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    Essay 5-Living in A House and Living in An Apartment

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    This 282-word essay compares and contrasts living in an apartment versus a house. It discusses the major differences in expenses, privacy, and services between the two living arrangements. Living in an apartment is generally less expensive than owning a house. Apartments also provide less privacy since they have fewer rooms and no private outdoor space. However, apartments offer more convenient services like nearby supermarkets that save residents time for shopping. In conclusion, each person should carefully consider their options before choosing where to live.

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    This 282-word essay compares and contrasts living in an apartment versus a house. It discusses the major differences in expenses, privacy, and services between the two living arrangements. Living in an apartment is generally less expensive than owning a house. Apartments also provide less privacy since they have fewer rooms and no private outdoor space. However, apartments offer more convenient services like nearby supermarkets that save residents time for shopping. In conclusion, each person should carefully consider their options before choosing where to live.

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    This 282-word essay compares and contrasts living in an apartment versus a house. It discusses the major differences in expenses, privacy, and services between the two living arrangements. Living in an apartment is generally less expensive than owning a house. Apartments also provide less privacy since they have fewer rooms and no private outdoor space. However, apartments offer more convenient services like nearby supermarkets that save residents time for shopping. In conclusion, each person should carefully consider their options before choosing where to live.

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    Essay 5-Living in A House and Living in An Apartment

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    This 282-word essay compares and contrasts living in an apartment versus a house. It discusses the major differences in expenses, privacy, and services between the two living arrangements. Living in an apartment is generally less expensive than owning a house. Apartments also provide less privacy since they have fewer rooms and no private outdoor space. However, apartments offer more convenient services like nearby supermarkets that save residents time for shopping. In conclusion, each person should carefully consider their options before choosing where to live.

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    TOPIC: Living in a house and living in an apartment


    Type: Comparison and contrast
    Require: At least 250 words
    Words: 282 words
    Learner: Do Thi Thanh Thuy
    Class: 2VBA19-02

    There is the truth It is undeniable that people have different/ various opinions
    while choosing living place/ their accommodation/ residental area. Some people
    like living/ would prefer to stay in apartments; nonetheless, others want/ would
    like to live/ reside in private houses. This essay will elaborate on some major
    differences between living in these two places/ areas including expenses,
    privacy, services.

    In the first place, living in a flat people have to pay for their daily expenses (
    cover their living expenses ) less than people who own/ possess a house. The
    most obvious reason is that to become an owner of a private house, they have to
    spend more money compare to owning an apartment. According to a survey
    conducted by Commercial Journal, the average price of a flat is about 1 billion
    Vietnam dong; however, a private house may cost up to several billion Vietnam
    dong now.

    The second discrepancy is the different privacy when living people live in these
    places. Obviously, houses can bring people more private spaces than flats. If
    people live in a house, they will own private places such as a living room,
    bedrooms, working rooms even a garden surrounding their house. Conversely,
    cramped spaces of flats may limit their privacy because they have a few rooms
    and do not have any their own gardens.

    Last but not least, two living places differ in services which are more
    convenient in apartments compared to those in houses. It is undeniable that
    there are more services in apartments such as supermarkets with diversified
    goods on the first floor of the buildings, therefore apartment citizens feel
    comfortable due to/ thanks to saving a significant amount of time for shopping/
    purchasing their favourite items.

    In conclusion/ All things considered, it is evident that there are some obvious/
    noticeable distinctions between living in flats and living in houses. From my
    own perspective, each person should take carefully consideration before opting
    for their living places/ accommodation.

    Nhận xét:

    TIÊU CHÍ CHẤM ĐIỂM NHẬN XÉT CHUNG


    Task fulfillment 9 Bài viết có đề cập được tới một số điểm
    Mức độ hoàn thành tương đồng và khác biệt trong việc sống ở
    nhà riêng và căn hộ chung cư.
    yêu cầu bài viết
    Organization 9 Bài viết có tổ chức ý rõ ràng, chia đoạn và
    Tổ chức bài viết có ý chính của mỗi đoạn. Mỗi đoạn có câu
    topic sentence, có sử dụng được các từ nối
    linking word để liên kết ý. Bài viết có phát
    triển được ý sử dụng dẫn chứng, số liệu cụ
    thể trong các khảo sát của các báo chí.
    Grammar 8 Bài viết có sử dụng đúng và đa dạng các cấu
    Ngữ pháp trúc ngữ pháp. Bài viết có dùng được nhiều
    cấu trúc câu phức như mệnh đề quan hệ,
    mệnh đề danh từ với that, ….
    Vocabulary 8 Bài viết có dùng nhiều từ vựng tốt liên quan
    đến chủ đề. Bài viết có sự đa dạng từ vựng
    Từ vựng tốt. Chú ý các cấu trúc diễn tả sở thích
    Would like to do ST
    Would prefer to do ST
    Stay in = live in = reside in
    Own = possess
    Shopping = purchasing their favourite items
    So = therefore = as a result/ as a
    consequence/ consequently
    Living places = accommodation =
    residential areas
    In conclusion – all things considered

    Tổng điểm 8.5

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