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ABSTRACT
This research is aimed to know “How is Students’ Ability in Writing
Paragraph Using Structure of The Paragraph in Argumentative Essay by The Sixth
Semester of English Study Program of UMB. The objective of this research was to
identify and describe the students’ ability in writing paragraph using structure of the
paragraph in argumentative essay by the sixth semester of English Study Program of
UMB.
This research used descriptive method. The population of this research was
164 students from all of classes at the sixth semester of English Study Program of
UMB. This research used random sampling. The samples were taken from 50% of the
total number of population, where the samples were 84 students. The instrument of
this research used writing test. The result of this study, the paragraph in
argumentative essay was 54.58. From the data were 2 students had very good score,
18 students were good, 16 students were poor, and 48 students were very poor. And
the students’ mean score of each aspect in writing are: in introduction was 6.47, in
body was 8.13, in conclusion was 5.75, in topic sentences was 8.71, in supporting
sentences was 7.96, in concluding sentences was 7.95, in sentences structure was
4.99, and in grammar and mechanics was 4.15.The result of analysis showed that the
average of the students’ ability in writing paragraph using structure of the paragraph
in argumentative essay was qualified “very poor”. Based on the result above, the
researcher suggest that the lecturer; It is suggested for the lectures to analyzed the
students’ difficulties in composing essay itself and find out the solving problem in
order to make the students more comprehend about compose the essay. The students
need practice to write a good paragraph by using essay organization, paragraph
organization, sentences structure, grammar and mechanics correctly.
INTRODUCTION
writing skill which will be got by the students. The students can explore their
experience. Halliday (1985b) in David Nunan (1995:84) suggest that writing has
which cannot be readily met by the spoken language. Beside that argument, Raimes
(1983:3) views that first, writing reinforce the grammatical structure, idioms, and
vocabulary that the teachers have been teaching their students. It means that writing
can be used to train ability of students in applying their knowledge about grammatical
structure, idioms, and vocabulary. Furthermore, when the students write, they
necessarily become very involved with the new language the effort to express ideas
and constant use of eye, hand and brain is a unique way to reinforce learning.
explore our own thinking, a way to examine what students know about a subject.
Without writing, teachers cannot look into the mind of someone who is reading to
examine their understanding of the text, but teachers can view their comprehension
about written language, and learning about writing though, students firstly learn how
to write the word, phase, and sentence level and eventually apply the multistep
writing process. Besides learning how to write, they were also examining written
says that when the students write for audience, students generally have one of the
essay. It is hoped can help students to understand about argumentative essay. The
presentation of support for an opinion that you want others to accept. An argument is
made up of your opening statement of opinion, any background information that your
readers may need in order to follow you, the evidence that you will use to support
student. In this case, critical students mean that the students can give critique concern
something which happened in their environment. They can expose their arguments to
persuade others. One of ways to influence them to be critical student can be done by
asking them to make argumentative essay. Nunan (1995:87) says that text types such
as reports, expositions, and arguments are essential for academic success at school
and beyond. It means that these forms of factual writing encourage the development
Heaton (1988:135) says that writing skills are complex and sometimes
difficult to master, requiring, mastering not only of grammatical and rhetorical device
but also conceptual and judgmental elements. From these explanations it can be
Key Term: Writing, Ability, Students’ ability, Structure, Paragraph, Topic
sentences, Supporting Sentences, Concluding Sentences, Argumentative Essay.
concluded that the students’ ability in writing needs to be improved by doing some
exercise in the learning process. It is hoped that the students can be able to express
opinions or ideas and feeling that they had after writing some various types of writing
is one of the skills that the students should master. The students are expected to be
able to compose well organized piece of writing, acceptable on the college level in
Morever, the students of the sixth semester in academic 2001/2002 had taken
writing subject I, II, and III. The sixth semester of English Study Program of UMB
will be choosen as the sample of this research. The reason is they had taken Writing I
until Writing III. From the all of the sixth semester of English Study Program of
UMB, the researcher got the total score for each A, B, C, D, and E class the total
From the discussion above, it means that writing subject was stiil difficult for
the students. Otherwise, when the students made mistakes in making a paragraph,
essay, diary, the kinds of text, ect. Some of students did not try to get the right one.
Althought, the lecturer gives motivation to correct their mistakes by asking the other
students which have more knowledge than them, the students were still lazy to correct
their mistake.
LITERATURE REVIEW
In this chapter, the researcher describes the meaning of writing, the purpose of
finished product emerges after a series of draf. The process approach puts emphasis
on in incubation period, in which the written peice takes shape. The writer’s
(1982:3) says that writing is an activity, which is productive and expressive. He adds
that writing skill does not come automatically, but it needs a lot of practices. The
students who want to be able to write well, need more practice in order can master the
elements of writing and also the purpose of writing itself. Besides, writing require
expressions and feeling away with the development of thought. It is important to not a
product, because writing is not easy, it takes time to studies and practices to develop
this skill.
grammatical structure, idioms and vocabulary that we have been teaching to our
students. Second, when our students write they also have a chance to adventurous
with language, they go beyond what they have just learned to say, to take risk. Third,
when they write they necessarily become involved with the new language, they effort
to express ideas and constant use of eye, hand and brain is unique way to reinforce
learning.
According to Kneffel, Don in his book Writing and Life: A Rhetoric for
Nonfiction with Readings (1986: 6-7) statez that writing is done in the course of daily
a. To Inform
This purpose is often found in report, like magazine, newspaper, and case
study.
b. To Analyze or To Explain
The writer uses languages to analyze or to explain the information that the
writer gets. It means that to discover the deep meaning form the information.
c. To Confince
The writers the opinion to make the reader does an action after reading it. It is
d. To Express
(1991:145) stated that a paragraph is a short piece of writing on a very limited topic,
and although some paragraph can stand alone, most are parts of a larger piece of
conventional form which writers find useful to help their readers follow a sequence of
ideas or thoughts.
organization in writing in which a group of related sentences develops one main idea.
A paragraph can be as short as one sentence or as long as ten sentence. The number
develop the main idea clearly. They also tell that a paragraph is made up of three
kinds of sentences that develop the writer’s main idea, opinion or felling about the
subject. These sentences are topic sentence, supporting sentences, and concluding
sentence.
A paragraph contains of topic sentence and sentences that the support it.
Saraka (1988:26) stated that a paragraph can be subdivided into two main types. The
of writing to show that new idea will come. A conceptual paragraph is one in which a
writer constructs limits to one single idea, one topic sentence plus supporting details.
Key Term: Writing, Ability, Students’ ability, Structure, Paragraph, Topic
sentences, Supporting Sentences, Concluding Sentences, Argumentative Essay.
2.4 Three Main Parts of a Paragraph
paragraph has three main parts, namely: topic sentence, supporting sentence, and
(1988:30) tells topic sentence states the main idea of the paragraph. It does not only
name the topic of the paragraph but also limit the topic to one or two areas that can be
discussed completely in the space of a single paragraph. The specific area is called
the controlling idea. According to Bram (1995:16) stated that a topic sentence must
have a subject and an attitude. In other words, it consist of a topic or subject matter
Tyner (1987:52) stated that there are some important things to know about
topic sentence: 1) a topic sentence expresses the main idea of the paragraph,
2) a topic sentence usually states a definite opinion or attitude, 3) a topic
sentence provides the reader with a clear understanding of what a paragraph is
about, 4) a topic sentence gives direction to a paragraph that both the writer
and reader can follow, 5) a topic sentence often begins a paragraph or is found
near the begining of a paragraph, 6) other sentences within a paragraph relate
to the topic sentence, 7) the final “wrap-up” sentence in a paragraph often
reinforces the topic sentence.
suggest th topic sentence is the most general and the most important sentence in the
paragraph that introduces thet reader to the topic. It states the main idea and focuses
the paragraph. Therefore, it is the most general statement in the paragraph. It does not
(1988:30) tells that supporting sentences that develop the topic sentence by giving
definitions, reasons, examples, facts, incident, comparison, anology, cause and effect,
Dietsch (1998:78) stated that support sentences explain the main idea of the
topic sentence. They supply evidence to convince the reader of the soundness of the
claim, assertion, or opinion. You might regard the topic sentence as an argument
(view) to be proven. The support sentences supply evidence in the form facts,
sentence.
Concluding sentence is the last sentence that concludes the points of the
paragraph. Oshima and Hogue (1983:12) state concluding sentence is a sentence that
summerizes the main points of the paragraph. It signals the end of the paragraph and
leaves the reader with important ideas to think about. It can be written as the same as
topic sentence vut in the different words. According to Dietsch (1998:78) stated that
besides the two basic parts just discussed the topic sentence and support sentences,
For concluding sentences, Reid (1994:42) tells that there are five techniques
3. Predict a situation that will result or occur from the statement made in the
paragraph.
From the quotation above, the researcher can summarize that a concluding
sentence is an ended sentence that leaves the reader with the important ideas on the
topic of the paragraph. While, some techniques in the concluding sentence are
A good paragraph must have a sense of completeness. Baker and Oliu Saraka
(1988:73) state that completeness in a paragraph means that the controlling idea
thoroughly develop by the use of particular (specific) information. They also state
paragraph is complete when it leaves no confusion in the reader’s mind about what is
intended, about how the reader is supposed to respond and about why such response
for an opinion that you want others to accept. An argument is made up of your
opening statement of opinion, any background information that your readers may
need in order to follow you, the evidence that you will use to support your opinion,
the following:
In the Introduction
basic facts.
opinion regarding the matter under discussion and previews his plan of
development.
given its own paragraph and is supported by evidence. Most often, the writer
begins with his weakest point and concludes with his stronger arguments. If
all the writer’s points are equally strong, he builds a relationship with his
The writer may summarize key points, restate his thesis, reinforce the
challenge the reader to apply the paper’s argument to his own life.
Writing subject is one of the subjects that should be taken by English Study
II, and III. They are able to continue the next steps if they have passed the first step.
Writing is a subject that is very important for students; students can increase their
Firstly, the lecturer will explain the theory of writing, and then students apply the
material in real activity. They will try to write about one topic and they should write a
composition based on topic which is given by the lecturer. Then the lecturer will give
some exercises for the students to write about some topics and from the result the
lecturer will know whether the students have understood the material or not.
From explanation above, the researcher assumes that writing is not an easy
subject to be followed by the students. So, students should pay attention to writing
subject. The students are hoped to be able write a good product and they also can
In this chapter, the researcher describes the research design, population and
sample, the instrument of the research, technique of collecting data, and technique of
data analysis.
Gay (1990:189) descriptive method is used to determine and reports the way things
are. The descriptive method will be used in this study because it reports the condition
3.2.1 Population
Population and sample were significant in a research. The population is the group
of interest to the researcher, the group to which she or he would like the result of the
study to be generalized (Gay, 1990). The populations of this research were the
students of the sixth semester at English Study Program of UMB, which consist of
1 A 27 14
2 B 39 20
4 D 33 17
5 E 32 16
3.2.2 Sample
The small group that is called a sample (Ary: 2010). According to Gay (1990: 114)
For smaller population, 20% may be required”. In this reserach, the researcher takes
50% from 164 students. There are 84 students. The researcher will use random
selecting a sample in such a way that all individuals in defined population have an
equal and independent chance of being selected for the sample (Gay, 1990). The
researcher was put the names of all students who have been selected as the population
of 164 students into a glass, and then she/he was shake the glass and take as much as
50% of the population, there are 84 students, the names that came out used as sample.
3.3 Instrument
In collecting data that the researcher was used a written test form as a main
instrument. The students was asked to make a paragraph that consists of least three
paragraphs and they wrote one of the three topics provided: The Advantages of
studying at university, Abortion, The happiest day in my life. These topics are taken
1. The researcher was prepared the condition of the class where the students are
5. The researher was analyzed the data, in the analyzed the data researcher was
1. The data in this research was analyzed by following the steps below:
ESSAY ORGANIZATION
Introduction:
Conclusion:
There is a concluding
Is there a concluding sentence that is either a 10 7-10 : good
sentence that is either a paraphrase of the thesis
paraphrase of the thesis or a or a summary of the 4-6 : enough
summary of the main points? main points and there
1-3 : bad
Is there a final comment (if is a final comment.
one is appropriate).
PARAGRAPH
ORGANIZATION
Each paragraph has a 11-15 : good
Topic sentences: topic sentence and
Does each paragraph have a each topic sentence for 15 6-10 : enough
topic sentence? Does each a controlling idea
topic sentence for a 1-5 : bad
controlling idea.
The supporting
Supporting sentence is flowing
Sentences: smoothly. There are
Do the supporting sentences sufficient concrete
flow smoothly? Are there details to support each 11-15 : good
sufficient concrete details to point. Transition
support each point? Are signals are used 15 6-10 : enough
transition signals used effectively both within
effectively both within and and between 1-5 : bad
between paragraphs? Does paragraphs and each
each paragraph have unity? paragraph has unity.
11-15 : good
SENTENCES
STRUCTURE
The sentences are 7-10 : good
Are there any unclear clear.
sentences? Can you suggest 10 4-6 : enough
TOTAL 100
2. Score from co-researcher and researcher were added, and then were
4. The researcher was check the students’ mean by using the formula of
M=
DISCUSSION
criteria that were related to the component of students’ test, such as Essay
Grammar and Mechanics. From the result above, the features of Essay Organization
In brief, the result of this research showed that the students’ ability in writing
CONCLUSION
The table below shows the students’ ability in writing paragraphs using
From the table 4.5, it could be seen that 35 students were good, 32 students were
enough, and 17 students were bad. Based on the students’ mean score in criteria
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