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    The document provides a chart outlining revision strategies for RADaR. R stands for Replace and suggests replacing contractions, dropped quotes, clause errors, unclear sentences, verb inconsistencies, subject-verb agreement issues, pronoun disagreement, ambiguous pronouns, point of view inconsistencies, and weak or overused words. A stands for Add and suggests adding clauses/phrases, thesis reminders, counterclaims, text evidence, commentary, quote integration methods, transitional words/phrases, strong diction, and rhetorical devices. D stands for Delete and suggests deleting auxiliary verbs, dummy subjects like "there is/are", unnecessary relative pronouns, unrelated ideas or details, and repeated words or phrases not used for rhetorical effect. R stands for

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    The document provides a chart outlining revision strategies for RADaR. R stands for Replace and suggests replacing contractions, dropped quotes, clause errors, unclear sentences, verb inconsistencies, subject-verb agreement issues, pronoun disagreement, ambiguous pronouns, point of view inconsistencies, and weak or overused words. A stands for Add and suggests adding clauses/phrases, thesis reminders, counterclaims, text evidence, commentary, quote integration methods, transitional words/phrases, strong diction, and rhetorical devices. D stands for Delete and suggests deleting auxiliary verbs, dummy subjects like "there is/are", unnecessary relative pronouns, unrelated ideas or details, and repeated words or phrases not used for rhetorical effect. R stands for

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    The document provides a chart outlining revision strategies for RADaR. R stands for Replace and suggests replacing contractions, dropped quotes, clause errors, unclear sentences, verb inconsistencies, subject-verb agreement issues, pronoun disagreement, ambiguous pronouns, point of view inconsistencies, and weak or overused words. A stands for Add and suggests adding clauses/phrases, thesis reminders, counterclaims, text evidence, commentary, quote integration methods, transitional words/phrases, strong diction, and rhetorical devices. D stands for Delete and suggests deleting auxiliary verbs, dummy subjects like "there is/are", unnecessary relative pronouns, unrelated ideas or details, and repeated words or phrases not used for rhetorical effect. R stands for

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    The document provides a chart outlining revision strategies for RADaR. R stands for Replace and suggests replacing contractions, dropped quotes, clause errors, unclear sentences, verb inconsistencies, subject-verb agreement issues, pronoun disagreement, ambiguous pronouns, point of view inconsistencies, and weak or overused words. A stands for Add and suggests adding clauses/phrases, thesis reminders, counterclaims, text evidence, commentary, quote integration methods, transitional words/phrases, strong diction, and rhetorical devices. D stands for Delete and suggests deleting auxiliary verbs, dummy subjects like "there is/are", unnecessary relative pronouns, unrelated ideas or details, and repeated words or phrases not used for rhetorical effect. R stands for

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    RADaR Revision Strategies Chart

    R=
    Replace

    Contractions
    Droppedquotes
    Clauseerrors
    Sentencesthatare
    unclear/donotmake
    completesense/awkward
    Verbinconsistencies
    Subject/verbagreement
    Pronoundisagreement
    Ambiguouspronouns
    PointofView
    inconsistencies
    1st&2ndPersonPOV
    Wordsthatareweakor
    notspecific(ex.very,a
    lot,so,really)
    Wordsthatareoverused

    A=
    Add

    Clausesandphrasesto
    varysyntax(Opening,
    Interrupting,&Closing
    Elements)
    ThesisReminders
    Counterclaims
    Textevidence
    Commentary
    demonstratingdepthof
    thinking
    Quoteintegration
    varietyofall4methods
    Transitional
    words/phrases
    Strongdiction
    Rhetoricaldevices
    Rhetoricalappeals

    D=
    Delete

    Auxiliaryverbsnot
    neededtoshowtense
    Thereis&thereare
    Dummysubjects
    Relativepronounthat
    whenitisnot
    necessary
    Unrelatedideasor
    unnecessarydetails
    Repeatedwordsor
    phrasesNOTfor
    rhetoricaleffect

    R=
    Reorder

    Clauseerrors
    Passivevoicetoactive
    voice
    Organizetosupportthe
    argument
    Tomakebettersense
    ortoflowbetter&
    supportthecontrolling
    claim
    Splitinfinitives

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