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    Bai Sua IELTS Writing Task 1

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    The chart shows the percentage of people accessing news through different methods from 1995 to 2025. From 1995 to 2020, the percentage of people getting news through traditional media like television, newspapers, and radio decreased gradually. Television dropped from 70% in 1995 to 55% in 2020, with a brief rise to 58% in 2010. Newspaper and radio both started at around 55% in 1995 and declined to approximately 30% in 2020. In contrast, the percentage accessing news through the internet increased steadily, rising from the lowest in 1995 to the most popular at 40% in 2020 and projected to be the top source at 55% in 2025.

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    The chart shows the percentage of people accessing news through different methods from 1995 to 2025. From 1995 to 2020, the percentage of people getting news through traditional media like television, newspapers, and radio decreased gradually. Television dropped from 70% in 1995 to 55% in 2020, with a brief rise to 58% in 2010. Newspaper and radio both started at around 55% in 1995 and declined to approximately 30% in 2020. In contrast, the percentage accessing news through the internet increased steadily, rising from the lowest in 1995 to the most popular at 40% in 2020 and projected to be the top source at 55% in 2025.

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    The chart shows the percentage of people accessing news through different methods from 1995 to 2025. From 1995 to 2020, the percentage of people getting news through traditional media like television, newspapers, and radio decreased gradually. Television dropped from 70% in 1995 to 55% in 2020, with a brief rise to 58% in 2010. Newspaper and radio both started at around 55% in 1995 and declined to approximately 30% in 2020. In contrast, the percentage accessing news through the internet increased steadily, rising from the lowest in 1995 to the most popular at 40% in 2020 and projected to be the top source at 55% in 2025.

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    The chart shows the percentage of people accessing news through different methods from 1995 to 2025. From 1995 to 2020, the percentage of people getting news through traditional media like television, newspapers, and radio decreased gradually. Television dropped from 70% in 1995 to 55% in 2020, with a brief rise to 58% in 2010. Newspaper and radio both started at around 55% in 1995 and declined to approximately 30% in 2020. In contrast, the percentage accessing news through the internet increased steadily, rising from the lowest in 1995 to the most popular at 40% in 2020 and projected to be the top source at 55% in 2025.

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    The chart illustrates the proportion of people using different methods to get news from 1995

    and the estimated percentage to 2025. Overall, while people increasingly used more and more
    people use the Internet for reading news, fewer and fewer of them accessed news through
    traditional media including television, newspaper and radio from 1995 to 2020. These trends
    are predicted to continue in the future.

    The percentage of people getting news by from the three forms of traditional media decreased
    gradually. As for TV method, it dropped from around 70% in 1995 to 55% in 2020, except the
    for a slight rise of roughly 3% in 2010. Regarding Regard of newspaper and radio methods,
    those both started at about 55% and declined to around about [repetition] 30% in 2020. The
    expectation is that approximately 30% of people will use newspapers, and roughly 23% will
    listen to the radio to get news in 2025. [why no detail about the projection for television?]

    In contrast, although reading news through the Internet only became becoming available in
    1995, the rate of that increased to become the second most popular option at 40% in 2020,
    with the a steep increase of 30% in 2010. It is expected to maintain this upward trend in the
    future, the figure is predicted to increase to become the most accessed source at about 55% in
    2025.
    Estimated
    Grade
    Task 6  150 -190 words
    Achieve-
    ment  overall summary
    good
     all key data covered / data is highlighted well
    you ignore the future prediction for television

    it is good to mention when categories change position, for example Internet


    went from lowest to highest
     data is reported accurately

    Cohesion 7  logical separation of data into paragraphs


    and
    Coherence  body paragraphs start with a phrase that indicates the data in the paragraph

     logical paragraph development


    I think you confused yourself a bit by missing out television and the first body
    paragraph, it certainly was hard for the reader to figure out where their
    information was
     linking phrases are used well

    Vocabulary 7  appropriate word choices / control of word endings/forms


    Errors and changes are highlighted in yellow

     spelling is correct

    Grammar 6  articles (a, an, the)

     sentence structures are correct

    Errors and changes are highlighted in green

    if the data is in the past, you should be using past tense, there is quite a lot of
    incorrect use of tenses

    Overall 6.5 there are some very good parts here, your overall summary is excellent and you
    do use correct future predictive language. On the flip side, you miss out some
    important information, and you don't use correct past tense language
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