Poetic Analysis
Poetic Analysis
Poetic Analysis
A Literary Paper
Submitted to
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Castillote, Althea
Emmanuel
Semester 1, 2022-2023
CHILDREN AND ADOLESCENT LITERATURE
ABSTRACT
This literary paper explores the deep meaning and significance of two children's
songs, "The Itsy Bitsy Spider" and "Magtanim Ay Di Biro." The analysis delves into
discovering the senses, sounds, and structure present in both songs, as well as the
symbols and themes they convey. Through the presence of these elements in these
poems, the analysis uncovers the themes of resilience and determination that are
interconnected in these nursery rhymes. The Itsy Bitsy Spider portrays the power of
perseverance through the story of a spider facing repeated obstacles. On the other hand,
Magtanim Ay Di Biro pays tribute to the hardworking farmers and highlights the
songs, this literary paper aims to deepen our appreciation for their timeless stories and
their ability to connect generations and cultures. Hence, these two rhymes are perfectly
suited for children to basically interpret the vision of one's dreams and how to be
I. INTRODUCTION
In human culture, songs have been bridging the gaps between time and what we
have brought from history, connecting generations and communities through the
universal language of music. Whether it is made or sung for adults or children, music
has the power to convey a message and deliver it to the people. "The Itsy-Bitsy Spider"
and "Magtanim Ay Di Biro" are two songs, each possessing a distinct cultural and
compositions, we delve
into the essence of folk traditions. Here, we explore the interconnected themes of
resilience and determination that are connected through the children’s song.
The poem entitled "The Itsy-Bitsy Spider" is a nursery rhyme known by children
around the world, written as a simple yet powerful narrative showing the power of
perseverance. This eight-legged character, also known as the spider, encounters the
caused by the rain. The spider's unwavering determination in facing the repetition of
determination can overcome even the most impossible trials. On the other hand,
never fun” or “planting is no joke” is a famous Tagalog folk song composed by Felipe
de Leon that entails the story of the everyday struggles of farmers, and a folk song
country. Its lyrics paint a vivid picture of the trials and fulfillment of a farmer's life,
expressing the sweat and work required to grow the land. This song serves as a tribute to
the unwavering hard work of the farmers who raise and produce raw materials and food,
celebrating the vital role of agriculture in society and highlighting the importance of
communal efforts.
Through this analysis, we aim to uncover the meaning that resides deep within
the seemingly simplistic children’s songs. Our goal is to put emphasis on the timeless
stories they carry, the commonalities they express, and the powerful emotions they
evoke. In doing so, we will gain a deeper appreciation of the significance of these
nursery rhymes and their power to connect us across generations and cultures.
II. ANALYSIS
water spout.
Sun – Hope
Rain – Circumstances
Theme Perseverance
Determination
The nursery rhyme ‘Itsy bitsy spider’ shows the adventure of a little spider. In
this nursery rhyme, the spider was being washed away whenever there was rain, and
the spider was just able to continue if the sun came out as it dried the water spout.
By just interpreting what the text implies, we can say that if there is a bad weather
condition, it may bring danger to one’s lives, and if there is a good weather
condition, it may bring happiness to one’s lives because they can do whatever they
The use of visual imagery helps us imagine what the spider looks like, the
state of the weather, the surroundings where the spider is, and the things that he did,
even if there is no image attached to the text. It was stated in the first line, ‘itsy bitsy
spider’ that
the spider is very tiny because of the adjectives itsy and bitsy. Additionally, we were
able to imagine the journey of the spider and its surroundings. It was stated in the
text that the spider went up the water spout, and when the rain came, the spider was
washed away. However, the sun comes out, drying the water spout, so he climbs up
again.
The spider, rain, and sun play an important role, as these are the ones that
give meaning to the nursery rhyme. Without being literal about the meaning that the
texts in this nursery rhyme imply, we come up with a different interpretation based
on the present evidence of the analysis in figures of sense. The three important
things in this nursery rhyme, which are the spider, rain, and sun, symbolize
something. Here, the spider symbolizes people; the sun is the hope, and the rain is
You may wonder why, of all the animals or living things in this world, a
spider was chosen to be the character in this nursery rhyme. Probably because
spiders are those organisms that have a short life span whenever at risk and have
only limited capabilities, unlike other organisms or animals. Since the spider
symbolizes people, it can be these people who have limited capabilities in terms of
finances, or, basically, these are people who are suffering from poverty. Here, the
spider's size alone can already be used to infer that it stands for little, less privileged
individuals. Now, in the first and second lines, it was said that itsy bitsy spider went
up the water spout; this kind of introduction of the nursery rhyme could be our
journey. Now, considering all the options, why did the spider decide to go in a
gutter system that is responsible for water management when rain occurs. So, why
did the spider climb up in the waterspout? Perhaps because it is the path that he
thinks is meant for him, this is the only place that he wanted to go because he
thinks that by going there, he can find the success and happiness that he is longing for.
Aside from his dedication, we can also observe his bravery because, even if he knows
that he may encounter a big problem or be in danger when the rain occurs, he still
continues his journey. Similar to us, even though there are a lot of ways to go, we
usually choose the path that we think is meant for us and that we think can give us the
success that we are aiming for. We often choose what we want, even if we know that we
might encounter different challenges that might test our abilities and make us think of
giving up. However, knowing the situation that we have, specifically the kind of poverty
that we are experiencing, thinking of giving up is the least that we could do.
In connection with this, lines 3 and 4, where the rain came down that washed
the spider out, are sad and true. In real life, problems are really unavoidable; they
will just come unexpectedly and sometimes put us in situations where we think we
cannot get up again, or sometimes lead us to lose our direction, and instead of
looking for solutions, we tend to do other things that might worsen the situation.
However, just like how the sun came out and dried up all the rain in lines 5 and 6 of
this nursery rhyme, there will also be hope that will light up the darkest part of our
lives and that we will be able to get up again, resolve the problems, and continue our
journey, similar to what the spider did in lines 7 and 8, which was to get up and
perseverance, he was able to go into the spout again. Like in real life, if we are
perseverant and determined, we will also be able to achieve our goals in life. As
they all said, problems are problems and not a rest place, so whenever problems
come, do not stop but instead continue and use them as motivation to reach success
in life. With that, this interpretation revolves around the theme of perseverance
and
determination to continue the journey despite the circumstances that we encounter
Foot in Poetry: iamb (The bold and capitalized letters are accented)
(1) The ITsy BITsy SPIder CLIMBED up
THE waTER spout.
Iambic Trimeter
The nursery rhyme “Itsy bitsy spider” has a rhyme scheme of ABACBB. This
means that lines 1 and 3 have the same end rhymes, as do lines 2, 5, and 6. The kind of
rhyming present in these words is masculine rhyme or perfect rhyme since only one
syllable in every word has the same rhyme, such as the words spout and out and rain
and again. Moreover, there is a presence of consonance in the nursery rhyme ‘Itsy bitsy
spider’ because of the consonants ‘tsy’ in the neighboring words itsy and bitsy located
in lines 1 and 6. There are also repetitions of some phrases, such as the “itsy bitsy spider
climbed up,” and “the rain,” which somehow give the listener or reader an idea that
these are important points to consider in interpreting the meaning of the text. Here, the
spider is the main character, the rain was the big challenge, and climbing up again
shows
perseverance and courage to continue despite the hardships that are encountered in life.
Moreover, the repetition of the word ‘rain’ in the nursery rhyme "the itsy-bitsy spider"
serves as a thematic and narrative tool, effectively highlights the central message of
resilience in facing challenges. Just like what the repetition of phrases in this nursery
rhyme implies, the repetition of the word "rain" from lines 1 and 2 represents a new test
or hurdle encountered by the spider on its journey. The use of "rain," often accompanied
by the term "down," symbolizes the setbacks of life and the seemingly impossible
obstacles one may encounter. Through this repetition, the song highlights the spider's
of repetition not only strengthens the message of perseverance, but also establishes a
rhythmic pattern that captivates attention, particularly among children. Hence, the
repetitive use of "rain" symbolizes the song's timeless lesson that trials are normal
phases of life, yet with determination, one can overcome them and continue ascending,
Furthermore, the nursery rhyme ‘itsy bitsy spider’ uses iambic foot. It is
called iamb when the first syllable is unaccented and followed by an accented
syllable. As we can observe, the nursery rhyme ‘itsy bitsy spider’ has this kind of
foot that can be seen in the entire song. An example is as follows: The ITsy BITsy
SPIder CLIMED up THE waTER spout. This kind of foot creates a pleasing
rhythm in the listener’s ears as well as the variation of meters in each line, which is
suitable for children because even if it has a simple rhythm, it still offers a lively and
joyful vibe. In connection with the interpretation of this nursery rhyme, this kind of
Stanza 1
Lines Sestet
Syntax Inversion:
The structure of the poem consists of six lines wherein it is considered as a stanza
in sestet. A sestet is composed with one stanza consisting six lines which makes it a
whole poem, symbolizing the wholeness of the spider’s story about his challenges until
such times that he was able to overcome or climbed up the waterspout after the sun
The punctuations in the lines 1 and 6 simply indicates the beginning and the end
of the main character’s challenges and success in achieving what he aims for. The
period from the first line stating “The itsy-bitsy spider climbed up the waterspout.”
introduces the starting point as to how the spider begin to work on his goal. This can be
related to when a person aims to achieve something, it is common for us to take our first
step and face the consequences or the hardships we are about to face, by which the
spider portrays in the poem. Additionally, the last line saying “and the itsy-bitsy spider
climbed up the spout again.” indicates the success of the spider’s journey after
everything he went through, this characteristic of the spider can be connected in a real-
life situation, where people tend to achieve their success by showing full determination
and perseverance in things that they do. The period expresses the feelings that the poem
conveys, including happiness at the spider's success in climbing the waterspout and
fluidity and continuity throughout the spider’s journey. It represents the spider's ups and
downs as he climbs the water spout to flow continuously from one line to the next,
showing the spider's persistent and continuous efforts. The absence of punctuation at the
end of each line symbolizes the spider's determination to keep climbing despite the
challenges it faces, making the enjambment technique as a subtle but effective way to
2. Magtanim ay di biro
Maghapong nakayuko
Di naman makatayo
Di naman makaupo
Tayo’y magsipag-unat-unat.
Lakas – Strength
Kaliyag – Companion
Di naman makatayo
Di naman makaupo
Sa pagkababad sa tubig.
Tayo’y magsipag-unat-unat.
The figurative sense of the poetry holds both visual and tactile imagery which is
seen in the whole nursery rhyme. In terms of its visual imagery, it is seen in the 1st, 3rd,
and 5th stanzas wherein the reader can grasp the visual representation of the excerpt in
the given text considering how it describes the situations of the everyday lives of
farmers. The text offers the readers a mental image of the routines of the farmers when
planting
rice, which is also the case wherein the poetry contains a sense of tactile imagery
describing the exhaustion farmers feel in their bodies as they continue to live day by
day. Furthermore, consider the title of the poem or nursery rhyme which is “Magtanim
ay di biro” wherein the readers themselves may automatically acquire a hint as to its
Furthermore, the symbols given in the poem are the words maghapon (all day),
magsipag (work hard), lakas (strength), kaliyag (companion), these words are believed
to be emphasized in the poem that gives prominence to the everyday lives of the farmers
themselves. As readers go through the text, it mainly embodies the struggles and
exhaustion of farmers, and how they continue to persevere throughout the day which
can be observed in the 2nd and 4th stanzas of the poem. In addition to their
perseverance, the hard work of the community is also present in the excerpt wherein it is
emphasized in the 5th or last stanza of the poem. Lastly, the resilience of each farmer is
also taken credit in the 1st stanza of the poem wherein it gives the readers an idea as to
and tubig
Half Rhyme:
nangangawit
MagHApong naKAyuko
Di man LANG
MAKAtayo
Sa PAGkababad sa TUbig.
Sa PAGkababad sa TUbig.
TAyo'y MAGsipag-unat-unat.
The nursery rhyme “Magtanim ay di biro” has a rhyme scheme of AAAA BCDD
EFGF BCDD HIJJJ, which sets the mood and tone of the poem and creates some
variation in the tone. This kind of rhyme scheme is an irregular rhyme scheme because
it does not follow a regular pattern of rhyme scheme. As you could observe, from the
AAAA pattern of rhyme scheme in the 1st stanza, it changed to the BCDD pattern of
rhyme scheme in the 2nd stanza and changed again to the EFGF pattern of rhyme scheme
in the 3rd stanza, then back to the BCDD pattern in the 4th stanza and changed to the
HIJJJ pattern of rhyme scheme in the 5th stanza. Despite the inconsistency of rhyme
scheme pattern in this nursery rhyme, there are still other lines that share the same end
rhymes, just like the lines in the 1st standza have the same end rhyme, which is the
sound /o/ in the words biro, nakayuko, makaupo, and makatayo, while in the 2nd and 4th
stanzas, only the 7th and 8th lines as well as the 15th and 16th lines have the same end
rhyme, which is the sound /ig/ in the words namimitig and tubig. In the 3rd stanza, the
10th and 12th have the same end rhyme, and that is the sound /in/ in the words iisipin and
pagkain. Lastly, in the 5th stanza, the 19th, 20th, and 21st lines have the same end rhyme,
which is the sound /as/ in the words landas and bukas. The kind of rhyme that is present
in these words is masculine rhyme or perfect rhyme since only one syllable in every
word has the same rhyme, such as the words nakayuko and makaupo, and namimitig
and tubig. Also, the presence of half rhyme is also observed in words such as iisipin and
pagkain, namimitig and tubig, and landas and bukas. In addition, the rhymes of the
that allows the readers to convey meaning of what the poem is all about and most
importantly, gives emphasis towards the daily lives of the community of farmers.
Moreover, the figures of sound or rhythm of the poem entail an assonance and a
consonance, wherein there are both vowels and consonants that are dominant within the
words in each line of each stanza that incorporates the rhythm of the nursery rhyme or
poem. Assonance can be seen in the words maghapong and nakayuko in the 2 nd line and
binti and namimitig in the 7 th line. While the consonance can be seen in the words
umagang and paggising in the 9th line. The repetition of words and phrases in the excerpt
also gives the reader or listener an idea that these words and phrases are being
emphasized because these are the ones that give clear meaning to the nursery rhyme.
The repeated use of the words "halina" and "unat" is intended to convey the message
working tirelessly to provide for our families' daily needs, we just have to take a rest and
have some stretch to regain energy and continue working hard again. In relation to this,
the repetition of the phrases "di man lang," "braso ko'y namamanhid," "baywang ko'y
nangangawit," "binti ko'y namimitig," and "sa pagkababad sa tubig" gives the
perception that these are the hardships that the farmers are going through in their daily
lives in order to provide something to their family, and the repetition of the phrase "para
sa araw ng bukas” emphasizes perseverance that no matter how exhausting and hard it
is, we should still continue for the future that is waiting for us. Thus, the repetition of
those words and phrases in the poem provides a stronger rhythm, which in turn lets the
readers engage themselves with a strong feeling or idea that comes with conveying the
that makes it hard to identify which foot is dominant in this nursery rhyme. For instance,
in the first line, there is a presence of a spondee in the word magtanim; however, the
next words were unable to identify what foot was used. While in the 3 rd and 4th lines,
Anapest was observed, followed by Spondee and Pyrrhic (Di man LANG MAKAupo),
and the next lines that follow have the same condition wherein they have inconsistencies
in foot use. Since there are inconsistencies in foot, it is also hard to know what is the
meter of this nursery rhyme. Hence, this nursery rhyme is free verse since it does not
1. Stanzas 5
In terms of the poem’s structure, the nursery rhyme contains 5 stanzas consist of
quatrain (4 lines) in the 1st to 4th stanzas and cinquain in the 5th stanza which is just
enough to tackle the hardships that a farmer is dealing with while being in a rice mill
and showing how perseverance and hard-working a farmer is for the future that is
waiting. However, the variation of the number of lines in the 5 th stanza among the other
stanzas makes this nursery rhyme a free verse. The observed inconsistencies in the
pattern of rhyme scheme, foot, meter, and now the versification of this nursery rhyme
strict with its rhymes, foot, meter, and other elements. This could also give us the
same kind of interpretation. Perhaps this nursery rhyme wants to tell us that the
farmers also want freedom from their exhausting everyday duties as farmers, or
specifically, freedom from poverty. That is why, despite all the hardship that they
are experiencing, they are still working hard for the future that waits for them
because they believe that with perseverance and determination, they can achieve
success and be free from the kind of hardship that they are experiencing at this
current time.
Moreover, the punctuation, specifically a comma (,) in line 17, might convey
the meaning of rest. The comma (,) between the words halina and halina could give
us an interpretation of being calm while encouraging others to take some rest. This
line may tell us that farmers should get some rest in their exhausting everyday
routine to regain energy and continue working again. So, the idea of giving up will
never be in their minds for the sake of the good future that is waiting for them. Thus,
"Magtanim ay di biro" is more than any simple and child-like song; it is held as a
piece of Filipino cultural heritage. Wherein it teaches the readers important lessons
a mirror, illuminating the people of the Philippines' agrarian roots and resilient
character.
III. USE OF FILIPINO RHYMES:
IN INTERDISCIPLINARY EDUCATION
The Itsy Bitsy Spider is quite a well-known nursery rhyme that most 21st-
century folks all around the world grew up with. It is a very good lesson for children
to learn the value of resilience, consistency, and perseverance through storms and
sunshine, as depicted by the story embedded in the rhyme. It showcases man's battle
with the struggles of life, yet is painted in a way that's tailored to a child's
understanding.
Biro. Although the said rhyme is more centered on the work of Filipino farmers, it is
still relevant in a way that it highlights the same value of resilience and perseverance
through rough times. This teaches children to strive for one's aim and to never back
down when things turn uneasy. Whether it be a spider or a farmer in this matter, both
share the same idea that can change a child's point-of-view of how to attack obstacles.
If given thought, why is the animal present in the former rhyme a spider?
What does this indicate or imply? Perhaps a spider in a world such as this is a very
vulnerable living being compared to the rest of the world, and to think about its size
relative to a heavy downpour is such a huge threat to its very life. The vivid imagery
presented in the tabulation showcases a good picture of a mere spider being washed
out by heavy rain, and yet despite hitting rock bottom, it endured the same path and
continued to reach the top of the water spout that symbolized our journey in life, and
the gushing water symbolized the problems that sometimes come in altogether
unpredictably and drove us back to zero all over again. This was compared to the
theme of the latter rhyme, Magtanim ay Di Biro, which highlighted farmers who are
completely far apart, we could say that a spider and a farmer could both represent
humanity as a whole, especially through the lens of a child. A spider is an animal that is
not attractive to children. In fact, most children hate and fear spiders. The question is:
why did the maker of this rhyme use a spider as the subject for symbolism in a
children's rhyme when it is indeed not something that children commonly adore? This
tells us that spiders, although dreadful to look at, are also creatures who are fighting
their way through life. Like people, we are not pleasing to the eyes of most, but we are
all fighting equal battles, and that is what children are meant to perceive. Not even the
scariest creatures that they find fearsome can face everything in this world. We are all
equally weak in one way or another, yet we must find a way to overcome that weakness
and continue to move forward. Just as farmers, they are symbols of Filipino labor and
are good models for young Filipinos to look up to, especially in terms of hard work and
resilience. They are good examples for children to cement their admiration, showing
that despite living the same tough routine with every rising of the sun, they live life
optimistically and from a positive perspective. Just like spiders in the animal kingdom,
farmers are also one of the lowest in terms of human hierarchical status, yet they are one
of the happiest. This is for the very reason that they remain grateful and content while
persevering in their daily grind. This is an important value that children must learn.
Hence, they are both similarly helpful in shaping a child's outlook on life at a young age
These two rhymes are perfectly suited for children to basically interpret the
vision of one's dreams and how to be resilient when it comes to reaching for them. Life
is full of challenges and a sudden overflow of problems that may arise anytime in our
lives. Even
in the best parts, there are sudden drops of problems, and children must learn to look at
life from a point of view that's not all according to their plans. There will come a time
when they will encounter slips and falls, but the important thing is to know when to get
back up and to continue. These rhymes symbolize humanity as also smaller pieces of a
bigger picture, and yet we all crawl in the hopes of reaching the top of each one's water
spout or each one's tomorrow. Hence, children should look at life like the spider and a
IV. CONCLUSION
While on the surface, "Itsy Bitsy Spider" and "Magtanim Ay Di Biro" may seem
like unrelated nursery rhymes originating from different cultural contexts— the former
being a popular English nursery rhyme which is also popular in the local Filipino
culture and the latter which is a traditional-famous Filipino folk song— shares a
common thematic thread that transcends cultural boundaries. Both songs convey a
"Itsy Bitsy Spider" tells the story of a small spider that faces obstacles, such as
rain, which washes it out, and sunshine, which dries it up. However, despite these
challenges, the spider perseveres and climbs up the spout again, symbolizing the
experiences.
On the other hand, "Magtanim Ay Di Biro" is a Filipino folk song that revolves
around the act of planting, emphasizing the hard work and patience required in
agriculture. The lyrics describe the challenges of planting, including the physical labor
and struggle involved, and the uncertainties of weather. Yet, the song also encourages
perseverance, suggesting that despite the difficulties and struggles we face in the real
world, all will eventually come to place wherein we, as readers convey such meaning
that the act of planting seeds will eventually lead to a bountiful harvest.
perseverance, and the willingness to face challenges head-on. They teach children and
listeners valuable life lessons about perseverance and the belief that effort, no matter
how small, can lead to positive outcomes. The universality of these themes underscores
the power of nursery rhymes to convey timeless messages that resonate across different
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VI. APPENDICES
(6) and the itsy bitsy spider climbed up the spout again.
2. Magtanim ay di biro