Haunted Rough Draft
Haunted Rough Draft
Haunted Rough Draft
Written by
Tia Brooks
Sadly for her, this is her reality as we pan out to see the
state of her apartment: DIRTY CLOTHES spewed across the
floor, PILES OF DISGUSTING DISHES filling up the sink, and a
KNOCKED OVER VASE FILLED WITH RED ROSES lying on the living
room floor.
MOM (V.O.)
(softly)
Hi Rose, it’s Mom again... We’re
all very worried about you. Please
contact us as soon as you can.
(beat)
I love you...
BEEP! Rose doesn’t move an inch from where she stands as she
continues to look outside. We hear a prominent CLINK as we
cut to...
2 BEGIN FLASHBACK: 2
2.
END FLASHBACK.
As the sun starts to set, Rose’s face changes from zoned out
to extremely exhausted before she falls asleep, dropping her
phone on the ground.
DAD (V.O.)
Hey honeybunny, it’s Dad.
DAD (V.O.)
I know times are really difficult
right now, but I hope you know that
he doesn’t deserve you. No man
should ever talk to you like
that...
(beat)
(MORE)
3.
5 BEGIN FLASHBACK: 5
GABRIEL
(nervous)
Hey baby?
ROSE
Hm?
GABRIEL
So Joel wants me to host a party
tonight at my place tonight, so I
won’t be here for dinner.
ROSE
What? But we planned to have a date
tonight.
GABRIEL
I know, I know, but I haven’t seen
him in forever-
ROSE
Oh no, don’t pull that with me!
4.
ROSE
(angry)
We both agreed to put more effort
in this relationship!
GABRIEL
(angry)
Yeah and part of that is letting
each other be independent from one
another!
ROSE
Independency isn’t ditching your
girlfriend for a last minute plan
with your friends!
GABRIEL
(exasperated)
I can’t do this with you right now.
Gabriel throws one of the dishes into the sink and storms
past Rose to grab his coat and keys from a hook in the wall.
ROSE
Are you serious right now?!
END FLASHBACK.
It’s like she’s reliving that moment in her head over again
except she doesn’t have the same melancholy look on her face.
She almost looks... content with herself.
FADE IN:
KATHARINE (V.O.)
Rose?! Gabriel has been missing
almost seventy-two hours now! Why
are you not answering anyone?! Rose
please, what is going on?!
10 BEGIN FLASHBACK: 10
Rose lets out a deep sigh before she opens her door and
silently walks into Gabriel’s house.
14 END MONTAGE. 14
END FLASHBACK.
CUT TO BLACK.