I offer you my hand
straight from the heart
A hand of surrender
to my feelings for you
A hand that always
will protect you
A hand that'll go
through fire for you
But it is also a hand
that's terrified
that your hand will let go
Wonderful hand that always comes up. Nicely presented poem.
Your poems ae full of love, because they are dedicated and written with care about that YOU whom you love so much!
This is a smartest poem, BUT few would be aware of it, sure, read the last line and THINK. Thank you so much for this most beautiful and meaningful poem of LIFE. With the very best wishes, Sylvia Frances Chan, poetess, evangelist and world traveler. God´s Blessings in Abundance. NOTE: my comment for FORBIDDEN FRUIT was not placed, reason unknown. That was a very important response upon the poem, it looked like GOD did not wish that.
ANOTHER NEWEST NOTE: That poem is found back. Thank you all for your attention and the most for the Poet himself, Dankjewel, groetjes, Sylvia Frances Chan
Beautiful simply beautiful. A creative and heartwarming piece. Thanks for sharing such great write
A hand that always will protect you A hand that'll go through fire for you beautiful expression beautiful 10+++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.