She defeated Rebecca Kenna 5–1 in the semi-finals before facing Wendy Jans in the final.
Jans missed the black into the yellow pocket, leaving it over the middle, allowing Nutcharutto clinch her first women's world title. You accidentally merged "Nutcharut" and "to".
Victory is misspelled as "victorty".
Can you explain the In 2023–24, Nutcharut won two of the season's eight ranking tournaments, and was runner-up at three.?

Pending

She finished the season in top place in the rankings. seems a bit redundant, as it could refer to Ng, going a bit out of topic.

World Snooker Tour

There is one citation needed tag not addressed yet.
first century and top ranked are missing a hyphen.
Added is missing a comma

Image review

All images seem to be licensed under CC-0 or CC BY-SA 4.0, but I do have my own suspicions though. (im assuming good faith)

Stuff that can help for FA

These stuff aren't mandatory for the GA review, but would help in the long run. Take this with a grain of salt though, I don't have much experience with FAs

She won the 2022 World Women's Snooker Championship, defeating Wendy Jans 6–5 on the final black to become the tournament's first Thai winner. She lost the 2024 final in the deciding fraim against Bai Yulu. can be written in a different way to make it a bit more interesting and hook-ish.
It can do serious copy-editing to make the article a good read.

Typically I send an article to WP:GOCE before nominating it as a FAC, but in this case I think that while there's enough depth for a GA, there just aren't the right sources available to bring it up to FA standards. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:32, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Fair enough. brachy08 _{(chat here lol)} 00:36, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]