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Caitlyn wrote the following composition about an inspirational figure. She would like
you to read her paper and think about any corrections she needs to make. When you
finish reading, answer the questions that follow.

A Dream Unrealized
(1) Rafael, or Rafa, Ortiz was born in Mexico City, but his father did not want

to raise him in the midst of the city’s tall buildings and concrete streets. (2) He

wanted his children to be close to nature and animals, so when Rafa Ortiz was about

five years old, his father moved his family to a ranch near Veracruz. (3) Rafa Ortiz

and his siblings began water rafting in the nearby Filobobos River. (4) Over time

Ortiz’s early experiences with rafting led him to an extraordinary career in extreme

kayaking.

(5) When Ortiz was about 14, his father and sister bought two kayaks.

(6) With no instructions or guidence, Ortiz and his sister planned to take their new

boats out onto the water. (7) They put on skateboarding helmets and swimming pool

life jackets and brought their kayaks to the river. (8) Fortunately, an experienced

kayaker saw them and offered some much-needed advice. (9) “You guys need

proper life jackets, proper helmets, and proper spray skirts to close the kayaks,” he

gently told them. (10) “You can visit a website and get all set up.” (11) The two

siblings did just that, and Ortiz soon became an avid kayaker. (12) He started

spending his summers in Canada, where he perfected his skills in freestyle kayaking.

(13) As a teen in the junior ranks, Ortiz became the first Mexican of any age to

compete in the world freestyle kayak championships.

(14) Ortiz soon grew interested in extreme kayaking and made his first

descent down a 40-foot drop over Big Banana Falls in Mexico. (15) He came out of

the plunge bleeding and with a broken paddle, but he was hooked nonetheless.

(16) After steady practice and a great deal of experience at various waterfalls around

the globe, Ortiz improved his skills. (17) Today he is one of the most celebrated

extreme kayakers in the world. (18) Among his unparalleled achievements is

paddling his kayak over both the Alexander Falls, a 150-foot drop in British

Columbia, and the Palouse Falls, a 189-foot drop in the state of Washington.

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Larry Clouse/ Associated Press
Rafael Ortiz Kayaking on
Homestake Creek in Vail, Colorado

(19) In recent years Ortiz had been looking forward to conquering the

ultimate challenge, the 165-foot plummet of Niagara Falls. (20) He had already

conquered a higher drop, but Niagara has the highest flow rate of any waterfall in the

world, so Ortiz knew the feat would be more perilous than anything he had

attempted before. (21) Still Ortiz dreamed of being the first kayaker to paddle over

the falls. (22) Hoping to be as prepared as possible for a challenge that he knew

would require an extraordinary amount of skill, he studied the spectacular attraction

for three years.

(23) But Ortiz would never conquer that ultimate challenge. (24) On the day

that he was supposed to paddle over Niagara Falls, he went to the top and looked

down, he said that things just didn’t feel right. (25) So in a move that surprised

many, he simply walked away. (26) After three years of preparation, Rafa Ortiz left

his biggest dream behind. (27) He later explained that he just wasn’t confident he

would be able to land the kayak safe. (28) “Not often it hurts so much to walk away

from a dream,” he said. (29) But he added, “I heard once [that] sometimes it takes

more courage to walk away from a drop than to run it.”

(30) Other extreme kayakers agree and have praised Rafa Ortiz’s decision.

(31) Fellow kayaker Rush Sturges is one example. (32) “I am proud of Rafa’s

decision,” he commented, and I think it is a great testament to his character and

courage.”

(33) So for now Rafa Ortiz will have to be happy with all the other amazing

feats he has accomplished. (34) As one writer put it, “Surely another waterfall

awaits Ortiz—just not Niagara Falls.”

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14 What change should be made in sentence 6?

F Change With to Without

G Change guidence to guidance

H Delete the comma

J Change planned to planning

15 What change is needed in sentence 13?

A Change the comma after ranks to a semicolon

B Change became to becomes

C Insert a comma after age

D Change world freestyle kayak championships to World Freestyle Kayak


Championships

16 What is the correct way to write sentence 24?

F On the day that he was supposed to paddle over Niagara Falls. He went to the top, looked
down, and said that things just didn’t feel right.

G On the day that he was supposed to paddle over Niagara Falls, he went to the top and
looked down. He said that things just didn’t feel right.

H On the day that he was supposed to paddle over Niagara Falls, he went to the top and
looked down. And said that things just didn’t feel right.

J On the day that he was supposed to paddle. Over Niagara falls, he went to the top, looked
down, and said things just didn’t feel right.

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17 What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 27?

A Change explained to explains

B Change confident to confidant

C Change safe to safely

D No change needs to be made in this sentence.

18 What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 32?

F Insert quotation marks before the first and

G Change I think to we think

H Change testament to testiment

J No change needs to be made in sentence 32.

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