What, Why, and How?

11 Timed Writing
Reviewing the elements of an essay
Breaking down a prompt
Creating a rough outline
Managing your time
Practicing
Additional tips
Timed writing checklist
WHAT IS TIMED WRITING?
Also called timed essays, essay exams, or in-class essays, these essays require you to demonstrate
disciplinary knowledge by producing a writing sample within a limited time period. Timed writing
measures your raw writing ability and your skill at thinking under pressure. It also reflects your ability
to quickly recall, synthesize, and analyze detailed material. One of the major skills that is being
tested in a timed writing exam is your ability to write to a prompt. A prompt is simply the exam
question or writing task. In a timed exam, your thesis will generally be your answer to the prompt.

WHY STRENGHTEN THIS SKILL?

Being skilled at timed writing is important because…
 oftentimes when you transfer to another college, you will be required to take a timed essay
placement exam or graduate exit exam, so placing higher will save you time and money spent
on taking additional classes and later enable you to get your degree.

 some large survey courses base the majority of the student grade on in-class timed exams.

 it improves your own mental agility—being able to think quickly and logically is an invaluable
skill.

 in college and in life, you will be required to compose arguments (written and verbal) on the
spot, so the better you are at it, the more convincing and successful you will be.

 American culture highly values polished written skills, so the more adept you are at crafting
well written responses and proposals quickly, you’ll be the one who gets better grades, gets
hired, gets the promotion, and will get more respect due to your effective communication skills.

HOW DO I DO IT?
Timed writing is challenging, so break down the task into manageable stages:

1. Review the elements of an essay (so you are sure to craft a good one).

2. Know how to successfully break down a prompt.

3. Create a rough outline.

4. Have a time management plan.

5. Practice!
 Reviewing the elements of an essay
Writing in a timed situation can be stressful so go in having a clear and confident sense of your goal:
to produce a focused, organized, developed, proofread essay. Even in a timed situation, you will be
expected to write an essay with the standard essay elements so here is a review of what to include:

FOCUS-THESIS: ORGANIZATION:
One of the major skills that is being tested in a timed Considering both your argument and your allotted
writing exam is your ability to write to the prompt. writing time, select an appropriate number of main
Your thesis will be your direct answer or response to points you can adequately develop, and present them
the question or task in the prompt. in a clear order, so the essay proceeds smoothly and
logically from one point to the next. Be sure to put
A thesis needs to be arguable (contain your opinion). your main supporting points into separate paragraphs,
so there is a clear beginning, middle and end as
No opinion—not a thesis: In Sarah Katin’s “Naked,” opposed to a long, uninterrupted block of text. Here
the narrator tells of her uncomfortable experience in a are some common methods of organization:
Korean bathhouse.
o Climax: Present your ideas so they build to a
Arguable thesis with opinion: In Sarah Katin’s climax, ending with your most dramatic
“Naked,” the narrator’s experience in a Korean examples.
bathhouse reveals that American notions of o Complexity: Start with simpler ideas and build
nudity are unhealthy and harmfully produce feelings to more complex ones.
of shame and this distances women from each other. o Familiarity: Start with more familiar ides and
move towards newer ones.
You will want to make your thesis immediately clear to o Audience appeal: Start with “safe” ideas and
your reader, so it is best to put your thesis statement move to more challenging ones.
in your introductory paragraph. Then stay focused on o Chronological: Present ideas in the time order
proving that thesis throughout the essay. Anything in which they occurred.
that does not directly prove your thesis and respond o Comparison/contrast: Examine the similarities
to the prompt should not be included in the essay. and/or differences between two or more items.

DEVELOPMENT: SENTENCE CRAFTING:

Avoid a series of skimpy paragraphs that are too short In timed writing, you won’t have a lot of time to spend
to concretely prove your points. Each of your body worrying over the spelling of a word or the placement
paragraphs should be lead with strong topic of a comma. However, you also don’t want to turn in a
sentences that are then proven with evidence and piece of writing that contains excessive grammatical,
analysis. Ask yourself, “How do I know this is true?” punctuation, and/or spelling errors. Therefore, set
time aside at the end to proofread your essay.
Include the elements of the PIE paragraph approach:
(1) If writing by hand, you can double space
(P)oint: begin each paragraph with an arguable topic so when you proofread and want to cross
sentence that directly supports your thesis. out confusing sentences or misspellings or
(I)nformation: provide clear and convincing evidence add left out words or examples, you will
to illustrate the point in the form of examples, have room and won’t risk confusing your
quotes and paraphrases from the text, facts, reader.
illustrations, personal knowledge, personal (2) Read carefully to catch confusing
experiences, etc. sentences, errors in subject-verb
(E)xplanation: include your own explanation of the agreement, verb tenses, run together
significance of the point and information in sentences, etc., and look for opportunities
the paragraph. So what can we learn from to join sentences.
this? So what is the significance? So what (3) If you discover a place where more
are the larger implications or impact? concrete detail is needed, add examples
and evidence as needed.
 Breaking down a prompt

In timed writing, you will be given a prompt. Be sure to use techniques to effectively break down and
fully understand that prompt before you begin the writing task. This will ensure you do not write off
topic or miss important elements of the assignment.

It is essential to understand and identify key words within any writing prompt. Here are some
commonly used command verbs used in prompts. It is not guaranteed these words will be used, but
if they are, be sure you understand what each command is asking you to do:

Key Words Commonly Used in Writing Assignments/Prompts:

Describe: Write about the subject so the reader can easily visualize it; tell how it looks or happened. Use
adjectives, adverbs and descriptive language to paint a mental image for you reader.
Compare: Analyze the similarities and the differences between two or more items.
Contrast: Look only at the differences between two or more items.
Explain: Give the meaning of something often answering the question “why”?
Discuss: Provide a broader range of possibilities that critically explore your topic.
Argue: Present a point of view or take a position and prove it. Don’t be concerned about taking the “right”
or “wrong” position; just support a position soundly and consistently.
Analyze: Break the subject down into parts, and explain and critically examine the various parts.
Criticize/Critique: Point out both the positive and negative aspects of the topic.
Evaluate: Give your opinion of the value of the subject; discuss its strengths and weaknesses.
Illustrate: Make the point or idea by giving examples.
Trace: Tell about an event or process in chronological (time) order.
Prove: Show that something is true by giving facts or logical reasons.
State: Give the main points in a brief, clear form.

STEPS TO BREAK DOWN A PROMPT

Since you have a limited amount of time, do not waste any of it writing off topic. Follow exactly what
was asked in the prompt. Try this approach:

(1) Read the prompt carefully and several times: do not “rush in” and start writing as this puts you
in danger of writing off topic or missing important parts of the prompt. Take a moment and read
the prompt through several times.

(2) Sum up the topic in a few words: What is the focus of the prompt? Narrow down the focus of
the prompt in a word or two to help you mentally focus as well.

(3) Circle and/or underline the key words: Circle or underline the command verbs or question
words that are telling you do something or asking you about something.

(4) Identify and count the required steps in the writing task: this is a crucial step in timed writing.
You don’t want to overlook any parts of the question and get little to no credit for your work as a
result. Number the parts of the prompt you need to address in your essay and oftentimes you can
even use this as an informal outline for the essay.
 PRACTICE Use the method of breaking down a prompt

STEPS TO BREAK DOWN A PROMPT:

(1) Read the prompt carefully and several times
(2) Sum up the topic in a few words
(3) Circle and/or underline the key words
(4) Identify and count the required steps in the writing task

PROMPT:
In Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass, Frederick Douglass contends “there can be no freedom
without education.” Citing specific examples from the text, discuss this concept and examine how
Douglass is a testament to this idea. Then explain how this concept can be applied today and what
we can learn by applying Douglass’ words to a modern day example.

(1) Read the prompt carefully and several times

(2) Sum up the topic in a few words: _________________________________________________

(3) Circle and/or underline the key words

(4) Identify and count the required steps in the writing task

Creating a rough outline

Outlining is the road map for the essay. And we all know that when you are rushing to get
somewhere quickly, it is easier to get lost. Outlines make sure that you end up where you intended.
For timed writing, you’ll make the most informal kind of outline in which you jot down your main points
and possible supporting evidence. This kind of outline is for you only, and you don’t need to worry
about making it more comprehensive if it does the job for you.

PRACTICE Use the Douglass prompt you just broke down and
create a rough outline for it.

Possible thesis:

Main supporting point: Main supporting point:

Supporting evidence: Supporting evidence:

Main supporting point: Main supporting point:

Supporting evidence: Supporting evidence:

 Managing your time
Since taking a timed exam puts you in the situation of having a limited amount of time to create a
focused, organized, well supported essay, you better have a clear plan of how you will use your
allotted time before beginning the exam. Suggested breakdown of time:

10-15% of time: Prewriting: (1) Read the prompt carefully, circling key words, counting parts
(2) Make a rough outline to determine your thesis, main
supporting points and strongest evidence.

70-80% of time: Write the essay: (3) Write your essay following the outline.
(4) Skip lines in case you want to make some changes when
you’re proofreading after you complete the essay.

10-15% of time: Proofreading: (5) Proofread your essay carefully adding missed evidence,
catching misspellings, putting in left out words, revising
confusing sentences, joining sentences, etc. Wait until the
end to proofread. Focusing on sentence-level concerns as
you compose the essay will slow you down too much and
potentially sacrifice essay content.

Practicing

We all know we are better at something when we practice. Were you a good driver the first time you
got behind the wheel? If you’ve played a sport or an instrument over the years, how were your skills
when you first started? The same is true for timed writing. The more you practice, the better, more
confident, and more accomplished you become.

Also, when you have a timed written exam coming up, you can ask your teacher for a practice prompt
or you can create one yourself. The best preparation you can do is to take a practice timed exam on
the topic you are being tested on. Also, if you take a practice exam ahead of time, you can even
make an appointment with your instructor to go over the practice exam and get valuable advice and
feedback you can then directly apply on the graded exam.

Here are some practice prompts:

Prompt—English 100 in-class essay (30 minutes)

In his book, Jim Rogers explores the issue of music file sharing on the internet and he looks at how
the record companies have tried to sue individuals, web sites, and internet service providers for
copyright infringement. Do you feel any of these groups should be held financially responsible for
sharing music? Why or why not? Do you feel anyone is harmed by music file sharing?
Prompt—English 846 midterm (90 minutes)
Analyzing their book YouTube, describe three moral or ethical concerns that Jean Burgess and
Joshua Green address about YouTube. What are the authors’ views about these concerns?
Respond to and analyze each of these concerns giving your opinion on each. Finally, looking at
these concerns together, explain how you feel this does or should shape the management and future
of YouTube.

Prompt—English 110 midterm (75 minutes)

J.T. Rogers’ play The Overwhelming is set during the 1994 Rwandan genocide of the Tutsis by the
Hutus. Examine why you think the playwright decided to tell this tragic story of an African country
through this family of Americans. Also, why construct the characters that he did: the middle-aged
college professor trying to publish, his 17 year old son who just lost his mother, and his second wife,
a writer and an African-American woman? Examine how the use of these American characters affect
and shape the larger story being told.

Prompt—History 100 practice midterm (75 minutes)

“History repeats itself.

Has to.
Nobody listens.”
--Steve Turner
A famous maxim says that those who fail to remember and learn from the events of history—
economic failures, wars, injustices, strife—are doomed to repeat them. By learning from historical
events, by listening to the message of history, a nation or people can avoid repeating the errors of the
past. Identify one such significant past event that has been covered in the reading, discuss its effects
and explain why we should remember it.

Prompt—English 846 Final exam (2.5 hours)

Select three (3) of the authors and texts we have read this semester and examine how each author
argues that greed and materialism function in our lives in the U.S. Explain who is mainly guilty of
greed and who is most affected and how. Finally, explain what you feel, and analyze the larger
impact of your views.

Prompt— English 100 Final exam (2.5 hours)

Compare the different ways that four of the authors that we have read this semester used activism to
change their current system and to bring about social change, and explain what we can learn about
effective approaches through this comparison. Finally, argue which of the four you feel was the most
successful as a revolutionary and as you make your case, be sure to define "revolutionary" and
"success" according to you, and explain the implications and importance of your findings.

Prompt— English 110 Final exam (2.5 hours)

Select three (3) of the authors and texts we have read this semester (one poem, one short story, and
one play), and compare the characters the authors have created in order to examine the pressures
women in particular face. Describe the gender-based expectations placed on these women and
examine the impact. Finally, examine the connecting patterns that transcend location and time era in
regards to the attitudes toward and treatment of women.
 Additional tips

 Relax: You know what an essay is. You know that it has an introduction, several body
paragraphs, and a conclusion. You have done essays before, and you know what you're doing
now. The more you can take the exam in a calm and confident state, the better you will do.

 Bring a watch or timepiece: You want to be in control of your time and not the other way
around, so be aware of the remaining time throughout the exam. Follow your time
management plan but make adjustments as you see fit. For instance, if you budgeted 15
minutes for proofreading and in your last 15 minutes you don’t yet have a conclusion, donate 5
minutes of your proofreading time to your conclusion. Be in control of your time so you can be
sure that you complete all your tasks in the time allotted.

 Check out the testing room in advance, if possible: This way, you’ll be better able to judge
the amount of time you need to get there, and you’ll be more familiar with the test setting.

 Get plenty of sleep the previous night: no one does well when sleep deprived. Stay in the
night before an exam, study but you shouldn’t be causing yourself stress by cramming last
minute. Go to bed at a decent hour and be sure to have a healthy meal before the exam.
Being physically prepared will improve your mental preparedness.

 If you are prone to distraction: sit apart from other test takers.

 Listen to music: some can focus better when listening to music. Check with your professor or
the exam proctor ahead of time to see if it’s ok to listen to music using headphones during the
exam.
 Timed writing checklist

Here is a checklist with an overview of the timed writing advice you can review
before taking a timed exam:

Think about focus-thesis: form an arguable thesis that responds directly

to the prompt and stay focused on proving it throughout the essay. Put
your thesis in the introductory paragraph. Anything in the essay that
doesn’t prove the thesis and wasn’t asked about in the prompt is off topic.

Think about organization: choose an appropriate number of main

supporting points you can adequately develop, present them in a logical
order, and put each one into a separate paragraph.

Think about development: create well-developed paragraphs including

the elements of PIE: (P)oint: strong topic sentences, (I)nformation:
convincing evidence, (E)xplanation: your own reasoning and analysis.

Think about sentence crafting: save time at the end to proofread to

correct any grammar, punctuation, or spelling errors and to improve
sentence logic and flow.

Break down the prompt: read it carefully, sum up the topic is a word or
two, underline/circle key words (command and question words), and
number the different parts or tasks. Address all parts in the response.

Create a rough outline before you start writing, so you can stay focused
on what was asked and be sure to address all parts of the prompt.

Make a time management plan dividing your allotted time for three
tasks: 10-15% for prewriting, 70-80% for writing, 10-15% for
proofreading.

Practice writing timed essays to strengthen skills before taking timed

exams for a grade.
 ANSWERS

Possible answers for BREAKING DOWN A PROMPT:

STEPS TO BREAK DOWN A PROMPT:

(1) Read the prompt carefully and several times
(2) Sum up the topic in a few words
(3) Circle and/or underline the key words
(4) Identify and count the required steps in the writing task

(2) Sum up the topic in a few words: TOPIC = FREEDOM THROUGH EDUCATION

In Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass, Frederick Douglass contends “there can be no freedom
without education.” Citing specific examples from the text, (1) discuss this concept and (2) examine
how Douglass is a testament to this idea. Then (3) explain how this concept can be applied today
and (4) what we can learn by applying Douglass’ words to a modern day example.

Possible answers for MAKING A ROUGH OUTLINE:

Possible thesis: Frederick Douglass’s life proves that lack of education can lead to marginalization and
this is still happening today with our urban poor and can be seen here in San Francisco.

Main supporting point: 1) discuss how Douglass’ Main supporting point: (3) explain how
freedom was connected to him becoming educated. poorly funded inner-city schools deny freedom
to the students who have high rates of drop
Supporting evidence: He read The Columbian out, drug use, and incarceration.
Orator and learned of a slave who argued so well his
master set him free. He also learned from Sheridan Supporting evidence: Use personal
a “bold denunciation of slavery and a vindication of knowledge of a news report on students who
human rights.” attended school in San Francisco’s Bayview-
Hunter’s Point.
Main supporting point: (2) examine how
Douglass is a testament to the idea of freedom Main supporting point: (4) what can we
through education. learn? Explain how we have a form of modern-
day slavery as the main victims of the
Supporting evidence: Through his underfunded inner-city schools are blacks and
determination of getting the white neighborhood Latinos.
boys to bring him books, he taught himself to read
and eventually gained his own freedom and then Supporting evidence: Use evidence I
fought for the freedom of others throughout his life remember from reading Jonathan Kozol’s book
as a human rights activist. Savage Inequalities to prove harmful outcomes
of educational inequality and the cycles of
poverty it produces.
 Breaking down the PRACTICE PROMPTS: ANSWERS

STEPS TO BREAK DOWN A PROMPT:

(1) Read the prompt carefully and several times
(2) Sum up the topic in a few words
(3) Circle and/or underline the key words
(4) Identify and count the required steps in the writing task

Prompt—English 100 in-class essay (30 minutes) TOPIC = music file sharing
In his book, Jim Rogers explores the issue of music file sharing on the internet and he looks at how
the record companies have tried to sue individuals, web sites, and internet service providers for
copyright infringement. (1) Do you feel any of these groups should be held financially responsible for
sharing music? Why or why not? (2) Do you feel anyone is harmed by music file sharing?

Prompt—English 846 midterm (90 minutes) TOPIC = 3 moral/ethical YouTube concerns

Analyzing their book YouTube, (1) describe three moral or ethical concerns that Jean Burgess and
Joshua Green address about YouTube. (2) What are the authors’ views about these concerns?
(3) Respond to and analyze each of these concerns giving your opinion on each. Finally, looking at
these concerns together, (4) explain how you feel this does or should shape the management and
future of YouTube.

Prompt—English 110 midterm (75 minutes) TOPIC = use of American characters

J.T. Rogers’ play The Overwhelming is set during the 1994 Rwandan genocide of the Tutsis by the
Hutus. (1) Examine why you think the playwright decided to tell this tragic story of an African country
through this family of Americans. Also, (2) why construct the characters that he did: the middle-aged
college professor trying to publish, his 17 year old son who just lost his mother, and his second wife,
a writer and an African-American woman? (3) Examine how the use of these American characters
affect and shape the larger story being told.

Prompt—History 100 practice midterm (75 minutes) TOPIC = ONE significant past event

“History repeats itself.

Has to.
Nobody listens.”
--Steve Turner
A famous maxim says that those who fail to remember and learn from the events of history—
economic failures, wars, injustices, strife—are doomed to repeat them. By learning from historical
events, by listening to the message of history, a nation or people can avoid repeating the errors of the
past. (1) Identify one such significant past event that has been covered in the reading, (2) discuss
its effects and (3) explain why we should remember it.
 ANSWERS

Prompt—English 846 Final exam (2.5 hours) TOPIC = greed and materialism in 3 texts
Select three (3) of the authors and texts we have read this semester and (1) examine how each
author argues that greed and materialism function in our lives in the U.S. (2) Explain who is mainly
guilty of greed (3) and who is most affected and how. Finally, (4) explain what you feel, and
(5) analyze the larger impact of your views.

Prompt— English 100 Final exam (2.5 hours) TOPIC = activism of 4 authors
(1) Compare the different ways that four of the authors that we have read this semester used
activism to change their current system and to bring about social change, and (2) explain what we
can learn about effective approaches through this comparison. Finally, (3) argue which of the four
you feel was the most successful as a revolutionary and as you make your case, be sure to define
"revolutionary" and "success" according to you, and (4) explain the implications and importance of
your findings.

Prompt— English 110 Final exam (2.5 hours) TOPIC = pressures women face in 3 texts
(1) Select three (3) of the authors and texts we have read this semester (one poem, one short story,
and one play), and (2) compare the characters the authors have created in order to examine the
pressures women in particular face. (3) Describe the gender-based expectations placed on these
women and (4) examine the impact. Finally, (5) examine the connecting patterns that transcend
location and time era in regards to the attitudes toward and treatment of women.