Christmas Carol - Annotation Essay structure
Christmas Carol - Annotation Essay structure
Christmas Carol - Annotation Essay structure
people’s reaction to his death ranging from couldn’t care to deep relief, his own
body shrouded on the bed, the reaction of people who were employed by
Scrooge and finally his own tombstone. All of these events were shown to
Scrooge using dramatic irony, as Scrooge was unaware throughout the stave,
that the death he was witnessing was his own.
The spirits have so far been quite kind and have guided Scrooge through their
visions firmly but somewhat sympathetically. But this last spirit brings the moral
lesson home. Reminiscent of the Grim Reaper, he shows Scrooge that the
unknown, unseen fate that he is heading for is really something to fear deeply.
The choice Scrooge now has is what kind of death his will be. Will his life amount
to nothing? Will his greed cause the death of Tiny Tim? Will anyone care when he
dies? Adjectives – “deep black” adds to a fearful atmosphere
unknowable as the future itself. Allusion to a burial garment
–“shroud”
Alliteration/ plosive
sounds – “difficult” It was shrouded in a deep black garment, which
“detach” from the night
concealed its head, its face, its
shows that the figure is
indistinguishable from form, and left nothing of it visible save one outstretched
hand. But for this it
the surrounding
darkness, and is as would have been difficult to detach its figure from the
mysterious night,
and and separate it
unknowable as the
future itself. from the darkness by which it was surrounded. He felt
that it was tall and
stately when it came beside him, and that its mysterious
presence filled him
with a solemn dread. He knew no more, for the Spirit
neither spoke nor moved.
“Ghost of the Future!” he exclaimed, “I fear you more than any spectre I have
seen. But as I know your purpose is to do me good, and as I hope to live to be
another man from what I was, I am prepared to bear you company, and do it
with a thankful heart.
By the time the Ghost of Christmas Future comes to visit Scrooge, he has already
learned his lesson: no good will ever come of his miserly ways, for himself or for
the people around him. Yet, the Ghost refuses to address him, even though
Scrooge entreats him to do so Will you not speak to me?” Unlike the Ghosts of
Christmas Past and Present, who help guide Scrooge to understand aspects of his
past and present to learn his lesson about charity and empathy, the Ghost of
Christmas Future does not speak to Scrooge. Rather, he brings him to the
circumstances surrounding the death of an old man who was despised in life and
disparaged in death. Scrooge must realize for himself that this is his fate if he
does not revise his attitude. By refusing to speak to Scrooge, the Ghost ensures
that this realization is entirely the old man's own, rendering the lesson much
more powerful.
In Stave One we saw how the narrator gave human characteristics to buildings. Here is
another example of personification:
“They scarcely seemed to enter the City, for the City rather
seemed to spring up about them, and encompass them of its own
act.
They left the busy scene, and went into an obscure part of the town, where
Scrooge had never penetrated before, although he recognised its situation, and
its bad repute. (had never penetrated before – ignorance)
The Ghost of Christmas Yet to Come takes Scrooge to a part of town he has never
been before, _due his ignorance. Scrooge has been basing all of his ideas about
poorer people on his assumptions about where they live and what they do. He
has never even been to this particular part of London before, but he knows it by
its bad reputation.
Scrooge is now taken to the most inhumane and criminal of places, where
the pawnbroker “Old Joe” lived and took in stolen goods and gave a few
coins to the most unfortunate people. Dickens shows how miserable and
grim the living conditions were in those areas, and this could have been
an indication of the experiences that Dickens gained due to his insomniac
nightly walks. He was said to have walked the streets of London at night
gaining an insight into the most horrific situations that men and women
endured due to the overcrowding, poverty and lack of housing in London.
Men, women and children crowded into doorsteps, sleeping with little
comfort or care had a profound effect on him. The area is described again
through the listing/tripling in “reeked with crime, with filth, with misery.”
And this infers that the area is riddled with problems and is not safe.
The scene with the charwoman, the laundress, and the undertaker is upsetting to
Scrooge. Their behaviour and theft of the dead man’s things is horrifying to
Scrooge, but their attitudes reflect his as they were at the beginning of the
story. “Every person has a right to take care of themselves. He always did!”
“If he wanted to keep ’em after he was dead, a wicked old screw,” pursued the
woman, “why wasn’t he natural in his lifetime? If he had been, he’d have had
somebody to look after him when he was struck with Death, instead of lying
gasping out his last there, alone by himself.” (Dialogue)
The Ghost of Christmas Future brings Scrooge to the room where people are
picking apart the possessions of a man who recently died. This enterprising
woman who is taking the deceased man's things argues that if the old man
wanted to keep his things or give them to a person of his choosing, he should
have been kinder (more "natural") in life. Due to his meanness, the reader learns
that this man died entirely alone, "gasping out his last...alone by himself." As
Scrooge soon learns, the man in question is him--and this solitary death is to be
his fate if he does not change his ways. As a wealthy but stingy man, the
townspeople who hear of his death revel in taking from Scrooge the things that
they could never have. Had Scrooge been more generous with his time,
kindness, and wealth, he may have had friends and family surrounding him as he
gasped out his last breath. But due to his miserly ways, he had no one and died
completely alone. As a result, there was no one to protect his estate after his
passing, rendering his possessions completely up for grabs. To those whom
Scrooge spurned in his living days, stealing the dead man's possessions is a kind
of revenge on his stinginess in life--if he wouldn't be generous and donate his
time or money, then they would take what they needed in his death, if only out
of spite. When Scrooge realizes that the man they so despise is himself, he
suddenly sees that this is not how anyone should aspire to end their days.
Scrooge soon learns that empathy and kindness is worth far more than its weight
in gold, and the company and love of others during and after one's life will
always be more important than how much is in one's bank account.
A pale light, rising in the outer air, fell straight upon the bed; and on it, plundered
and bereft, unwatched, unwept, uncared for, was the body of this man.
The use of tripling in “unwatched, unwept, uncared for, was the body of a man.”
Imply that the human in the bed has no one to care for him or mourn for him,
which is true at this point in the novella. Scrooge’s death shows that he has
reaped what he sowed and in death he is alone, like in life. The repetition of
the negative prefix Un emphasises loneliness and neglect.
He recoiled in terror, for the scene had changed, and now he almost touched a
bed: a bare, uncurtained bed: on which, beneath a ragged sheet, there lay a
something covered up, which, though it was dumb, announced itself in awful
language Verb – recoiled
This body is the dead man that the people spoke of as they stole his things.
Entirely stripped of his possessions, the body is left alone on a bare bed with only
a torn sheet to cover it. This image symbolizes what the man has once his
money and items are gone: no one, and nothing. Without any friends or loved
ones to mourn him, the body left behind is nothing more than an empty vessel
devoid even of the mean spirit that used to occupy it. This stark and scary scene
jolts Scrooge. Though the body does not announce itself because it is "dumb," it
does so in "awful language," : silence. Scrooge realizes that this "awful
language" of silence, in which the Ghost itself also converses with him, is all that
he looks forward to for the rest of his days and beyond if he does not learn how
to form, cultivate, and care for human connection.
“Let me see some tenderness connected with a death” Scrooge is horrified that
nobody is sad about his death.
It would have done you good to see how green a place it is. But you’ll see it
often. I promised him that I would walk there on a Sunday. (Religious
significance)
Juxtaposition
There is a huge difference between the body lying alone in the dark house and
the body of Tiny Tim, kissed and adored in the Cratchit house. The Cratchits have
picked a green, fragrant plot for the boy, and have promised to visit him every
Sunday. The child is given religious significance, as a kind of saviour. But the
body of the miserly man is left alone, in a godless place. At the same time,
Cratchit is crushed by Tiny Tim's death, and of course had someone just had
some charity Tiny Tim wouldn't have had to die . Mr. Cratchit shows bravery
and cheerfulness even in the face of grief, but the loss of Tiny Tim leaves
a huge gap in the Cratchit household. Tim was the unlikely leader of the
holiday cheer and without him, the household has a different, solemn
atmosphere. Fitting in with the story’s use of extremes and caricatures to
make its point, it is the purest, kindest, smallest character that suffers
most. The effect of Tiny Tim’s life and loving nature is far reaching. It has
left its mark on everybody. Even those who didn’t really know him have
positive thoughts about him and have been left better off because of him,
even though he offered nothing but his goodness. This shows how the
best things are not affected by money or even death, they outlast us.
The Spirit stood among the graves, and pointed down to One. He advanced
towards it trembling. The Phantom was exactly as it had been, but he dreaded
that he saw new meaning in its solemn shape.
Scrooge crept towards it, trembling …the neglected grave his own name,
EBENEZER SCROOGE.
Adjective – “neglected” showing no one ever visits the grave and everything
that Scrooge worked for in life was pointless and futile as in death he is forgotten
and his wealth meant nothing.
“I will honour Christmas in my heart, and try to keep it all the year. I will live in
the Past, the Present, and the Future. The Spirits of all Three shall strive within
me. I will not shut out the lessons that they teach. Oh, tell me I may sponge
away the writing on this stone!”
This is the climax of the story –finally, Scrooge is forced to discard his ignorance
and fully face that the dead man is him. That this story he was seeing was not
symbolic; it was his life, and he must now grapple with the certain understanding
that his greed has led him inexorably to the horrible loneliness that he has
witnessed in this vision of the future, to a death uncared about by anyone. Face
with this vision, with this understanding, Scrooge begins to suddenly and
dramatically repent. Scrooge promises to “Live in the Past, the Present and the
Future” implying that he has taken on board the messages that the ghosts have
provided him with, that he understands the folly of his former ways and that he
is willing to change.
Juxtaposition
The way that the Ghost of the Future has so boldly presented death in
juxtaposing ways, with Tiny Tim mourned and loved and Scrooge forgotten and
unloved, creates an epiphany in Scrooge and makes him realise that he needs to
change.
Throughout the stave death is solemn, final and almost inevitable for Scrooge.
The way death is presented by Dickens shows the reader that we have to
consider the way we treat others in life and we need to be kind, charitable and
good to others around us, or the fate that Scrooge is shown in stave four could
very well be the fate that we deserve.
Stave 5
“I will live in the Past, the Present, and the Future!” Scrooge repeated, as he
scrambled out of bed. “The Spirits of all Three shall strive within me. Oh Jacob
Marley! Heaven, and the Christmas Time be praised for this! I say it on my
knees, old Jacob, on my knees!”
Scrooge awakens the next day with a firm resolve to change his ways. He thanks
the Ghost of his one and only friend, Jacob Marley, for showing him the
importance of rejecting their mutual miserly ways. Scrooge resolves to embody
all three spirits: the youthful reminiscence of the Ghost of Christmas Past, the
joy, understanding, and generosity of the Ghost of Christmas Present, and the
sombre foresight of the Ghost of Christmas Future. He knows now that it is
important to understand one's own context and perspective, as well as those of
others, to properly conduct oneself with kindness and charity. Scrooge has some
good reasons for acting particularly bitter around Christmas--there are unhappy
memories from his past that make the holiday a sore subject--but he also has
very happy memories that he has now learned to try and evoke, such as old
Fezziwig’s ball. As he has awoken on Christmas Day itself, he now has the chance
to evoke the spirit of Christmas Present, and immediately spread joy and
generosity on the people who deserve and need it.
Symbolism
Scrooge’s awakening from this deep, strange sleep is a moment of
enlightenment, a complete transformation, a bit like a baptism or birth itself.
Scrooge cries like a baby, and is purified like a newly baptized disciple.
He had been sobbing violently in his conflict with the Spirit, and his face was wet
with tears.
Pathetic fallacy
No fog, no mist; clear, bright, jovial, stirring, cold; cold, piping for the blood to
dance to; Golden sunlight; Heavenly sky; sweet fresh air; merry bells. Oh,
glorious! Glorious!
Similes
Dickens then uses similes to characterize Scrooge's newfound spirit: “I am
as light as a feather, I am as happy as an angel, I am as merry as a
schoolboy. The similes he uses, such as "light as a feather," are a contrast
to the Scrooge, who the night before was forging a heavy chain for himself
—just like his friend Marley.
Dynamic verbs and alliteration
Scrooge repeated, as he scrambled out of bed. “The Spirits of all Three shall
strive within me.
6. How does Dickens explore the theme of social justice in A Christmas Carol?
7. How does Dickens explore the role of the family in A Christmas Carol?