Basic English 2
Basic English 2
Passive Voice
Make a sentence like “I want ice cream now.” It’s clear and straightforward
—you know immediately that the subject, I, wants an object, ice cream.
Now, recast this sentence, flipping it so that the object is in the position of
the subject: “Ice cream is wanted by me now.” It isn’t just longer, but it’s
also more detached, roundabout, and a little awkward, too.
Those two sentences are examples of the active voice and the passive
voice. Certain kinds of writing are best suited for the active voice, while the
passive voice is most appropriate for other kinds of writing. Understanding
how, when, and why to use each is key to being an effective writer and
speaker.
In the passive voice, the action’s target, ball, is positioned first as the focus
of the sentence. The sentence gets flipped, and the subject is now being
acted upon by the verb. In other words, the subject is passive:
Active and passive are the two grammatical voices in English. Neither is
inherently better than the other, but each is suited to certain types of
writing. There’s a reason why news anchors sound detached from the
stories they’re reporting: They often speak using the passive voice. There’s
also a reason why the authors of opinion pieces sound so sure of their
positions: They usually write in the active voice.
Although the idea of teachers telling their students to avoid the passive
voice is repeated so frequently that it feels like a trope, the truth is that the
passive voice does have its applications. We’ll get into those later. For now,
let’s look at how to recognize the active voice and the passive voice in your
writing and in others’ work.
Active voice
As we’ve learned, in the active voice, the sentence’s subject performs the
action. Here are two examples of sentences in the active voice:
No matter what verb you use, structuring your sentence so the subject
performs the verb is writing in the active voice.
The active voice has a direct, clear tone. Use it when you want the reader
to focus on the subject of your sentence and the action it is doing rather
than on the action’s target.
Passive voice
In the passive voice, the action’s target is the focus, and the verb acts upon
the subject. Or, to put it in the passive voice, the subject is acted upon by
the verb. Every sentence in the passive voice contains two verbs:
He will be remembered.
The passive voice has a subtler tone than the active voice has. Sometimes
your writing needs this tone, like when you want your reader to focus on the
action being described or the action’s target rather than on who or what is
performing the action. This is why the passive voice is used in lab reports—
it conveys scientific objectivity by minimizing the focus on the doer of the
action.
Although you may have been told that writing in the passive voice is “bad
writing,” it’s actually more nuanced than that. For most of the writing you
do, like emails, blog posts, and many kinds of essays, the active voice is a
more effective way to communicate the ideas, themes, and facts you’re
expressing.
In these kinds of reports, the passive voice is used to emphasize the action
that occurred rather than the individual or group who committed the action,
often because the perpetrator isn’t known or hasn’t yet been found guilty of
the offense.
There are other kinds of writing where the action itself, rather than the doer
of the action, is the primary focus. These include scientific and, in some
cases, historical reports. These use the passive voice to keep the reader’s
focus on what has happened or is happening. Here are a few examples:
Notice how in both of these sentences, the doer of the action isn’t
mentioned. That’s because it’s either implied or irrelevant. In the first
example, the scientist performing the experiment is the one who placed the
rats in the maze. In the second, those conducting the inauguration
ceremony aren’t relevant to what’s being expressed in the sentence.
See how these sentences feel like they’re dancing around the topic at hand
rather than addressing it head-on? The writer isn’t making a particularly
persuasive argument, but they can make their writing far more impactful by
changing it to the active voice.
See how this version gets right to the point? It makes the writer sound more
confident too, which is a priority in argumentative writing. Let’s try changing
the second sentence to the active voice, which also allows us to condense:
Students pay a significant amount of tuition to the university every year,
and many feel they aren’t receiving the level of service they’re paying for.
Take a look at these examples of both the active and passive voices in
action:
See how with the first pair, the passive voice makes the request feel more
like a suggestion? In the second pair, the passive voice makes the
message sound stilted and formal rather than an urgent exclamation.
Active: I poured the solution into the beaker and heated it to 100℉.
Passive: The solution was poured into the beaker and heated to 100℉.
In the active voice, the sentence’s subject performs the action on the
action’s target. In the passive voice, the target of the action is the main
focus, and the verb acts upon the subject. There are numerous differences
between the two grammatical voices, but the most important is that the
active voice is clearer and more direct, while the passive voice is subtler
and can feel more detached.
Use the active voice in any sentence that focuses on the doer of the action.
Unless the majority of your writing is scientific or reporting incidents
involving unknown perpetrators, most of the sentences you write should be
in the active voice.
The passive voice is meant for sentences where you need to emphasize
the target of an action or the action itself rather than who or what is
performing the verb.
To change the passive voice to the active voice, determine who is actually
performing the action in the sentence, then restructure the sentence so that
the performer is the focus, clearly performing the verb upon the sentence’s
direct object.
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