My heart's forever grateful
For in my life I found
A love so true and faithful
Intense and without bounds.
Spanning time and distance,
So free and unconfined,
Pure and tender sweet romance,
No other love I'll find.
Whatever cost it takes
My boundless love will be
A promise I won't break
You are the one for me.
And when my life is over,
With my last breath I'll say:
'I love you, just remember -
For you my love will stay! '
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(Written March 23,2009 -Tarlac City Philippines)
''Whatever cost it takes My boundless love will be A promise I won't break You are the one for me'' indeed, nice lyric poem of love.......10+++ from me
O to be in love, To live so wild and free A pleasure sent from above, A pleasant mystery. Very pleasant read! Thank you for suggesting this poem of yours to me, a 10 if you were to allow rating.
this poem has the rhythm of a beautiful ballad. good work, ric
And when my life is over, With my last breath I'll say: 'I love you, just remember - For you my love will stay! ' a great love poem full of emotions and passion.... thank you very much dear poetess.t ony
Beautiful depiction of bliss of love, well articulated and insightfully penned from inner recesses of the heart with lovely rhyme scheme. Good piece of poetry written with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
A true lover of poems always want to hear the last stanza of your poem
I am so impressed, I hope you are selling books, it would be a shame to let such good work go unbenounced to the world, you know, besides the people on this site. I am partial to your style of writing, moreso than any other, did it all come naturally to you?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Whatever cost it takes My boundless love will be A promise I won't break You are the one for me. ................... these lines really pulled my heart string..This is poetry at its best.Lovely..I love it, from end to end.. Hugs, Meggie