Hi!
I haven't read the full PDF yet, but I don't want to wait until I'm done with it to leave a quick comment here about how much I like Bump in the Dark! I'm a big fan of Blades in the Dark and have seen a few adaptations of it, but I really like what you've done with Bump in the Dark. Not only did you simplify FitD a bit, but you brought in some really cool new stuff from other systems. I love the states (and disadvantage) and also the strings (from monsterhearts?) I'm sure the rest of the PDF will be great and I might be able to play a Twin Peaks setting with it soon. Would be really happy if you continue to work on the system!
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Nina! Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you're excited about the game and I hope you share your experiences with it once you've played it. Twin Peaks is a major inspiration for me and the last campaign I ran definitely had some good Twin Peaks vibes. It's not a perfect fit but I think you can do it pretty well!