SBA - Oral Presentation
SBA - Oral Presentation
Oral Presentations
The oral presentation is an individual creative presentation that should be between 3-5
minutes and done in Standard Jamaican English (not patois) on your topic. This can be in
the form of a poem, spoken word, story, drama, play, monologue, dramatic monologue,
expository speech, persuasive speech etc. Your presentation must also be accompanied
with a plan which would indicate what your presentation is about, the reasons for your
chosen genre and the language and resources you have used to inform your
presentation.
Q: I still don’t get it. Could you give me an example of what the brief
overview/plan should sound like?
A: For example, you may say something like:
“Good morning. My topic is Teenage Health, with a particular focus on the prevalence of
smoking among teenagers. I have chosen to present my oral response in the form of an
expository speech. The major sources that influenced my presentation are the lyrics to
the song, “Puff It” produced in 2010 by Jamaican Dancehall artiste, I-Octane and the
journal article, “Do It For The Likes: How Social Media Pressures Jamaican Teens to
Smoke” published in 2012 by Carla Moore. These sources use poetic language and lots of
persuasive devices such as rhetorical questions and statistics to show that smoking is a
major issue among teenagers in Jamaica. In this presentation, I will use statistical
information, credible authority and a grave and cautionary tone to exemplify the tragic
effects of smoking among teenagers.”
Q: That sounds like a lot. Can I just read the overview part?
A: Sure. You will be expected to submit a written plan of your oral presentation to your
teacher before you begin your presentation so you can just read it from that and then
hand it in.
Q: I’m still confused. What does “oral presentation” mean though? Like a
speech?
A: It can be a speech but you are not limited to just a speech. Your presentation can take
the form of a poem, an argumentative/persuasive speech, an expository speech, role
play or a dramatic monologue.
Q: Say I want to do that role play thing, can I include another person in
my presentation?
A: Yes, that is acceptable but there are certain conditions. Firstly, it
is your oral presentation, your individual work. The actions of the other person will not in
any way contribute to your grade. It will only be used to aid and move
your presentation along. Therefore, the other person’s participation needs to be very
brief. Be sure that the person does not overshadow you. Secondly, the person needs to
come from your class. Please ensure that you have a back-up plan if for any reason that
person is not able to present with you as you will not be excused from
your presentation on account of the other person’s absence or inability to perform.
Q: What do you mean when you say, “all students are expected to be ready”?
A: It means that you are to be mentally prepared to present as you are called upon. It
also means that you are to come physically prepared with all the things you need for
your speech, such as visual aids (props), your written plan and index cards.
Q: My topic is Depression and Self-Harm. For a visual aid, can I use pictures of
someone who cuts their arm or someone who committed a gruesome suicide to
make my presentation more dramatic?
A: The very fact that you are asking this question means you already know that that is
an issue. Please don’t do that. Please be aware of your audience and be sensitive to their
feelings. Do not include very graphic images that could scare or have other negative
emotional effects on your audience. If you are still not sure, please use your teacher to
vet your options.
Ask for help. Be humble and willing to accept feedback and make changes.
Time your presentation before the actual presentation day. Make sure it’s not exactly 5
minutes because anything can happen and this could send you over time. Four and a half
minutes is a safe time to work with.
Please note the mark scheme/rubric for your oral presentation. Your oral presentation is
marked out of 10 marks.
Facets of Rating Scale Score
Tasks 0 1 2 3 4
Fluency of Jerky, halting Choppy Awkward but Intelligible;
Delivery Fragmentary acceptable clear;
Long pauses intonation; smooth;
continuous; well-paced
natural flow
Structure Connections with Connections Limited Coherent; Clear
Comprehensi topic/issue with comprehension Key issues organization
bility and unclear topic/issue Lacks well of ideas;
development Incomprehensible unclear; elaboration; developed Sustained
of topic Not depicted key Very Slightly Well treatment of
issues incoherent in incoherent in expressed in topic/theme/is
Style of parts; parts; many parts; sues
presentation does Utterance Somewhat Very Style very
not always aid in incorrect limited effective effective and
depicting the key style impactful in
issues communicati
ng
Language use Lacks basic Ideas limited Adequate style Accurate use
and words; lacks to inadequate of presentation of grammar
vocabulary specificity; many words and Basic sentences Effective use
errors in words jargon lacks are used; control of grammar
and sentences specificity of basic and
Limited range grammatical vocabulary
of grammar structures; High degree
Reliance on of fluency
practical Rich
expressions vocabulary
Total: _____ / 10
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