Name: Sagarkumar Vasantkumar Patel

Program: Masters of Business Administration

To,
Respected Visa Officer
Canadian High Commission

Subject: A humble request to RECONSIDER Study Visa Permit of Canada

Application No: S304735597
UCI No: 1119540109

 Applicant has weak language scores and/or low marks in English courses; I have
concerns with the applicant’s ability to handle an English-language course load, given
the added difficulties for those studying abroad; IELTS results show one band at 5.5 in
core proficiency. See score/marks documents on file.
 On balance, after review of all in format on including PA's previous educational history,
relevance of the proposed course of study and taking into account factors such as
personal establishment; the applicant has failed to satisfy me that they are a bona fide
temporary resident who will leave Canada following the completion of their studies.

English proficiency:-
As per the requirement I have re-appeared for the IELTS exam and completed the same with the
following result as well as fulfill it.

Listening Reading Writing Speaking Overall

6.0 8.0 6.0 6.5 6.5

 Given the applicant’s previous education and/or employment history, I am not satisfied
the motivation to pursue this particular program, at this point in time in Canada, is
reasonable; Previous schooling and/or employment inconsistent with current
educational goals; Illogical study progression.

Academic Background:

As of my academics, I have completed my secondary schooling and higher secondary education

in 2012 from Gujarat Secondary & Higher Secondary Education Board (GSHSEB) with flying
numbers. After that I decided to pursue my career in the field of Bachelor of Engineering with
specialization in Instrumentation & Control Engineering which I had cleared in 2016. After my
study I focus toward my interest and hobbies lead me into business of photography. So that I
included myself in SAGAR DIGITAL STUDIO as a Co-owner of the firm from 2017 to till date.
But learning is never ending process so I have applied for digital marketing course but
unfortunately my application denied so on research with family and close friend for my right
future career growth I selected master of business administration program.
Global business and marketing are essential for modern businesses. For which I believe that
Marketing and Management would be an inevitable element of every organization along with
Accounting and financing. Hence, I have decided to pursue Masters of Business Administration
from University Canada West. India is one of the largest consumer markets in the world, with its
population of middle-class consumers expected to reach about 475 million in 2030.

Extra Curriculum Activities and Experiences:

 Since 2017 I am working as a co-owner in my studio namely Sagar Studio in which I am

doing various task such as baby shoot, pre-wedding, wedding photography, event
shoot, graphic design and commercial shoot that require skills such as photography,
decision making, communication and creative mind-set to get best click and to satisfied
the dreams of clients.

 I enrolled myself in a six months program namely Selfless Humanitarian Service, Ethical
Decision- Making and Spiritual Studies at BAPS Swami Narayan Sanstha, Sarangpur in
that I learned about value-based personal skills, event management, soft skills and
behavioral development and also did off-site fieldwork in rural areas and classes on
understanding social and interpersonal dynamics between June-2016 to December-
2016.

 I have done volunteer work from BAPS Swami Narayan Organization in the
department of audio and video.--continue

The applicant has failed to satisfy me that pursuing the selected program of study is
reasonable given the high cost of international study in Canada when weighed against the
potential career/employment benefits after completion, and the local options available for
similar studies.

Why Canada not India?

In my father’s business I was lacking in some area such as strategic management and business
development model so I was looking for course that can give me knowledge and skills, I initially
took the decision to pursue program in India but I acknowledge that institutes in India are highly
inclined towards theoretical knowledge instead of practical knowledge. In a business world only
having theoretical knowledge is not sufficient to run a successful business. As Canadian Institutes
offer a cutting-edge technological environment with a business education standard that is
accepted worldwide which gives big wings to my career aspects.

There are exclusive subjects that I am going to learn Introduction to Management information
system, Managerial Economics for Decision Making, Enterprise resource planning system,
Strategic marketing and branding and Strategic leadership capstone as this course introduces to
Canadian education, cultural, business, legal and ethical issues for dealing with Canadian
business and society which would be rarely available in India.
Why I am intended to study Master of Business Administration (MBA) program :-

Previously, I choose Cumberland College’s Digital Marketing course and got rejection and then
I do research about programs and colleges also I took advise from my friends, family members,
colleagues and my senior faculties. Fortunately, I came across MBA from University Canada
West. This course will assist me in comprehending all cross-functional levels of enterprise
complexity as well as other crucial stages that will enable me to apply such improvements to
my future professional endeavors. As a result, I will be knowledgeable about the difficulties that
different corporate functions-such as information systems, finance, operations, sales and
marketing, or human resources-face. It will complement my core strengths as a manager.
Additionally, I want to arm myself with management methods and marketing skills that will
improve my performance effectiveness.

I already have deep understanding and knowledge about studio industry but sometimes I am
lacking in management so the proposed course will teach me some vital skills such as
entrepreneurship, leadership, business analytics, resources management, accounting, project
management and marketing. Therefore, this program will fulfill all my necessities in the
business world and will equip me with vital expertise. This will definitely help me to boost my
career in India.

With the study I can also get some certificates such as Certified Digital Marketing Professional
(CDMP) and Certified Digital Marketing Professional (CDMP) by which I will be able to do my
work in a proper way at every level.

Reasons to study in University Canada West (Vancouver):

A closer look revealed that University Canada West is one of Canada's largest, most prestigious,
diverse, and highly recognized universities. I also came upon their website and brochure. In
order to thrive in today's industry and build a successful profession of one's choosing, the
university is renowned for the broad range of career options it provides to the student. Due to
UCW's location in Vancouver's commercial district, students will have the opportunity to study
from some of the biggest companies on earth and also the city is prominent hub of
photography and film industry that helps me to gain more depth knowledge about doing
business at international level as well as strategies to attract clients from the global market.

UCW provides graduate and undergraduate projects designed to prepare students for careers
in their chosen industries. Since this is a serious educational institution, programs are taught by
faculty who are leaders in their fields and renowned for their industry research projects. They
impart this knowledge to students, ensuring that they are encouraged to develop their latent
potential and are well-prepared for subsequent exams or their ideal career. The institution
pushes its students to achieve academically, reflecting the high standards UCW has for
everybody entering its doors.
 Future Prospects and Program Learning Outcomes:

 Respond strategically to business challenges and opportunities.

 Assess ethical implications of business activities.
 Develop, implement and evaluate solutions to business problems.
 Formulate business decisions and systematic analysis that reflects critical thinking.
 Demonstrate effective skills to collaborate with diverse groups of people.
 Lead teams through the resolution of problems and successful completion of projects and
tasks.
 Integrate personal values and perspectives into problem solving and take responsibility for
decisions.
 Communicate ideas persuasively (written and oral) as a result of thorough analysis of
information.
 Gather, analyze and synthesize information for a business context.

Following reasons to come back to India

 After learning above mention skills, my ultimate goal is to enhance my own firm with the
help of latest international business skills. As my partner (father) will focus on technical
part in studio house, so that I can be able to handle the marketing and team management
part which is essential requirement to reach my business on next level. This dream can be
possible if I will learn business skills from International Platform such as Canada.
 Also, the growths of E-commerce companies in India are rising rapidly so the requirements
of product shoot and making catalogue are demanded task for the photography firms. This
will create opportunity for me. (need to edit)
 Additionally, I have always stayed close to my family and my parents. So after returning to
India, I will be able to do advancement in my family business and take care of my parents
and family. My parents have done a lot for me and I consider that it is my foremost duty
and responsibility to stay with them and fulfill their dreams as well.
 My family is firmly established in India and all of our assets—both movable and
immovable-are located there including my studio setup, strengthening my ties to my
native.

Honestly, my ambition is not only to limit myself to India but also to expand myself globally
and cover at least the Asian region of the globe, providing employment to many in the
process. After gaining outstanding skillet and experience I wanted to run my own business as
it was dream of my father which I had to fulfill. I do not want to miss this opportunity to get
an education which is not only theoretical but has the practical component as well which a
student usually misses in India.
 I would be really thankful to respected visa officer to consider the above points and give me a
chance to improving my skills and personality in multi-cultural environment of Canada with high
latest technological and research updates.

Regards,
Sagarkumar Vasantkumar Patel