Engineers and Engineerin1
Engineers and Engineerin1
Engineers and Engineerin1
Engineers have become more wanted because technology is advancing in areas such as medicine, communication, and the environment. In the case of the atomic bomb it was necessary to fight the enemy, but having the power to create should not be used to destroy life. Sometimes the things that are created can become an addiction. Engineers must decide whether to create something that could help or destroy the world." Watch your tenses; stay in one tense or the other throughout the essay. You switch back from the past to the present tense intermittantly in this essay, and it is distracting. Also watch the inappropriate and incorrect use of punctuation. There are some places where you need to be more specific, because vagueness in an essay confuses your reader and eventually you will lose them. You make a good moral stand, but make sure your supporting information is enough to back it up. Specify what "responsibilities" should be taken and make sure that you are speaking for yourself and not for others, as you cannot tell how someone else should live or how/what they think.