Talk:Former Italian Prime Minister Berlusconi found guilty of fraud

Review of revision 1673737 [Not ready]

Revision 1673737 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 03:07, 27 October 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: See below. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: Having only gotten partway into source-checking, I've already encountered some sentences too close to source. Likely there are more. I realize there's a learning curve on this. Don't, routinely, take passages from the source and "scuff them up" slightly. Rearrange the grouping of information into sentences (when possible, info in a sentence here distributed across multiple source sentences, even multiple sources, info in a source sentence distributed across multiple sentences here). Rearrange the sequences of elements in a sentence. Avoid distinctive words and turns of phrase. Hopefully, edits during review of other recent articles can be somewhat useful as models, though I couldn't demonstrate the more extreme forms of rearrangement since I had to maintain independence for review. One example of a sentence here that should less resemble the source is the second sentence of the lede. Please check the entire article for this sort of thing. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1673737 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 03:07, 27 October 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: See below. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: Having only gotten partway into source-checking, I've already encountered some sentences too close to source. Likely there are more. I realize there's a learning curve on this. Don't, routinely, take passages from the source and "scuff them up" slightly. Rearrange the grouping of information into sentences (when possible, info in a sentence here distributed across multiple source sentences, even multiple sources, info in a source sentence distributed across multiple sentences here). Rearrange the sequences of elements in a sentence. Avoid distinctive words and turns of phrase. Hopefully, edits during review of other recent articles can be somewhat useful as models, though I couldn't demonstrate the more extreme forms of rearrangement since I had to maintain independence for review. One example of a sentence here that should less resemble the source is the second sentence of the lede. Please check the entire article for this sort of thing. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1674494 [Passed]

Revision 1674494 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:10, 27 October 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1674494 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:10, 27 October 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.