SHS EAPP Qtr.2 - Module 11
SHS EAPP Qtr.2 - Module 11
SHS EAPP Qtr.2 - Module 11
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English
Quarter 2 – Module 11:
Writing Position Papers
Introductory Message
For the facilitator:
Let Us Learn!
Objectives:
Define position paper;
Identify the parts of a position paper;
Employ Hegelian Dialectics in presenting arguments; and
Write position papers.
MELC
Writes various kinds of position papers (CS_EN11/12A-EAPP-
IIa-d-5)
Let Us Try!
GUESSING GAME - Arrange the following scrambled letters that will
unravel a word that is significant and relevant in the Philippines
today.
NILISGLK
ETENAGE PCRNNGYEA
DIOVC IADNPCEM
DLRMUAO RCTNTUIOINS
ETVYPRO
EUNRHG
OLNNIE SCASL
RPUNOTTIISTO
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Let Us Study
How was the activity? Did you like it? The words presented above
are associated with the problems we have in our country. It is good
that you now know these problems because you can use them to finish this
module.
In this section, you learn how to write an effective position paper.
Please remember what you have learned in the previous module.
1. Introduction
can be structured in 1 paragraph with 3 sentences
Sentence 1: peg or present the issue
Sentence 2: provide supporting details and/or background of
the issue
Sentence 3: Present your viewpoint (thesis) about the issue
(affirmative or negative)
2. Body
can be presented in 2 to 3 paragraphs
each paragraph contains 3 to 4 sentences
Supporting Paragraph 2
Sentence 1: present a supporting fact about your viewpoint
Sentence 2: provide supporting details or facts for your
Sentence 1.
Sentence 3: present synthesis of the fact presented.
Opposing Paragraph 3
Sentence 1: present an opposing fact about your viewpoint
Sentence 2: provide supporting details or facts for your
Sentence 1.
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Sentence 3: present synthesis of the fact presented.
Opposing Paragraph 4
Sentence 1: present another supporting fact about your
viewpoint
Sentence 2: provide supporting details or facts for your
Sentence 1.
Sentence 3: present synthesis of the fact presented.
3. Conclusion
Restate your viewpoint and arguments
Suggest a course of action
End with a powerful statement evoking emotion
Note: Therefore, when you write position papers, equip yourself with a
battery of negative and positive claims about your topic. Aside from the
positive and negative claims, you also have to provide evidence or support
in order to make your paper convincing. This will help you formulate your
paragraph following the format given.
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bound by marriage (description). For me, it is completely sound
(stand/thesis).
Around 17 Million children were reported homeless by World Health
Organization (Opposing fact). It was mentioned that 78% of this is caused by
lack of family (support). Hence, approval of this bill is tantamount to
subjecting children to an unnecessary suffering (what it means).
However, around 50 million women were being abused everyday due
to failing marriage (supporting fact). Hunger, fractures and moral damages
were an understatement to their hellish experience with their husband
(support). This means that divorce could be a gateway for a better life for a
wrong decision that was (what it means).
Divorce, though many are against, still remains as one of the volatile
options for curing a failing marriage (restate). It is therefore the
responsibility of our country‘s law-making bodies to fast track the approval
of this bill into law (call to action). There may never be a perfect marriage,
but a peaceful life is achievable when all of us are proactive to the evolving
need of the society (powerful statement).
Let Us Practice
DIRECTIONS: From the article above, find the positive and negative
claims about your topic to see how these details are used in
developing a position paper. Write them in bullet form.
Divorce
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where the DOH takes care to present its policy and regulatory preferences in
coherent, authoritative and understandable language.
We refer here to the announcement last Saturday by Health
Undersecretary, Maria Rosario Vergeire, that the Department of Health will
insist on the wearing of face masks and face shields in the workplace — its
response to the petition of various organizations for the exemption of
workers inside offices and factories from the shield rule.
The new assertiveness of the DOH on a pandemic matter is
noteworthy. The department is the nation‘s primary public health agency,
which has charge and supervision over the entire public health system and
its many facilities and institutions.
Throughout the last seven months, the DOH has not been
forthcoming in leading the fight against Covid-19. Health Secretary
Francisco Duque III has been diffident in assuming his role of chairman of
the Inter-agency Task Force for the Management of Emerging Infectious
Diseases (IATF-EID) to which he has been explicitly designated by executive
order. The secretary has not been the leading voice in the making and
articulation of policy on the health emergency. Instead, it is the military men
such as the twice-infected Interior Secretary Eduardo Año, Peace Process
Adviser Carlito Galvez Jr., and Baguio City Mayor Benjamin Magalong, who
have been doing most of the talking and issuing the orders.
Regarding the regulation on face masks and face shields inside the
workplace, the decision would be comprehensible if the health department is
fully convinced that the mandatory wearing of face masks and face shields
can reduce the risk of contracting Covid-19. However, it should cite the
scientific and research studies that validate the policy.
We noticed also that in announcing the policy, Undersecretary
Vergeire chose to communicate verbally in Filipino — which is not easy to
understand unless fully translated — instead of issuing a full statement on
the policy. Resorting frequently to the use of the polite terms ―Po‖ and ―Ho‖
does not make Filipino easier to comprehend, not to mention inappropriate
and unnecessary.
After researching the subject of face shields or visors online, we were
surprised to discover there is a wide divergence of opinion regarding the
efficacy of face shields in combating the virus. And there is considerable
opposition and resistance to the idea of the government mandating the
wearing of both a face mask and a face shield in offices and factories.
There is a point when coercion becomes counterproductive and
ineffective in trying to subdue a viral outbreak.
Consequently, we believe the DOH was trifle hasty in turning down
outright the petition of the business organizations. It should study the
substance of the proposal of the business sector. It will be far better if our
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health officials spend more time and care in formulating this new health
protocol- to command is easy; to achieve meaningful results is harder.
If health officials were to test these contraptions themselves, they will
discover that wearing a face mask and a face shield together is more
punitive than protective. The Manila Times (September 28, 2020)
Let Us Remember
Direction: Based on the article read, answer the following
questions. Write your answers on a separate sheet.
1. In your own words, what was the writer‘s opinion (thesis) about
wearing of face masks and shields?
3. Using your own words, cite one anti-thesis (opposing idea about the
writer‘s opinion) found in the article.
Let Us Assess
Direction: All over the Philippines, curfew time is being enforced by
the government. Give your ideas about this by filling in the matrix
below. Add two more issues aside from curfew and make your claims. Please
make sure that you provide evidence/support to each of your claims.
1. Curfew Positive
Negative
2. Positive
Negative
3. Positive
Negative
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Let Us Enhance
Direction: Following the format provided, use the details you
researched and provided in the previous activity and write three (3)
position papers based on those three (3) issues. Be guided by the rubrics
provided below.
Criterion Poor Fair Good Excellent
Content and No clear position taken; Position not clearly Clear position taken Takes a strong, well-
Development reasons undeveloped; taken; development is and defined; some defined position; uses
no supporting facts used brief; unrelated, reasons and some at least three
unsupported general details present, but appropriate reasons
statements, reasons, not fully developed. with at least two
50% and details; minimal Counter arguments supporting details for
0 10 20
facts used; addressed each reason. Counter
counterargument not arguments effectively
acknowledgment addressed without
40 45 cutting positions
25 30 35
48 50
Organization Organization and Structure of the paper Structure is mostly Structure of the paper
and structure detract from is not easy to follow. clear and easy to is clear and easy to
Structure message of the writer. Paragraph transitions follow. Paragraph follow. Paragraph
Paragraphs are need improvement. transitions are transitions are logical
disjointed and lack Conclusion is missing, present. Conclusion is and maintain the flow
transition of thoughts or if provided, does logical. of thought throughout
20% not flow from the body the paper. Conclusion
of the paper is logical and flows
0 12 15 from the body of the
5 10 paper.
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Format Paper lacks many Paper follows most Paper follows Paper follows all
elements of correct guidelines. Paper is designated guidelines. designated guidelines.
formatting. Paper is over/ under word Paper is the Paper is the
inadequate/ excessive length. appropriate as appropriate length as
10% length. described for the described for the
assignment. Format assignment. Format
2 is good. enhances readability
0 of the paper.
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Grammar, Paper contains Paper contains few Rules of grammar, Rules of grammar,
Punctuation grammatical, grammatical, usage, and usage and
and Spelling punctuation and spelling punctuation and punctuations are punctuation are
errors. Language uses spelling errors. followed with minor followed; spelling is
jargons or Language lacks clarity errors. Few or no correct. Language is
conversational tone. or includes the use of spelling errors. clear and precise;
20% some jargons or sentence display is
conversational tone. consistently strong,
0 12 15 varied structure.
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20
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Let Us Reflect
Position papers are useful when you are trying to prove or drive a
point. This can be used in debates, speeches, or even in journalism and
research. However, when writing one, you must remember your very aim in
order not to get lost with your arguments. You must drive your point and
convince your readers that your point is viable.
How about you? Did you learn something? Share your thoughts and
comments on a separate sheet of paper.
PROSTITUTION RPUNOTTIISTO
HUNGER EUNRHG
POVERTY ETVYPRO
KILLINGS NILISGLK
LET US TRY
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References
Jessie S. Barrot, and Philippe John F. Sipacio. Communicate Today: English for Academic and
Professional Purposes for Senior High School. Quezon City: C & E Publishing, Inc., 2016.
The Manila Times. "DoH should review order requiring wearing of both face mask and face
shield in workplace." The Manila Times, September 28, 2020.
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