Rhyme of The Dead Self
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The speaker seems to take sadistic pleasure in murdering his This allusion to the death and resurrection of no lesser figure
former self: he's "chuckling" as he relieves the poor young than Jesus Christ (said to have risen from the dead after his
fellow of his "foolish brains." The allusions he makes in the third day in the tomb) makes it clear just how done the speaker
course of the murder similarly suggest just how completely is. The death of his young, idealistic self is also the death of his
done he is with naive dreams of love: belief in anything that resembles hope, joy, or redemption, let
alone reverence. The speaker, in other words, is now a hard-
[...] I dragged out his foolish brains bitten cynic.
that were full of pretty love-tales heighho the holly
and emptied them holus bolus to the dr drains
ains While the speaker's attitude toward the death of the "pale
youth" seems to be an uncomplicated "good riddance," the
When the speaker "emptie[s]" those brains "to the drains," he's reader might feel that this murder is tragic. Clearly, the speaker
paraphrasing a line from John Keats's "OdeOde to a Nightingale
Nightingale," in can't bear the pain of the heartbreak he hinted at in the second
which a melancholy speaker feels as numb as if he'd "emptied stanza. In pushing that pain away, he's also pushing away a lot of
some dull opiate to the drains" (that is, drunk a sedative) as he sweetness, gentleness, and hope.
listens to the song of the titular night bird. But then, perhaps that "pale youth" that represents all these
That reference both mocks the dreams of gentle qualities isn't so thoroughly dead as the speaker wants him to
poets—people, that is, like both Keats and the speaker's former be. Listen to the simile here:
self—and suggests that the younger self's "brains" were
themselves opiated, lost in druggy visions of love. The comical sloughed lik
likee a snak
snakeskin
eskin there he lies
addition of "holus bolus," which means "all at once" and sounds
like great lumps of brain tumbling into the gutter, makes the To shed a former self like a snakeskin is a very different thing
scornful picture complete. than to kill it: when a snakeskin is shed, there's still a snake! This
speaker, who still turns to poetry in his time of trial, may still
There's even more cheery derision in the speaker's cry of
carry a lot of that disavowed, brainless youth inside him,
POETIC DEVICES Here, the speaker invokes the Christian story of Jesus's
resurrection: Jesus is said to have risen from the dead after
ALLUSION three days in the tomb. By categorically rejecting the idea that
This poem's allusions to everything from folk songs to poetry to his younger self might "rise" again, the speaker makes it clear
Christianity set the stage for the speaker's thorough rejection that he is altogether done with the hopes, dreams, and ideals of
of his youthful hopes and dreams. his past; his disillusionment is complete.
When the speaker sneers at the "lily-white lad" he once was,
he's quoting an old folk song, "Green
Green Grow the Rushes, O O." But Where Allusion appears in the poem:
he's also alluding to a more general stereotype of the "pale • Line 2: “that pale lily-white lad”
youth"—a dreamy, poetic fellow who believes wholeheartedly in • Line 6: “heighho the holly”
"pretty love-tales." Such pale youths, the speaker feels, are • Line 7: “emptied them holus bolus to the drains”
uniformly deluded. • Lines 9-10: “he shall not rise / on the third day or any
He underscores that point in line 7, where he describes other day”
"empt[ying]" his former self's brains "holus bolus to the drains."
Here, he's paraphrasing a line from the poet John Keats's "Ode Ode EXTENDED METAPHOR
to a Nightingale
Nightingale": in the first lines of that poem, the speaker, The poem's sole metaphor suggests that the speaker's
listening to the song of a nightingale, feels so numb it's as if he'd rejection of his youthful idealism has consequences.
"emptied some dull opiate to the drains" (in other words,
In line 3, the speaker describes his murder of his own younger
gulped down a sedative). Keats and his poetry are often
self like this:
associated with a kind of romantic, dreamy, pale-youth attitude.
This metaphor thus grows right out of the heart of this poem's The speaker can't stop at saying he "strangled" his former self:
complicated emotions. On the one hand, this is a comic poem he has to reiterate that he "choked him," too, like Macbeth
about doing away with a goofy, dreamy, rather silly innocence: obsessing over King Duncan's murder. His repetition in "these
these
facing facts, growing up, and rejecting a false idealism. On the my hands these claws" similarly makes him sound like a villain in
other hand, it's a tragedy about the loss of a sweet, beautiful, a play. The high drama of these repetitions helps to give the
hopeful perspective. Growing up, this metaphor suggests, poem some dark humor, hyperbolically presenting the ordinary
doesn't necessarily mean becoming better or wiser; perhaps it (if depressing) process of disillusionment as murder most foul
foul.
might even mean becoming a grim and beastly cynic.
Other forms of repetition suggest the speaker's disgust with
his former self. He twice describes him as "pale," once at the
Where Extended Metaphor appears in the poem:
beginning of the poem and once at the end, stressing the poor
• Line 3: “these my hands these claws” silly kid's delicacy. And his polyptoton in the second stanza, in
which he first refers to his younger self's "foolish
foolish brains" and
SIMILE then decries his "ruinous folly
folly," makes his disdain no mystery.
He also rejects love itself more than once: "dreams of lo lovve" and
A lone simile hints that the speaker's victory over his innocence
"pretty lolovve-tales" are both flung aside.
and naivety might not be as complete as he hopes. After
crowing in triumph over the corpse of the "lily-white lad" that is In the final stanza, emphatic anaphor
anaphoraa suggests just how done
his former self, the speaker declares: with this whole mess the speaker feels. Speaking of his dead
self, he declares, "he
he shall not rise"; a few lines later, he insists
sloughed lik
likee a snak
snakeskin
eskin there he lies "he
he shall not trouble me again." Perhaps, however, this
repetition hints that the speaker isn't quite so sure he really is
If the speaker's former self is like a snakeskin, it's just a dried- free of his past illusions: maybe he protests just a little too
out husk, without life or motion; he's done with it and it can't much
much.
hurt him. However, there's a difference between a shed skin
and a dead snake! Where Repetition appears in the poem:
All along, the speaker has been delighted by the idea that he's • Line 2: “strangled him,” “pale lily-white lad”
strangled his former self, getting rid of him for good. Here in • Line 3: “choked him,” “these my hands these claws”
the last lines, though, it seems as if something else has • Line 4: “dreaming”
happened. Rather than killing his past self completely, the • Line 5: “foolish”
speaker has only shed that self: he might have gotten rid of an • Line 6: “pretty love-tales”
old skin, but he's still the snake who grew it. • Line 8: “dreams of love,” “folly”
This final simile thus suggests that the speaker's declaration of • Line 9: “pale youth,” “and he shall not rise”
victory might be premature. Much as he might wish to be • Line 10: “day,” “day”
completely rid of his own "folly," cynically hardened against the • Line 12: “and he shall not trouble me”
world and untouchable, it seems fairly likely he'll have to shed
another "dead self" somewhere down the line. Perhaps it's just ALLITERATION
another kind of naivety to believe that one can be totally free of Punchy alliter
alliteration
ation supports the poem's cutting, comical tone
tone.
one's illusions.
For instance, listen to the repeated sounds in the poem's first
two lines:
Where Simile appears in the poem:
• Line 11: “sloughed like a snakeskin there he lies” Tonight I have taken all that I was
SPEAKER
FORM, METER, & RHYME
The poem's speaker is an embittered man. Scarred by
FORM disappointment in love, he's prepared to throttle the younger
Written in free vverse
erse (with hints of a rough, irregular four-beat self who got him into this predicament—a sweet "lily-white lad"
rhythm), "Rhyme of the Dead Self" is neatly organized into who believed in the "pretty-love tales" the speaker now feels
three four-line stanzas (or quatr
quatrains
ains) rhymed ABAB. The were only ever illusions.