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(updated 8/15)

(2015-2016- everything you always wanted to know about AP English IV, but were afraid to ask!)
(adapted from Elizabeth Davis of Westwood High School)

A VOCABULARY FOR DESCRIBING LANGUAGE

TONE
TONE (POSITIVE)
Happiness
amiable*
elevated*
sprightly*

cheery
enthusiastic

contented*
exuberant*

ecstatic
joyful

elevated*
jubilant*

Pleasure
cheerful
satisfied

enraptured*
amused

peaceful
appreciative

playful
whimsical*

pleasant

Friendliness, Courtesy
accommodating*
confiding
helpful
polite
tender

approving
cordial*
indulgent*
sociable
tolerant

caressing
courteous
kindly
solicitous*
trusting

comforting
forgiving
obliging*
soothing

compassionate
gracious*
pitying
sympathetic

Animation
ardent*
excited
feverish*
lively

breathless
earnest*
hasty
passionate

brisk
ecstatic
hearty
rapturous*

crisp
energetic
hopeful
vigorous*

eager
exalted*
inspired
impassioned*

Romance
affectionate
lustful

amorous*
sensual*

erotic*
tender

fanciful*

ideal*

Tranquility
calm
relaxed

hopeful
soothing

meditative*
spiritual

optimistic
dreamy

serene

TONE (NEUTRAL)
General
authoritative*
disbelieving
matter-of-fact
restrained*

baffled*
factual
nostalgic*
sentimental*

ceremonial
formal
objective*
shocked

clinical*
informative
questioning
urgent

detached*
learned
reminiscent*

Rational/Logical
admonitory*
curious
frank*
instructive
preoccupied*
uncertain

argumentative
deliberate
incredulous*
oracular*
puzzled
unequivocal*

candid*
didactic*
indignant*
pensive*
sincere
probing*

coaxing
doubting
innocent
persuasive
studied*

critical
explanatory
insinuating*
pleading
thoughtful

Self-Control
solemn*
gentle
wary*

serious
temperate*
cautious

serene
imperturbable*
prudent*

simple
nonchalant*

mild
cool

Apathy
blas*
dry*
indifferent*
sluggish*

bored
dull
inert*
stoical*

colorless
feeble*
languid*
sophisticated*

defeated
helpless
monotonous*
vacant*

dispassionate*
hopeless
resigned*

TONE (HUMOR/IRONY/SARCASM)
amused
bantering*
condescending*
contemptuous*
facetious*
flippant*
ironic*
irreverent*
mocking
mock-serious*
ribald*
ridiculing
scornful*
sharp
whimsical*
wry*
playful
hilarious

bitter
cynical*
giddy*
joking
patronizing*
sarcastic
silly
belittling
uproarious

caustic*
disdainful*
humorous
malicious*
pompous*
sardonic*
taunting
haughty*

comical
droll*
insolent*
mock-heroic*
quizzical*
satiric*
teasing
insulting

TONE(NEGATIVE)
General
accusing
artificial
childish
condescending
disgruntled*
harsh
insulting
shameful
threatening

aggravated*
audacious*
choleric*
contradictory
disgusted
hateful
irritated
superficial
uninterested

agitated*
belligerent*
coarse*
critical
disinterested
hurtful
manipulative*
surly*

angry
bitter
cold
desperate
passive
indignant*
obnoxious*
testy*

arrogant
brash*
condemnatory
disappointed
furious
inflammatory*
quarrelsome

Sadness
despairing
melancholy*

despondent*
maudlin*

foreboding*
regretful

gloomy
tragic

bleak

Pain
annoyed
disgusted
mournful
sorrowful
uneasy*

biter
dismal*
pathetic
sour
vexed*

bored
fretful*
plaintive*
sulky
worried

crushed
irritable
querulous*
sullen

disappointed
miserable
sore
troubled

Unfriendliness
accusing
disparaging*
severe

belittling
impudent*
spiteful

boorish*
pitiless
suspicious

cutting
reproving*
unsociable

derisive*
scolding
reproachful*

Anger
belligerent*
indignant*

furious
enraged

livid*

wrathful*

savage

Passion
fierce
insane
reckless

frantic*
impetuous*
wild

greedy
impulsive*

voracious*
jealous

hysterical
nervous

condescending
pedantic*
confident
imperious*
peremptory*
stiff

contemptuous
didactic*
defiant
impressive
profound*
saucy*

pretentious*
bombastic*
dignified
smug*
proud

Arrogance/Self-Importance
boastful
bold
pompous*
supercilious*
self-righteous*
assured
domineering
egotistical
knowing
lofty
resolute*
sententious*

Sorrow/Fear/Worry
aggravated
confused
grave*
ominous*
serious

anxious
depressed
hollow*
paranoid*
staid*

apologetic*
disturbed
morose*
pessimistic
enigmatic*

apprehensive*
embarrassing
nervous
poignant*

concerned
fearful
numb
remorseful*

Submission/Timidity
aghast*
awed
groveling*
obsequious*
shy
timid

alarmed
contrite*
ingratiating*
resigned
submissive*
tremulous*

ashamed
self-deprecatory*
meek*
respectful
surprised
unpretentious*

astonished
docile*
modest*
reverent*
sycophantic*
willing

astounded
fawning*
obedient]
servile*
terrified

VERBS
These verbs will be especially effective when the subject is the author or a character. They are excellent replacements for
be verbs and instrumental in the formulation of thesis and theme statements. Careful use of these verbs can result in precise
identification of an authors purpose. Follow your teachers directions to categorize the verbs as transitive, intransitive,
positive, negative, or neutral.
VERBS FOR LITERARY ANALYSIS
accentuates
accepts
affects
alleviates
analyzes
approaches
assumes
attacks
bases
believes
chooses
chronicles
compels*
completes
conducts
conforms
contests*
contrasts
defines
defies
delineates*
despises
deviates*
differentiates*
discovers
discusses
distinguishes
distorts*
elicits*
emphasizes
enumerates*
envisions
experiences
explains
fantasizes
focuses
generalizes*
guides
holds
honors
imagines
impels*
infers*
inspires
inundates*
justifies
lampoons*
lists
manipulates
minimizes
observes
opposes
patronizes*
performs
ponders*
portrays
presumes
produces
provides
qualifies*
recalls
recites
reflects
refers
represents
results
seems
sees
states
strives*
supports
suppresses*

achieves
allows
argues
attempts
challenges
claims
concerns
confronts*
contributes
demonstrates
details
differs
displays
downplays
encounters
evokes
expresses
forces
heightens
identifies
implies*
intends
juxtaposes*
maintains
moralizes*
organizes
permits
postulates*
projects
questions
recollects
regards
reveals
selects
suggests
symbolizes

adopts
alludes*
ascertains*
attributes*
changes
comments
concludes
considers
conveys
depicts*
determines
directs
disputes
dramatizes
enhances
excludes
extends
foreshadows
highlights
illustrates
includes
interprets
lambasts
makes
muses*
overstates
personifies*
prepares
promotes
rationalizes
records
regrets
ridicules
specifies
summarizes
sympathizes

advocates*
alters*
assesses*
avoids
characterizes
compares
condescends
contends*
convinces
describes
develops
disappoints
disrupts*
elevates
enriches
expands
extrapolates*
functions
hints
illuminates
indicates
interrupts
laments*
manages
notes
outlines
persuades
presents
proposes
reasons
recounts
rejects
satirizes*
speculates*
supplies
traces

understands
vacillates*
VERBS TO USE INSTEAD OF EXEMPLIFIES
appears
asserts
connotes*
corroborates*
depicts
discloses*
evinces*
exhibits
manifests*
points to
shows
substantiates*
validates*

values

verifies*

attests to
defines
elucidates*
expounds*
proves
suggests

certifies
demonstrates
endorses*
exposes
ratifies*
typifies*

confirms
denotes*
establishes
intimates*
relates
upholds

ADJECTIVES FOR USE IN LITERARY/RHETORICAL DISCUSSION

DESCRIBING THE AUTHOR
cultured
intellectual
sensible
rational
perceptive
visionary*
idealistic*
spiritual
sophisticated*
original
liberal*
progressive*
realistic*
romantic*
opinionated*
intolerant
narrow-minded*
sentimental

erudite*
philosophic*
prophetic*
orthodox*
whimsical*
radical*
shallow
hypocritical*
skeptical*

well-read
analytical
optimistic
unorthodox*
humorous
reactionary*
superficial
fanatical*
cynical*

sagacious*
imaginative
broad-minded*
sympathetic
conservative*
unprejudiced
bigoted
provincial*

DESCRIBING STYLE/CONTENT
lucid*
graphic*
exact
concise*
piquant*
aphoristic*
poetic
prosaic*
pure
vigorous*
fluent
glib*
polished*
classical
rhetorical*
turgid*
vague
diffuse*
ungraceful
harsh
unpolished
crude*
utilitarian*
humanistic*
subjective*
melodramatic*
credible*
recondite*
absurd
trivial

intelligible*
succinct*
syllogistic*
plain
forceful
natural
artistic
pompous*
verbose*
abrupt*
vulgar*
pragmatic*
fanciful*
controversial
commonplace

explicit*
condensed*
allusive*
simple
eloquent*
restrained*
bombastic*
grandiose*
pedantic*
labored*
formal
naturalistic*
authentic*
mystical*
heretical*

precise
pithy*
metaphorical
homespun*
sonorous*
smooth
extravagant
obscure*
ponderous*
awkward
artificial
impressionistic*
plausible*
improbable*

DESCRIBING DICTION
high or formal
low or informal
concrete
abstract*
esoteric*
learned
connotative*
symbolic
provincial*
colloquial*
inexact
euphemistic*
bombastic*
grotesque
obtuse*
moralistic*
proper
pretentious*

neutral
plain
cultured
picturesque*
slang*
trite*
vulgar*
ordinary
old-fashioned

precise
simple
literal*
sensuous*
idiomatic*
obscure*
jargon*
scholarly

exact
homespun
figurative*
literary
neologistic*
pedantic*
emotional
insipid*

DESCRIBING SYNTAX
loose sentence
compound*
imperative*
euphonic*
rambling
spare

balanced*
compound-complex*
telegraphic*
epigrammatic*
jerky
unadorned*

interrupted
declarative*
antithetic*
emphatic
cacophonic*
jumbled

simple*
interrogative*
inverted*
incoherent
monotonous
chaotic

periodic*
complex*
exclamatory*
rhythmical
tortuous
austere*

obfuscating*
journalistic*
terse*
musical
lilting*
lyrical*
DESCRIBING ORGANIZATION/STRUCTURE/POINT OF VIEW
spatial*
chronological
flashback
step-by-step
objective*
subjective*
contemplative*
reflective*
clinical*
omniscient*
limited*

laconic*
elegant

mellifluous*
solid

flash forward*
nostalgic*
impersonal*

in media res*
reminiscent
dramatic*

DESCRIBING IMAGERY (Substitute these precise adjectives for less precise ones such as vivid, colorful, and powerful.)
bucolic*
pastoral*
gustatory*
olfactory*
tactile*
kinetic*
kinesthetic*
sensual*
sacred
sexual
auditory*
religious
animal
war/military
chaotic
DESCRIBING CHARACTERS (Great substitutions for pretty and ugly!)
Physical Qualities
manly
virile*
robust*
hardy*
sturdy
strapping*
stalwart*
muscular
brawny*
lovely
fair
comely*
handsome
dainty
delicate
graceful
elegant
shapely
attractive
winsome*
ravishing*
dapper*
immaculate
adroit*
dexterous*
adept*
skillful
agile*
nimble*
active
lively
spirited*
vivacious*
weak
feeble*
sickly
frail
decrepit*
emaciated*
cadaverous*
effeminate*
unwomanly
hideous
homely*
course*
unkempt*
slovenly*
awkward
clumsy
ungainly*
graceless
bizarre*
grotesque
incongruous*
ghastly
repellent*
repugnant*
repulsive
odious*
invidious*
loathsome*
Mental Qualities (Great substitutions for smart and stupid! Which comments would you like to see on your papers?)
educated
erudite*
scholarly
wise
astute*
intellectual
precocious*
capable
competent
gifted
apt*
rational
reasonable
sensible
shrewd*
prudent*
observant
clever
ingenious*
inventive
subtle*
cunning*
crafty*
wily*
unintelligent
unschooled*
unlettered*
ignorant
illiterate*
inane*
irrational
puerile*
foolish
fatuous*
vacuous*
simple
thick-skulled*
idiotic
imbecilic*
witless*
deranged*
demented*
articulate*
eloquent*
Moral Qualities (Great substitutions for good and bad!)
idealistic*
innocent
virtuous*
guileless*
upright*
exemplary
undefiled*
temperate*
abstentious*
puritanical*
truthful
honorable
decent
respectable
wicked
notorious*
vicious
incorrigible*
immoral*
unprincipled*
reprobate*
ribald*
vulgar*
intemperate*
deceitful
dishonest
unscrupulous*
vile*
foul*
recalcitrant*

faultless
chaste*
austere*
trustworthy
corrupt*
dissembling*
depraved*
sensual*
dishonorable*
philandering*

righteous*
pure
ascetic*
straightforward*
degenerate*
infamous*
indecent*
dissolute*
base*
opportunistic*

Spiritual Qualities (More great substitutions for good and bad!)

religious
reverent
pious*
regenerate*
holy
saintly
agnostic*
atheistic*
irreligious*
profane*
sacrilegious*
materialistic
diabolic*
fiendlike*
blasphemous*

devout*
angelic
impious*
carnal*
unregenerate*

faithful
skeptical*
irreverent*
godless
altruistic*

charitable
Social Qualities (Terrific substitutions for nice and mean!)
civil*
amicable*
contentious*
tactful*
courteous
cooperative
hospitable*
gracious*
amiable*
convivial*
jovial*
jolly
anti-social*
acrimonious*
quarrelsome
discourteous
impudent*
impolite
ill-mannered
unrefined
rustic*
brusque*
churlish*
fawning*
grumpy
fractious*
crusty*
waspish*
taciturn*
reticent*

unpolished*
genial*
cordial*
urbane*
antagonistic*
insolent*
provincial*
obsequious*
peevish*
gregarious*

sullen*
affable*
congenial*
suave*
misanthropic*
ill-bred
boorish*
sniveling*
petulant*
garrulous*

NOUNS FOR USE IN LITERARY/RHETORICAL DISCUSSION

ANALYZING CHARACTERS
foil*
nemesis*
confidante*
doppelganger*

adversary*
protagonist*
narrator (unknown, reliable, nave)

ANALYZING STRUCTURE/ORGANIZATION/POINT OF VIEW

foreshadowing
epiphany*
analogy*
extended metaphor*
parallel structure
comparison/contrast
transition
sequence
juxtaposition*
anecdote*
frame story*
arrangement
categorization
placement
person (first, second, third)*
perspective (chronological, geographic, emotional, political)*
ANALYZING SYNTAX
repetition
subject*
phrase*
modifier*
conjunction*
appositive*
comma
abstract noun*
parenthetical expression
hyphen*
catalogue*

parallelism
anaphora*
predicate*
object*
clause*
infinitive*
dependent clause*
independent clause*
interjection*
deliberate fragment*
semicolon*
colon*
pronoun*
proper noun*
concrete noun*
dialogue*
footnote
capitalization for effect
dash*
active voice*
compound nouns/adjectives

IDENTIFYING GENRE/PURPOSE
novel
novella*
letter
sermon
prcis*
synopsis
travelogue
essay*
farce*
conceit*
assessment
eulogy*
apology
soliloquy*
fable*
argument
IDENTIFYING SOUND DEVICES
alliteration*
assonance*
end rhyme*
feminine rhyme*
incremental rhyme*

antagonist*

shifts
definition
classification

asyndeton*
direct object*
participle*
subordinate clause*
appositive*
rhetorical question*
common noun*
apostrophe*
inversion*
passive voice*

polysyndeton*
indirect object*
gerund*
preposition*
emphatic
noun*
collective noun*
chiasmus*
antecedent*
tense

autobiography*
speech
critique*
diatribe*
editorial*
elegy*
monologue*
verse

memoir*
treatise*
personal narrative
polemic*
tirade*
parody*
portrayal

biography
abstract*
journey
commentary*
review
allegory*
archetype*

consonance*
masculine rhyme*

repetition*
meter*

rhyme*
slant rhyme*

THE LANGUAGE OF ARGUMENT

VERBS
attack
challenge
validate
answer
grant*
assert
NOUNS
warrant
solution
vested interest
logos*
induction*
audience
rebuttal*
refutation
invective*
qualifier*

charge
qualify
confirm
agree/disagree
generalize

claim
counter
affirm*
verify
specify

propose
repudiate*
argue
resolve
debate

defend
allege*
assume
concede*
dispute

validity
resolution
conflict of interests
counterargument
fallacy*
purpose
antithesis*
slippery slope*
proponent*
begging the question*

plausibility*
bias
enthymeme*
premise*
ad hominem
message
non sequitur*
anecdote*
assertion
justification

practicality
credibility
pathos*
syllogism*
exigence*
precedent*
circular reasoning*
advocacy*
adherent *
cause/effect

proposal
accountability
ethos*
deduction*
speaker
testimonial*
bandwagon*
rhetoric*
red herring*

TRANSITION WORDS and PHRASES

Time

Place

after,
afterward,
at first, as
before,
finally,
immediately,
later, next,
now,
previously,
soon, then

above, ahead,
among,
beyond,
down,
elsewhere,
farther, here,
in front of, in
the
background,
near, nearby,
next to, there

Idea

first, second,
third,
similarly, as,
in the same
way, for
instance,
likewise,
however

Extending
elaboration
by
comparing

Extending
elaboration
by
contrasting

Extending
elaboration
by
emphasizing
/clarifying

Extending
elaboration
by adding
another
example

as, at the
same time, by
comparison,
equally, in the
same manner,
likewise,
similarly

although, and
yet, as, as
though, at the
same time,
but, in
contrast,
conversely,
even so,
unlike, even
though,
however, in
spite of,
instead of,
neither,
nevertheless,
on the one
hand, on the
other hand,
provided that,
though,
unfortunately,
whereas, yet

especially, for
instance, in
fact, indeed,
that is, in
other words

moreover,
most
important,
now, so ,
additionally
again, also,
especially, in
addition, in
fact, last,
again, also,
besides,
equally
important,
furthermore,
similarly, in
contrast

Transition list from Crafting Expository Argument by Michael Degen

THEME VOCABULARY
Brendan Kennys List of Abstract Ideas for Forming Theme Statements:
alienation
ambition
appearance v. reality
betrayal
bureaucracy
chance/fate/luck
children
courage/cowardice
cruelty/violence
custom/tradition
defeat/failure
despair/discontent/disillusi
onment
domination/suppression
dreams/fantasies

duty
education
escape
exile
faith/loss of faith
falsity/pretence
family/parenthood
free will/willpower
game/contests/sports
greed
guilt
heart v. reason
heaven/paradise/Utopi
a
home

identity
illusion/innocence
initiation
instinct
journey (literal or
psychological)
law/justice
loneliness/solitude
loyalty/disloyalty
materialism
memory/the past
mob psychology
music/dance
patriotism

persistence/perseveran
ce
poverty
prejudice
prophecy
repentance
revenge/retribution
ritual/ceremony
scapegoat/victim
social status (class)
the supernatural
time/eternity
war
women/feminism

IDENTIFYING and EXPRESSING THEME

Method A (sample from Writing Essays about Literature by Kelley Griffith):
Subject
1.
What is the work about? Provide a one to three word answer. See Theme Vocabulary above.
Theme
2.
What is the authors message with regard to #1 as it pertains to the human condition? In other words, what
comment does the work make on human nature, the human condition, human motivation, or human ambition?
3.
In identifying and stating theme, be sure that the observation
(a) is not too terse to express the complexity of the human experience
(b) avoids moralizing words such as should and ought
(c) avoids specific reference to plot and characters
(d) avoids absolute words such as anyone, all, none, everything, and everyone
4.
Using both dependent and independent clauses, write a complex sentence which fulfills the requirements above
and which explains one of the major themes of the work.
Sample for Anna Karenina:
Subject: sacred versus profane love
Theme: Although people can, through no fault of their own, become entrapped in long-lasting and destructive relationships,
sacred commitments, like marriage and parenthood, take precedence over extramarital loves, no matter how passionate
and deeply felt they may be.

IDENTIFYING THEME

Method B (adapted from material by Brendan Kenny):

1.

Theme is an abstract idea (See Theme Vocabulary above.) coupled with a universal comment or observation
which addresses one of the following: (a) human motivation (b) the human condition (c) human ambition.

2.

A strategy for discovering a works theme is to apply questions about these areas to the work.
* What image of humankind emerges from the work? If people are good, what good things do they do? If people
are no damned good (Mark Twain), how and to what extent are they flawed?
*What moral issues are raised in the work? Who serves as the moral center of the work? Who is the one person
with whom the author vests right action and right thought? What values does the moral center embody?
* Is the society or social scheme portrayed by the author life-enhancing or life-destroying? What causes and
perpetuates this society?
* What control over their lives do the characters have? Are there forces beyond their control?
* How do the title, subtitle, epigraph, and names of the characters relate to the theme?

3.

In identifying and stating theme, be sure that the observation

(a) is not too terse to express the complexity of the human experience
(b) avoids moralizing words such as should and ought
(c) avoids specific reference to plot and characters
(d) avoids absolute words such as anyone, all, none, everything, and everyone

4.

Sample for The Most Dangerous Game:

Men, when they are courageous and lucky, even in a hostile environment, can overcome the odds against their
survival.
Sample for The Catcher in the Rye:
In the presence of corruption, escape may provide some hope of preserving our innocence but denies our
responsibility to alter, rebel against or sometimes grow to accept what we see as threatening.

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Developing an Analytical Voice

Level One: Identify how the situation is created; observe what you
see

(collecting evidence)
Diction: what types of words are used or repeated?
Imagery: How is the image created? What are its parts? What senses are
Detail:

provoked?
Whats the setting? Who are the characters? What are the facts of the
text
that dont require quoting its language?

Level Two: What abstract

associations
emerge from the language of the text?
Fear?
Excitement?
Violence?
Chaos?
Order?
Arrogance?
Submission?
Confidence?
Confinement?
Freedom?
Benevolence?

This list of Level

Two words is only
a sample list. Any
abstract noun that
names what the
evidence (Level
One) conveys may
be appropriate. See
page 12, (theme
vocabulary) for
additional ideas or
generate your own.

Level Three:

Identify the

relationships

The association
may be part of a larger

Interpretive
Perspective /
repetition [similarity, analogy, recurrence, echo,CLAIM about:
to the rest of the text:

Tone
Attitude
Voice
Atmosphere
Character
Thematic idea
Ethical appeal
Logical appeal
Emotional appeal
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Aristotles Topics:
definition,
comparison,

parallelism]
contrast [incongruity, antithesis, opposition, tension]
shift [turn, transformation, alteration]

juxtaposition

[contiguity, adjacency]

 2008 Michael Degen, Ph.D. (adapted by Jennifer Cullen, Westwood High School)

How to Connect Rhetorical Choices to Meaning

NOTE: In general, a connection of device to meaning should be 3-5 sentences long. The templates below are
a starting place; you will eventually learn to vary them to suit your purposes. A connection must
articulate the meaning a device suggests and HOW this suggestion is achieved.

Diction

Identify the grammatical unit (phrase, noun, verb, adjective, adverb, etc.) and provide the context
in which it appears in the text. Consider connotation as well as denotation. Do NOT write: The
writer uses diction. Thats like saying: The writer uses words.
Connect the diction to the meaning of this text. Avoid generic commentary. Provide an original
insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.

Model:
The phrase* ____________________________ used to describe/identify__________________________________
conveys _______________________ since / because / in that ___________________________________________
______________. This is significant because _______________________________________________________.
* or the noun, verb, adjective, adverb

Example:
The phrase, a thin beard of ivy, used to describe Jay Gatsbys mansion conveys both intrigue and inexperience.
Since the ivy is thin, Fitzgerald suggests a wealth without lineage, newly formed and barely veiled; yet, the ivy as
a beard suggests a worldly desire to conceal. This is significant because through the description of his mansion,
Gatsby is portrayed as both ingnue and chameleon, alerting the reader to the protagonists dual and perhaps
contradictory nature.

Syntax

Identify the syntactical choice the author has made and provide the context in which it appears in
the text. Do NOT write: The writer uses syntax. Since syntax refers to the order and structure of
words, phrases, etc, it always exists even if you do not find it noteworthy.
Connect the syntax to the meaning of this text. Avoid generic commentary. Provide an original
insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.

Model:
The ________________________________ function(s) to ____________________________________
____________________________________________________________________. This structure
supports the authors purpose to _________________________________________________________.
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Example:
Gatsbys interrupted sentences dramatize his nervousness and hesitation as he discusses his upcoming
meeting with Daisy at Nicks bungalow. Stuttering, Why, I thought why, look here, old sport, you
dont make very much money, do you, Gatsby reveals his true vulnerability and weakness showing a
stark contrast to the greatness that has been established in the early chapters of the novel. Fitzgerald
continues to reveal chinks in Gatsbys armor as the novel progresses preparing the reader for protagonists
ultimate fall.
Helpful hint:
Some other examples of purposeful syntactical choices an author might make: parallelism, anaphora,
rhetorical question, appositives, polysyndeton, asyndeton, prepositional phrases, etc. According to
Jeff Sommers and Max Morenberg, authors of The Writers Options, appositives define, summarize, and
clarify. Prepositional phrases may elaborate and clarify by indicating how, where, when, why.

Imagery
(word pictures appealing to one of the 6 senses (visual, auditory, gustatory, olfactory, tactile, kinesthetic)
if you cant identify which one, it isnt a valid example of imagery)
Identify the image and provide the context in which it appears in the text.
Connect the image to the meaning of this text. Avoid generic commentary. Provide an original
insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.
Model:
The image of ______________________________ depicts a (picture, sense, state, etc.) of __________
_____________________________ because the reader (sees, envisions, realizes) that ______________
___________________________________________________________________________________.
This is significant because ______________________________________________________________.
Example:
The image of an argument . . . pull[ing] Nick back to the party as if with ropes conveys his helpless
struggle to get away from the gathering in Tom and Myrtles apartment at the same time that it dramatizes
his fascination with the inebriated and adulterous events that are occurring. The reader can see that much
as ropes confine, restrain, and render one helpless, Nick, due perhaps to a lack of experience or a flawed
moral code, remains discomfited yet seems unable to confront or reject the lies and pretenses of the party
guests. This is significant because the reader must question Nicks declaration that he is tolerant and
honest.

Figurative Language: Metaphor or Simile

Identify the metaphor or simile and provide the context in which it appears in the text.
Connect the metaphor or simile to the meaning of this text. Avoid generic commentary. Provide
an original insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.

Model:
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The subject of (x) _____________________ is compared to (y) ____________________. This is fitting

because (x) _______________________ and (y) ______________________ share these characteristics:
(a) ____________________________________ and (b) ______________________________________.
This is significant because ______________________________________________________________.
Example:
In his I Have a Dream speech, Martin Luther King, Jr. compares the condition of poverty to a lonely
island. This is a fitting comparison because poverty and a lonely island share these characteristics: (a)
isolation and alienation from the vast ocean of material prosperity which surrounds them and (b) both
are small, singled out, vulnerable, and surrounded by something they dont possess. This comparison
causes the audience to consider the tangible social barriers created by an invisible financial limitation to
feel sympathy for the isolated poor.

Figurative Language: Personification

(a figure of speech in which animals, abstract ideas, or inanimate things are referred to as if they were human)

Identify the animal, abstract idea, or inanimate thing and provide the context in which it appears in
the text. Identify the human characteristic that is ascribed to it.
Connect the effect of the personification to the meaning of this text. Avoid generic commentary.
Provide an original insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.

Model:
In _______________________________, ___________________is personified as possessing the human
characteristic(s) of ___________________________________________ . The author employs
personification in order to___________________________________________________________.
Example:
"Today, we begin a new chapter in the history of Louisiana. I've said throughout the campaign that there are two
entities that have the most to fear from us winning this election. One is corruption and the other is incompetence.
If you happen to see either of them, let them know the party is over."
-- Bobby Jindal, Louisiana Governor-Elect victory Speech (as posted on americanrhetoric.com)

In Bobby Jindals victory speech, the abstract ideas of corruption and incompetence are personified as
possessing human form and consciousness. The governor-elect suggests that members of his audience
might encounter or see them and should inform them that their party is over. Through this
characterization, Jindal simultaneously emphasizes his strength as a leader and sends a strong message,
without naming specific perpetrators, that those who may possess those qualities will be driven out of the
states government.

Figurative Language: Hyperbole

(deliberate exaggeration used to heighten effect or create humor remember that this is a figure of speech not
meant to be interpreted literally e.g., Im so hungry I could eat a horse.)

Identify what is being exaggerated and provide the context in which it appears in the text.
Connect the effect of the hyperbole to the meaning of this text. Avoid generic commentary.
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Provide an original insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.

Model:
The deliberate exaggeration of _________________________________ serves to express ____________
________________________. Through this heightened image, the reader_________________________.
Example:
From Robert Frosts poem, After Apple-Picking
For I have had too much
Of apple-picking: I am overtired
Of the great harvest I myself desired.
There were ten thousand fruit to touch,
Cherish in hand, lift sown, and not let fall.

In Frosts poem, After Apple-Picking, the speaker deliberately exaggerates the number of apples in
order to emphasize his shift from excitement and desire to his extreme weariness during the harvest. The
speaker has had too much as a result of the ten thousand fruit to touch. Through this image, the
reader comes to understand that the speaker is not only weary of body, but is also overtired in spirit as
well.
[Example taken from A Contemporary Guide to Literary Terms by Edwin J. Barton and Glenda A. Hudson (Houghton Mifflin, 2004)]

Symbol

Identify both the concrete and abstract meanings of the symbol and provide the context in which it
appears in the text.
Connect the symbol to specific characters in this text. Avoid generic commentary. Provide an
original insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.

Model:
The ________________________________ symbolizes ________________________________
concrete
abstract
for _______________________________ because it represents __________________________
_________________________Through this symbol, the author ____________________________.
Example:
The pearls Daisy Buchanan rescues from the trash and subsequently wears around her neck symbolize
her ultimate choice of money over love because they represent Toms vast wealth (they were valued at
three hundred and fifty thousand dollars) in contrast to Gatsbys avowal of love, symbolized by the letter
she wouldnt let go of. By highlighting Daisys donning of the pearls, Fitzgerald comments on the
shallow and misguided values of the 20th Century American, one who pursues the elusive dream instead
of concrete relationships.

Detail

Identify the detail and provide the context in which it appears in the text.
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Describe the function of the inclusion of that detail in this text. Avoid generic commentary.
Provide an original insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.

Model:
The detail of _____________________________________________ conveys _____________________
___________________ since/because/in that ______________________________________________.
The author wants the reader to see ______________________________ because/so that ____________
Example:
The detail of the string of polo ponies Tom Buchanan brought east with him from Chicago conveys his
vast wealth and hedonism. Moving the ponies is expensive and unnecessary, suggesting that Tom does
not need to concern himself with cost but does concern himself with appearing more powerful than his
peers. Fitzgerald wants the reader to see Tom as spoiled and self-indulgent so that Tom will appear
distasteful even before the reader learns of his current affair.

Allusion

Identify the allusion (indirect reference by an author to another text, historical occurrence, or to
myths and legends) and provide the context in which it appears in the text.
Describe the function of the allusion in this text. Avoid generic commentary. Provide an original
insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.

Model:
The author or speaker alludes to ________________________________________ in order to
______________________________________________. Through this reference, the reader connects
___________________________ to _________________ and can more fully understands the authors
purpose to _________________________________________.
Example:
For us, they fought and died, in places like Concord and Gettysburg; Normandy and Khe Sahn.
Barack Obama
Obamas allusions to Concord, Gettysburg, Normandy, and Khe Sahn offer examples of struggles that
Americans have faced in the past which parallel the unique struggles Americans believe they are currently
facing with our economy, environment, and world conflict. Even though the references are meant to show
these struggles, the presidents desired effect is to provide hope and resolve to the listener since these
battles resulted in victories for America. Citizens are reminded that they can be victorious in our modern
struggles.
Examples of generic commentary: gets the readers attention, draws the reader in, etc.

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Writing Errors to Avoid

#1: Incorrect Punctuation of Two Independent Clauses

(An independent clause has a subject and a verb and can stand alone as a sentence.)
Good writers know that correct punctuation is important to writing clear sentences. If you misuse a mark of
punctuation, you risk confusing your reader and appearing careless. Notice how the placement of commas
significantly affects the meaning of these sentences:
Mr. Jones, says Ms. Moore, is a boring old fool.
Mr. Jones says Ms. Moore is a boring old fool.
Writers often combine independent clauses in a single compound sentence to emphasize the relationship between
ideas. The punctuation of compound sentences varies depending upon how you connect the clauses.
The rules are:
(a)
Separate independent clauses with a comma when using a coordinating conjunction (and, but, or, for, nor, so,
yet).
(b)
Separate independent clauses with a semi-colon when no coordinating conjunction is used.
(c)
Separate independent clauses with a semi-colon when using a conjunctive adverb (e.g., however, therefore,
thus, consequently, finally, nevertheless).
Examples of Correct Punctuation, Rule a:
1. We all looked worse than usual, for we had stayed up studying for the exam.
2. This room is unbelievably hot, and I think that I am going to pass out.
Examples of Correct Punctuation, Rule b:
1. We all looked worse than usual; we had stayed up all night studying for the exam.
2. This room is unbelievably hot; I think I am going to pass out.
Examples of Correct Punctuation, Rule c:
1. We all looked worse than usual; however, we were relieved we had studied.
2. The discussion is really interesting; nevertheless, I think I am going to pass out.

#2: Misuse of the Apostrophe

Use the apostrophe to indicate possession and to mark omitted letters in contractions. Writers often misuse apostrophes when
forming plurals and possessives. The basic rule is quite simple: use the apostrophe to indicate
possession, not a plural. Yes, the exceptions to the rule may seem confusing: hers has no apostrophe, and it's is not possessive.
Nevertheless, with a small amount of attention, you can learn the rules and the exceptions of apostrophe use.
Possessives
Form the possessive case of a singular noun by adding 's (even if the word ends in s).
Hammurabi's code, Dickens's last novel, James's cello

Form the possessive case of a plural noun by adding an apostrophe after the final letter if it is an s or by adding 's if
the final letter is not an s.
the students' desks, the children's toys

Remember: the apostrophe never designates the plural form of a noun. A common error is the use of the apostrophe to
form a non-possessive plural. Compare the following correct sentences:
The student's disk was missing.
Several students' disks were missing.
The students searched for their missing disks.

Possessive pronouns, such as yours, hers, its, and ours, take no apostrophe.
The decision is yours.

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Indefinite pronouns, such as anyone, everybody, no one, somebody, use the singular possessive form.
Somebody's dog stayed in our suite last night.

Contractions
The apostrophe is used to mark omitted letters in contractions.
(Note: contractions are often considered too informal for academic writing.)

Avoid the dreadful it's/its confusion.

It's is a contraction for it is. It's is never a possessive.
Its is the possessive for it.
As Professors Strunk and White remind us in Elements of Style,
It's a wise dog that scratches its own fleas (1).

#3: Pronoun Problems

Pronouns are useful as substitutes for nouns, but a poorly chosen pronoun can obscure the meaning of a sentence.
Common pronoun errors include:
Unclear Pronoun Reference
A pronoun must refer to a specific noun (the antecedent). Ambiguous pronoun reference creates confusing sentences.
Poor Example: Writers should spend time thinking about their arguments to make sure they are not superficial.
(Unclear antecedent: who or what are superficial?)
If a whiff of ambiguity exists, use a noun:
A key difference between banking crises of today and yesterday is that todays crises have greater global impact.
Vague Subject Pronoun
Pronouns such as it, there, and this often make weak subjects.
Poor Example: Pope Gregory VII forced Emperor Henry IV to wait three days in the snow at Canossa before granting him an
audience. It was a symbolic act. (To what does it refer? Forcing the Emperor to wait? The waiting? The
granting of the audience? The audience? The entire sentence?)
Use a pronoun as subject only when its antecedent is crystal clear.
Aristotle and the Appeals of Rhetoric
Logos, Ethos, Pathos
Logical Appeals- (logos)
Logical appeals are the reasons given for supporting a particular argument. Examples of logical appeals include the use of
evidence, facts and figures, references to current events, and testimony. Effective logical appeals depend upon the ability of the
writer to connect the multiple examples of support to each other in meaningful ways.
Incorporate inductive or deductive reasoning
Allude to history, great literature, or mythology
Provide reputable testimony
Provide evidence, facts
Cite authorities
Quote research or statistics
Theorize cause and effect
Argue that something meets a given definition
Example:

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We gotta get these nets. Theyre coated with an insecticide and cost between $4 and $6. You need about $10, all told, to get them
shipped and installed. Some nets can cover a family of four. And they last four years. If we can cut the spread of disease, 10 bucks
means a kid might get to live. Make it $20 and more kids are saved.
Taken from Rick Reillys Nothing But Nets

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Ethical Appeals- (ethos)

Ethical appeals are attempts by the speaker/writer to make connections to the audience by appearing knowledgeable,
reasonable, ethical, etc. A writer is able to make an effective argument only when readers have no reason to doubt the writers
character on a given topic. Writers who fail to acknowledge other points of view, exaggerate, or assume a tone of disrespect
have difficulty making ethical appeals to readers.
Make the audience believe the writer is trustworthy
Demonstrate the writer carefully conducted research
Demonstrate that the writer knows the audience and respects them
Convince the audience that the writer is reliable and knowledgeable
Use first person plural pronouns (we and us) to establish a relationship with the audience
Example:
My Fellow Clergymen:
While confined here in Birmingham city jail, I came across your recent statement calling my present activities unwise
and untimely,since I feel that you are men of genuine good will and that your criticisms are sincerely set forth, I
want to answer your statement in what I hope will be patient and reasonable terms.
Taken from Martin Luther King, Jr. -- Letter from Birmingham Jail
Emotional Appeals- (pathos)
Emotional appeals reach the reader by activating the readers emotions. Often writers make emotional appeals by including
sensory details, especially imagery. Calling upon the readers pleasant memories, nostalgia, anger, or fear are frequent
emotional appeals found in argumentative texts. The presence of charged words (references to religious doctrine or patriotic
ideas) in an argumentative text represents an attempt at an emotional appeal by the writer.
Include language that involves the senses and heightens emotional responses
Reference bias or prejudice
Include a personal anecdote
Appeal to the audiences physical, psychological, or social needs
Create figurative language
Experiment with informal language
Example:
Put it this way: Lets say your little Justins Kickin Kangaroos have a big youth soccer tournament on Saturday. There
are 15 kids on the soccer team, 10 teams in the tourney. And there are 20 of these tournaments going on all over town.
Suddenly, every one of these kids gets chills and fever, then starts throwing up and then gets short of breath. And in 10
days, theyre all dead of malaria.
Taken from Rick Reillys Nothing But Nets

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David Joliffes Rhetorical Framework

Exigence
Audience
Purpose
Logos
Ethos

Pathos

Organization/Whole Text Structure

Diction

Syntax

Imagery

Figurative
Language

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RUBRIC (GENERIC) FOR AP ASSIGNMENTS

9:
Papers earning a score of 9 meet the criteria for 8 papers and, in addition, are especially full or apt in their analysis,
sophisticated in their explanation and argument, or impressive in their control of language.
8:
Papers earning a score of 8 respond to the prompt effectively, answering all parts of the question completely and
demonstrating clear understanding of the passage; recognizes complexities of attitude or tone; demonstrates stylistic maturity
through an effective command of sentence structure, diction, and organization; insightful thesis clearly linked to the evidence
or assertions presented; seamless incorporation of quotations; consistent focus
7:
Papers earning a score of 7 fit the description of 6 papers, but provide a more complete analysis, explanation, or
argument OR demonstrate a more mature prose style.
6:
Papers earning a score of 6 respond to the prompt adequately, accurately answering all parts of the question and using
appropriate evidence, but they are less fully or effectively developed than essays in the top range;. discussion of techniques
used in a passage may be less thorough and less specific; well-written in an appropriate style, but with less maturity than the
top papers; demonstrates sufficient control over the elements of writing to present the writers ideas clearly; clear, accurate
thesis
5:
Papers earning a score of 5 analyze, explain, or argue in response to the prompt, but do so unevenly, inconsistently, or
insufficiently. The writing may contain lapses in diction or syntax, but it usually conveys the writers ideas. May be simplistic,
imprecise, overly general or vague. Organization is attempted, but not fully realized.
4:
Papers earning a score of 4 respond to the prompt inadequately. They may analyze or explain incorrectly, merely
paraphrase, or offer little discussion. The prose generally conveys the writers ideas but may suggest immature control of
writing. The writer attempts to answer the question, but does so either inaccurately or without the support of specific,
persuasive evidence; may misinterpret or misrepresent the passage.
3:
Papers earning a score of 3 meet the criteria for a score of 4, but demonstrate less success in analyzing, explaining,
arguing, or providing specific textual evidence. They are less consistent in controlling the elements of writing.
2:
Papers earning a score of 2 demonstrate little success in analyzing, explaining, or arguing. They may misunderstand
the prompt or the passage, offer vague generalizations, substitute simpler tasks such as summarizing the passage or simple
listing rhetorical strategies. The prose often demonstrates consistent weaknesses in writing.
may be unacceptably brief or poorly written on several counts; response lacks clarity
1:
Papers earning a score of 1 meet the criteria for a 2 but are undeveloped, especially simplistic in their explanation
and /or argument, or weak in their control of language.
0:
_:

Indicates an on-topic response that receives no credit, such as one that merely repeats the prompt.
Indicates a blank response or one that is completely off-topic.

8:
6:
4:
2:

Demonstrates competence
Suggests competence
Suggests incompetence
Demonstrates incompetence

5:

Goes in and out like static when youre trying to tune in a radio station

9 = an enhanced eight
7 = an enhanced six
3 = a diminished four
1 = a diminished 2

UPPER HALF PAPERS employ an enriched vocabulary. The writer does the work of guiding the reader through effective
organization and fluid syntax.
LOWER HALF PAPERS demonstrate an impoverished vocabulary. The reader does the work trying to make sense out of
what the writer has written.

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POETRY FOCUS STATEMENTS

DEFINITION:
A one to two-sentence summary of the narrative situation, theme, and tone of a poem.
USE:
As a potential thesis for a free-response poetry question on the AP Literature exam
CRITICAL ATTRIBUTES:
Includes the title of the poem and the name of the poet
Is written in literary present tense
Specifies the narrative situation of the poem
Includes a thoughtful but concise indication of theme
Identifies the tone(s) of the poem. These may be differing but complementary. Shifts in tone may
be indentified as well.
The syntax of poetry focus statements is compound or complex because you are addressing both
the literal (the narrative situation) and the thematic.

DIRECTIONS:
1

Draw a straight line under the literal part of the statement. It should be subordinated to the thematic.
That is, it should be found in the dependent clause.

Draw a squiggly line under the thematic part of the statement. It should be found in the main or
independent clause.

Articulate yourself in a scholarly manner. See Verbs for Literary Analysis and Tone Words in the
Yellow Pages.

Model:
Title

Poet

Tone(s)

In Sonnet 29, William Shakespeare creates a depressed and despairing speaker who
Narrative Situation

serendipitously reflects upon the love of a close friend in order to prove to the reader that
Theme

no matter how difficult life becomes, we can be content in the blessings of love.

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GLOSSARY OF LITERARY AND RHETORICAL TERMS

TERM
Ad hominem

DEFINITION

EXAMPLE

DEFINITION

EXAMPLE

Adjective
Adverb
Aestheticism
Allegory
Alliteration
Allusion
Ambiguity
Anachronism
Anadiplosis
Analogy
Anaphora
Anecdote
Antagonist
Antecedent
Anti-hero
Antithesis
Appeal to authority
Apostrophe
Aphorism
Archetype
TERM

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Argument
Aside
Assonance
Asyndeton
Ballad
Bildungsroman
Blank verse
Canon
Catharsis
Characterization
Chiasmus
Circular argument
Claim
Classical
Clause
Climax
Colloquial(ism)
Comedy
Comic relief
Conceit
Concession
Conflict
TERM

DEFINITION

EXAMPLE

Conjunction
Connotation
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Consonance
Counterargument
Couplet
Denotation
Denouement
Deus ex machine
Dialect
Dialogue
Diction
Didactic
Dramatic Monologue
Dystopia
Elegiac
Elegy
Elision/Epenthesis
Enjambment
Epic
Epigram
Epigraph
Epistrophe
TERM

DEFINITION

EXAMPLE

Epitaph
Epithet
Ethos
Evidence
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Euphemism
Exposition
Extended metaphor
External conflict
Fallacy
Falling action
Farce
Fiction
Figurative language
Flashback
Flashforward
Foil character
Foreshadowing
Free verse
Genre
Gothic
Hubris
Hyperbole
TERM

DEFINITION

EXAMPLE

Hypophora
Idiom
Imagery
Inference
In medias res
Innuendo
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Internal conflict
Intertextuality
Inversion
Irony
Jargon
Juxtaposition
Litotes
Local color
Loose sentence
Lyric
Magical realism
Malapropism
Metaphor
Meter
Metonymy
Minimalism
TERM

DEFINITION

EXAMPLE

Mood
Motif
Myth
Narrative
Narrative poem
Narrator
Naturalism
Nemesis
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Non sequitur
Octave
Onomatopoeia
Oxymoron
Paradox
Parallelism
Parody
Pastoral
Pathos
Pedantic
Periodic sentence
Persona
Personification
Point of view
TERM

DEFINITION

EXAMPLE

Polysyndeton
Protagonist
Quatrain
Realism
Rebuttal
Refutation
Repetition
Reversal
Rhetoric
Rhetorical question
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Rhyme
Rhyme scheme
Romance
Romanticism
Sarcasm
Satire
Sestet
Setting
Simile
Short story
Slant rhyme
Soliloquy
TERM

DEFINITION

EXAMPLE

Sonnet
Stanza
Stream of consciousness
Syllogism
Symbol
Synecdoche
Syntax
Tautology
Thesis
Tone
Theme
Tragedy
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Tragic flaw
Tragicomedy
Transcendentalism
Understatement
Unreliable narrator
Voice
Zeugma

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PERSONAL VOCABULARY LIST

WORD

DEFINITION

CONTEXT

DEFINITION

CONTEXT

1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
11
12
13
14
15
16
17
18
19
20
21
WORD

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23
24
25
26
27
28
29
30
31
32
33
34
35
36
37
38
39
40

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Editing Symbols and Abbreviations

In the following chart, Ive included a list of symbols and abbreviations that I may use in evaluating your
writing; you should also use them during peer editing activities.
Transpose elements (Switch words or phrases)
Delete
Begin new paragraph
No new paragraph (Connect to preceding paragraph.)
Insert (a missing word, phrase, or punctuation mark)
Close space (Join two words into one.)
,
p.
Agr
Awk
Frag
R-O or CS
Rep
||
SP
T
V
WW
PWC
GWC
DEV
U

T.W. or T.S.
LOG
TAG
QS
TE
COM
So?

Superfluous Comma (Delete comma.)

Incorrect or missing punctuation
Agreement problem: subject/verb or pronoun/antecedent
Awkward expression or construction (of phrase or sentence)
Fragment
Run-on sentence (CS refers to a Comma Splice, a run-on created by
separating two independent clauses with only a comma)
Unnecessary Repetition
Problem in Parallel Form (of phrases, etc.)
Spelling Error (This includes incorrect use of homonyms.)
Verb Tense problem
Weak Verb (Improve Verb Choice)
Wrong Word (including a word form that does not exist)
Poor Word Choice
Good Word Choice
Develop Idea/Claim with Specifics
Unclear - indicates that the meaning of the phrase or sentence is unclear in
meaning OR Unfounded indicates that interpretation that cannot be
substantiated by the text
Transition Word / Sentence - indicates need for a smoother transition by
using a key transitional phrase / sentence
Illogical Reasoning (or a logical progression that has not been fully
formed)
Title, Author, Genre (These should be included in the introduction of a
timed writing.)
Incomplete or Poor Quotation Sandwich
Insufficient or Missing Textual Evidence
Insufficient Commentary Link to Meaning has not been fully formed
So What? -- a statement within the work (or discussion of a particular
piece of evidence) lacks clear significance
Indicates an insightful and/or well-articulated statement
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Advanced Placement Multiple Choice Practice Tests
Passage One
APMC
Example
Overall
32/55 =
58%

Passage Two

Passage Three

Passage Four

Passage Five

10/13 = 77%
9/10 = 90%
6/11 = 55%
4/12 = 33%
3/9 = 33%
Prose
Poetry
Prose
Poetry-sonnet
Prose-drama
19th Cent.
20th Cent.
21st Cent.
17th Cent.
21st Cent.
Notes:
Ran out of time at the end and got tired. Tried to read the questions ahead of time on
Passage Three. Didnt seem to make that much difference. Really liked the poem on
Passage Two. Need to review poetic devices more. Need to budget time.

APMC #1
Notes:

APMC #2
Notes:

APMC #3
Notes:

APMC #4
Notes:

APMC #5
Notes:

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Advanced Placement English Language Timed Writings
Timed Writing
Example
9/7/15

Timed Writing

Type

Score

Word
Count

Question 3
D.o.S.

415

Type

Score

Word
Count

Notes
Need to write more meaningful commentary after
the examples. Need more apt and specific
examples. Work on fluency and weaving quotes.
Review Yellow Pages examples.

Notes

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