Critique Paper Sample (Milk Tea Shops)
Critique Paper Sample (Milk Tea Shops)
Critique Paper Sample (Milk Tea Shops)
I. Introduction
While it might sound like a rather odd shade of paint suitable for dental
surgery waiting rooms, it’s actually an incredibly tasty drink that is more like a snack
than a beverage that has something to do with the tapioca balls floating around in
the bottom of the cup. It has been 11 years since milk tea has reached the shores of
the Philippines, and is now having a great support and love from all Filipinos
ensuring that they can find their exact, perfect cup. Many have been debating who
have created this now world-famous drink. Some says the most credible is Liu Han-
Chieh of Chun Shui Tang Teahouse in Taichung in the early 80s where he noted
how the Japanese people enjoyed drinking cold coffee. Despite the conflicts of
where it truly originated, no one can deny the craze and the continuous growth of
For this paper, we have critiqued three milk-tea shops who have been on the
platform for the competing businesses in the milk-tea industry. First, the Macao
Imperial Tea shop who was originally from Macao and have been delighting
customers in China and Vietnam with more than 200 branches; the second is, the
Bon AppeTEA, a unique franchise concept coming from the words combining “bon
appetite” which means “good appetite,” and its main product – the Milk TEA; and
lastly, the Moonleaf Tea Shop, which offers freshly-brewed tea mixed into a variety
of delicious and refreshing concoctions which first started way back in 2010.
out that Macao Imperial Tea Shop is a very known milk tea shop because people line
up just to buy milk tea. Also, they are prominent with their best seller cream cheese
flavors and other flavors with soft and smooth sinkers and even complimented with
classy and convenient packaging for the costumers. Experiencing the Macao
prices.
and affordable milk tea. They have the flavors that people can easily understand
what’s the content of the milk tea and in terms of packaging they have the simple but
In Bon AppeTEA, it feels cooling and refreshing and they have different
unusual flavors. For a first timer they will be a bit confuse because of the flavors.
Staffs will also ask the customers what do they prefer as they set the sugar level for
every milk tea. In addition, they have simple packaging and a regular price that
people can afford and has continued to piqued the interest of people with its frequent
promos to offer.
Three milk tea shops in the Paseo De Sta. Rosa (Moonleaf Tea Shop, Bon
AppeTEA, and Macao Imperial Tea Shop) were critiqued based on their product
offered – specifically the milk tea beverages, services, their location, packaging, and
prices.
In terms of the location, the Moonleaf Tea shop is in a secluded place wherein
there are only a few customers passing by. However, when you enter the shop, the
interior design is very pleasing to the eyes, with the set-up of the chairs and tables
On the other hand, Bon AppeTEA is located at the center of the Paseo De
Sta. Rosa, on the left side of the National Book Store, attracting a wide range of
customers. However, the set-up inside the shop is somehow small and causes
The Macao Imperial Tea shop who recently opened its new branch in the Sta.
Rosa Vista Mall, has a good strategic location and a nice interior set-up. It’s spacious
In terms of its prices, the three milk-tea shops have values that set their
differences together and subconsciously divide its customers into their socio-
economic statuses. As for the Moonleaf Tea Shop, its prices start at 85 pesos and
above but will not exceed for more than 140 pesos. It’s very affordable, meaning all
Bon AppeTEA has a higher price compared to Moonleaf, with its products
ranging from 95 pesos and sometimes does not even include pearls in its milk-teas.
The Macao Imperial Tea Shop has the most expensive price among all three, with
prices starting from 120 pesos and above and it does not guarantee pearls or the
milk-tea that you prefer and indirectly sets its market only within the average and the
upper class.
Now, let’s move on to the product packaging. Just like the typical milk-tea cup,
Moonleaf’s packaging is not that presentable and eye-catching, and rather employs
a sense of simplicity.
As for the Bon AppeaTEA, it also packages their milk-teas just like the other
milk-tea shops, but sometimes it’s not sealed properly as there are cases
Innovation and variety are what the Macao Imperial Tea Shop aims to be, as
they created specific cups for their beverages that are very eye-catching and gives
off and aesthetic feeling. Asides from the milk-tea, their sodas and special drinks
In terms of the services, Macao Imperial Tea shop uses a device that makes a
‘beeping’ sound meaning that your order is ready and you may claim it. As for the
Moonleaf Tea shop, there are board games, cards, guitars and ukulele that is
available to be use by its customers. The Bon AppeTEA shops offers books and
magazines, and free wi-fi that is a trend among its customers since the shop is jam-
IV. Conclusion
Each shop has its varying strengths and edges over the other. After
comparing and weighing which one is superior among the others, we think in overall,
there are no one to consider that truly excels. In terms of location and packaging,
we’ll have to say it’s a point for Macao Imperial Tea shop. As for the price, Moonleaf
Tea shop has its edge on this as they offer very affordable prices with quality
products and for services, it’s a point for the Bon AppeTEA shop.
In terms of their tastes, we did not include it as we believe that each one of us
have varying tastes and may differ from one another. If we put our opinions and
thoughts about the tastes or who has the best milk tea to offer, then we’ll be saying
Different milk tea shops have their own unique way of selling their products.
Their strategy and techniques will determine their sales and number of customers
that will continuously support their products and services. As customers, Filipinos are
not only after the product itself but also on how the store values them by giving a
good customer service. Based on all the information we gathered, these are the
following recommendations:
For Moonleaf Tea Shop, the store should be known by all the people by
simply posting advertisements on their social media accounts or giving flyers around
the Paseo De Sta. Rosa. They should also innovate new products that will catch the
attention of the potential customers. When putting up a milk tea shop, they should be
For Bon AppeTEA, they should always make sure that the product is sealed
so it won’t cause any trouble for the customer, because sometimes there’s a leakage
on the product. In addition, they should also try to expand the space of the store
giving promos because it really attracts the customers especially the students.
For Macao Imperial Tea Shop, the store should include board games, a free
wifi or other things that will entertain the customer while waiting for their orders. The
place was already good and accommodating but the price is a bit high. So, we
recommend that the store should also include promos and discounts to gain more
customers.
Overall, every manager in each store should be wise and innovative. Every
store should provide the best customer service like short waiting time, providing
entertainment materials such as board games, cards or a free wifi and of course the
good quality product or drink that will satisfy them and will be their reason to come
back again and will also recommend your store to others. Satisfy not only their 5
VI. Documentation
Bon AppeTEA
Moonleaf Tea Shop
Macao Imperial Tea Shop
Submitted by: John Ryan F. Ello
Jefford Ninolas
Lesly M. Esquilona