Madeira Dunia CL2A Lesson3 AnalyticalParagraphs
Madeira Dunia CL2A Lesson3 AnalyticalParagraphs
Madeira Dunia CL2A Lesson3 AnalyticalParagraphs
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Choose two types of conflict (internal conflict: good vs. good, good vs.
bad, bad vs. bad; external conflict: character vs. character, character vs.
society, character vs. nature, character vs. technology, character vs.
supernatural) and write a two-paragraph paper analyzing how the author
develops conflict in either “The Scholarship Jacket” or “The Stolen
Party.” You may choose to analyze two types of internal conflict, two
types of external conflict, or one type of internal and one type of external
conflict. Each paragraph should discuss one type of conflict and should
include a topic sentence, 3-5 supporting sentences, and a clincher.
Brainstorm
Use this section to generate ideas to write about. Write down ideas for at
least four types of conflict on the chart; the more the better!
Type of Conflict
External:
Character vs. Society Martha’s conflict with the societal
expectation is that she must conform to
arbitrary rules in order to receive
recognition for her academic
achievements, as she refuses to accept
the injustice of the jacket requirement
[Your Choice]
[Your Choice]
[Your Choice]
1. When you are finished, review your chart. Add extra examples if more
come to mind.
2. Decide which examples will be best to write about. You should be able
to clearly label the type of conflict and explain with examples how it is
developed in the story.
3. Then, put a star next to your two favorite examples of conflict. Make
sure you have chosen two different types of conflict to write about.
Prewrite
Use this graphic organizer to organize your ideas for each paragraph.
See Shelf 12 in the Learning Library for a reminder about how to create
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Paragraph 1
Paragraph 1 Topic Sentence
Write one, clear sentence that states what type of conflict you will be
discussing. Include the author’s name, names of any characters that will be
included (if applicable), as well as the name of the story.
Supporting Sentences
Write 3-5 clear sentences that explain how the author develops conflict in
the story you chose. Make sure you use examples from the story and then
explain how those examples support your argument.
When Martha learns about the requirement for the jacket, she is
shocked and disheartened, as she knows her family cannot afford it.
This sets up the initial tension between Martha’s desire to earn the
scholarship and the principal’s rigid adherence to the rule.
Moreover, when the girl affirms "It's not fair... It's always been my
dream to be valedictorian and to wear the white dress and give a speech",
she highlights her determination to challenge the principal’s authority and
fight for her rights.
Despite the girl’s plea against the injustice of the jacket requirement,
the principal refuses to relent, intensifying the conflict.
Concluding Sentence
Write a sentence that sums up the main idea of your
paragraph. Remember that the strongest clinchers connect
to an idea that your readers are familiar with.
Tip: Do you mention your main idea (conflict) and your characters in your
concluding sentence, also? That will help you stay on prompt.
Therefore, the tension between Martha and the principal illustrates the
complexities of navigating institutional barriers and standing up for what one
believes is right, emphasizing the character vs. character conflict in the
story.
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 2 Topic Sentence
Write one, clear sentence that states the second type of conflict you will be
discussing.
Also, the story embodies the inner: good vs. bad conflict, portrayed by
the principal.
Supporting Sentences
Write 3-5 clear sentences that explain how the author develops this second
type of conflict in the story. Make sure you use examples from the story and
then explain how those examples support your argument.
When Martha confronts the principal about the injustice of the jacket
requirement, the principal grapples with conflicting notions of what is right
and fair.
By the end of the story, the principal agrees to award Martha the
scholarship, indicating his acknowledgement of the unfairness of the rule
and his commitment to fairness and justice.
Concluding Sentence
Write a sentence that sums up the main idea of your second paragraph.
Remember that the strongest clinchers connect to an idea that your readers
are familiar with.
Tip: Do you mention your main idea (conflict) and your characters in your
concluding sentence, also? That will help you stay on prompt.
Draft
In the space below, write a first draft of two complete paragraphs based on
your prewriting, above. Use correct paragraph form (no bullets or numbers,
full sentences, two units of 5-10 sentences).
Martha learns about the requirement for the jacket, she is shocked and
disheartened, as she knows her family cannot afford it. This sets up the
initial tension between Martha’s desire to earn the scholarship and the
principal’s rigid adherence to the rule. Moreover, when the girl affirms "It's
not fair... It's always been my dream to be valedictorian and to wear the
challenge the principal’s authority and fight for her rights. Despite the girl’s
plea against the injustice of the jacket requirement, the principal refuses to
relent, intensifying the conflict. Therefore, the tension between Martha and
and standing up for what one believes is right, emphasizing the character
Also, the story embodies the inner: good vs. bad conflict, portrayed by the
principal. When Martha confronts the principal about the injustice of the
right and fair. Initially, he follows the rule without question, believing it to be
challenges his perception, causing him to question the morality of the rule
and his role in enforcing it. As the principal wrestles with this internal
fairness and recognize the girl’s academic effort. By the end of the story,
fairness and justice. In conclusion, the internal conflict of good vs. bad is
Review
Ask a learning partner or friend to read your work. Show them the rubric
and ask for advice about how to improve each part of your graphic
organizer. Also show your draft to your Classroom Teacher for feedback.
Then, make necessary changes to your draft.
Revise
Use what you learn from the review to make thoughtful changes to your
work. At this point, review and revise to organize and develop your ideas. In
the next section, you will review and edit to correct grammar and spelling
errors. Keep revising until your paragraph is just the way you want it.
Edit
Look at your revised paragraph. In this step, focus on grammar and spelling
only. Correct grammar and spelling errors. Ask for help if you need it.
Publish
When you finish revising and editing, do these two things in the spaces
below.
1. After you have revised your work, write your final draft in the box
below. There should be evidence of thoughtful change from your first
to your final draft.
2. Answer the three reflection questions in the second box.
Final Draft
Remember to write your final draft in paragraph form rather than in lists,
bullet points, or phrases. Visit Shelf 12 in our Learning Library for a review
of paragraph structure. https://bit.ly/3woqUFB
with the principal exemplifies character vs. character conflict. When Martha
learns about the requirement for the jacket, she is shocked and
disheartened, as she knows her family cannot afford it. The situation
establishes the initial tension between the desire of the girl to earn the
scholarship and the principal’s rigid adherence to the rule. Moreover, when
the girl says: "It's not fair... It's always been my dream to be valedictorian
and to wear the white dress and give a speech", she highlights her
determination to challenge the principal’s authority and fight for her rights.
Despite Martha's plea against the injustice of the jacket requirement, the
Also, the story embodies the inner good vs. bad conflict, portrayed by the
principal. When Martha confronts the principal about the injustice of the
right and fair. Initially, he adheres to the rule without hesitation, deeming it
his perception, causing him to question the morality of the rule and his role
in enforcing it. As the principal wrestles with this internal conflict, he must
recognize the girl’s academic effort. By the end of the story, the principal
injustice of the rule and his dedication to fairness and justice. In conclusion,
the internal conflict of good vs. bad is portrayed by the principal, who
Reflect
Answer these questions in complete, thoughtful sentences:
1. How is the conflict you noticed in the story similar to or different
from conflicts you have faced in your own life? Why?
2. What was the hardest part about this assignment? Why?
3. What was the biggest change you made from your first draft to
your final draft?
building, I noticed a group of younger kids excluded from the soccer games
by some older kids, who said only those who were ten years old or older
could participate. When I noticed this, I felt it was unfair and unkind to
older kids and gently explain how excluding others could hurt the younger
kids’ feelings and make them feel left out. After some discussion, the older
effectively supported the argument about the types of conflict in the story. It
3. The biggest change I made from my first draft to my final draft was
sentences to provide more specific examples from the text and elaborated