Madina report

Download as docx, pdf, or txt
Download as docx, pdf, or txt
You are on page 1of 3

You are requested to indicate the corrections which have been made in the dissertation for Final

dissertation Submission. Please attaché if information is detailed.


COMPLIANCE REPORT FOR:
NANNYONGA MADINAH
22/MPA/KLA/WKD/0046

RESEARCH TOPIC:
EQUITY AND LEARNER PERFORMANCE OF SELECTED PUBLIC SECONDARY
SCHOOLS IN MUKONO - UGANDA
Supervisor
Sign…………………………..Date …………………………………….
Dr. Malunda Paul

Date Chapters Comments Responses Page Sign


14/12/2024 One No references for most work. All citations used were 1-57
added to the reference
list
Add some results in your The results of analysis xiv
abstract. were added to the
abstract
Clarify on the theory the study The theory of the 4-5
adopted, is it “equality” or study was specified
“equity” theory. which is equity”
theory.
The problem statement is Evidence was added to 8
clear; the candidate should the statement of the
add more evidence. problem
Objectives, questions, The study objectives,
9
hypothesis and literature show questions, hypotheses
that you are studying equal revisited and improved
service provision but the
model shows distribution.
Provide clear source for your Clear source for the 10
conceptual model. The conceptual framework
sources provided are not was added and
referenced anywhere.
referenced
14/12/2024 Two Clarify on which theory you The theory of the 14
used. study was revised
You are requested to indicate the corrections which have been made in the dissertation for Final
dissertation Submission. Please attaché if information is detailed.
which is equity”
theory.
14/12/2024 Three Specify clearly your unit of The unit of analysis 32
analysis and unit of inquiry. wa specified which is
correlation analysis
Remove document review Document review 29-30
from data collection method and instrument
instruments since it has no was removed from the
method for data analysis. study since were not
Instead just cite the used
documents used in your study.

Methodology lacks The section of 33


measurement of variables measurement of
section (how did the candidate variables was added
measure his/her variables and and how variables
where did he/she adopt the were measured
measurements from).

What tool did you use to The tool for analyzing 32


analyze qualitative data? qualitative data was
Vivo program
14/12/2024 Four Candidate’s Findings are The findings were 50
well-presented and clearly revised and improved.
discussed. However he/she The moderating
introduces a moderating variables was removed
variable on page 54, please
clarify if you have a
moderating variable, if not
remove the word moderating
from table 4.12.
You are requested to indicate the corrections which have been made in the dissertation for Final
dissertation Submission. Please attaché if information is detailed.
Five Add more Recommendations Recommendation on 56
that reflect on policy not only policy were added
practice.
Provide clear limitations Limitations of the 57
section to study and give study were added
suggestions on what should be
done for those limitations.
Elaborate more on areas for The areas for the study 58
further research. were revisited and
improved

Thanks for your support and cooperation

You might also like

pFad - Phonifier reborn

Pfad - The Proxy pFad of © 2024 Garber Painting. All rights reserved.

Note: This service is not intended for secure transactions such as banking, social media, email, or purchasing. Use at your own risk. We assume no liability whatsoever for broken pages.


Alternative Proxies:

Alternative Proxy

pFad Proxy

pFad v3 Proxy

pFad v4 Proxy