TESOL V2N2 C8 I Think That Perhaps
TESOL V2N2 C8 I Think That Perhaps
TESOL V2N2 C8 I Think That Perhaps
Our results seem to suggest that in Third World countries the extensive
use of land to grow exportation products tends to impoverish these
countries' populations even more.
The epistemic verb seem combined with the modal lexical verb suggest
allows the speaker to avoid making a categorical statement and to negotiate
some degree of flexibility for his claims.
2. Salager-Meyer (1993) and Banks (1994) claim that the exclusive association
of hedges with evasiveness can obscure some important functions of hedging,
and that expressing a lack of certainty does not necessarily show confusion or
vagueness. Indeed, one could consider hedges as ways of being more precise
in reporting results. Hedging may present the true state of the writers' under-
standing and may be used to negotiate an accurate representation of the state of
the knowledge under discussion. In fact, academic writers may well wish to
reduce the strength of claims simply because stronger statements would not be
justified by the experimental data presented. In such cases, researchers are not
saying less than what they mean but are rather saying precisely what they mean
by not overstating their experimental results. Being too certain can often be
unwise. Academics want their readers to know that they do not claim to have the
final word on the subject, choosing instead to remain vague in their statements.
Hedges then are not a cover-up tactic, but rather a resource used to express
Our analyses indicate that higher doses of fish oil can benefit
individuals with untreated hypertension.
the authors are presenting a claim to the scientifIc community while trying to
convince their readers of the relevance of their fIndings. But, in doing so, they
remain somewhat vague because they cannot claim to have the fInal word on the
subject. In the social interaction involved in all scientifIc publishing, hedges
permit academics to present their claims while simultaneously presenting
themselves as the "humble servants of the scientific community" (Myers,
1989: 4). As soon as a claim becomes part of the literature, it is then possible to
refer to it without any hedging, as the following example illustrates:
Thus, because new results/conclusions have to be thoughtfully fIt into the exist-
4. Banks (1994) argues that a certain degree of hedging has become conven-
tionalized, i.e., that the function of hedges is not necessarily to avoid face-
threatening acts (definition No.1), but simply to conform to an established
writing style. This established style of writing arose as a consequence of the
combination of the needs and stimuli mentioned in definitions 1,2 and 3 above.
A totally unhedged style would not be considered seriously by journal editors.
It should be made clear at this stage that it is difficult to be sure in any
particular instance which of the four above-mentioned concepts is intended nor
need we assume that the authors of hedged utterances always know why they
hedge their statements in the first place. As we explained elsewhere (Salager-
Meyer, 1994), hedges are first and foremost the product of a mental attitude, and
decisions about the function of a span of language are bound to be subjective.
Taxonomy of Hedges
Although not totally comprehensive nor categorically watertight, the scheme
below represents the most widely used hedging categories,2 at least in scientific
English. Typically, hedging is expressed through the use of the following
"strategic stereotypes":
Our analyses suggest that high doses of the drug can lead to relevant
blood pressure reduction. (Here too we have a cumulative hedging
effect)
These results indicate that the presence of large vessel peripheral
arterial disease may reflect a particular susceptibility to the develop-
ment of atherosclerosis. (Same cumulative hedging effect as above)
In spite of its limitations, our study appears to have a number of
important strengths.
Without specific training, medical students communication skills
seem to decline during medical training.
If true, then, our study contradicts the myth that fishing attracts the
bravest and strongest men.
As can be seen then, all the forms presented above imply that
the statements in which they appear contain personal beliefs based
on plausible reasoning (or empirical data). Without these "strategic
stereotypes," readers would imply that the information conveyed
pertains to universally established knowledge.
IPARTICULARIINDIVIDUAL I
Because case reports are clinical observations of a single (or a few) generally
rare and even unique entities, they are almost purely descriptive and, therefore,
relatively unhedged. Typical of case reports are short-story and anecdote-like
sentences such as the following:
A previously well 4-year-old boy fell about one meter from a wall
and struck the back of his head on concrete. He was not knocked out
and got up immediately and continued playing. He did not complain
of headache and visual disturbance but shortly afterwards he vomited
and his mother took him to the accident and emergency department.
By contrast, review articles collect, select, order and interpret the huge
outpouring of scientific reports and present relevant (and often controversial)
findings and generalizations in a form useful for researchers outside the
immediate group working on a given problem. This is why in almost every one
of the review paper statements, there is, as Bazerman and Paradis say (1990: 60),
"some qualifying adverb or adjective that makes the statement more cautious":
The panel suggests that all adults 20 years of age and over should
have non-fasting serum cholesterol measured at least once every 5
years.
This seems to support the possibility that depression may be an
important clinical feature in monosymptomatic hypochondriacal
psychosis. (Observe the cumulative effect of hedging: both the main
and the subordinate clauses are hedged.)
The frequency of occurrence and types of hedges are not evenly distributed
throughout different sections of academic papers (Banks 1994, Salager-Meyer
1994). The typical introduction section of academic papers (Swales 1990)
includes, inter alia, a survey of the field. It is a hypothesis-making opening
section where the unknown or poorly understood is delineated and where
scientists mention (mostly with hedge-attributing verbs such as to indicate,
to seem, to suggest) previous research which bears on the same issue as the one
their article deals with.
The writers use hedging to convince the reader that work remains to be
done in their area of inquiry (what Swales refers to as "establishing a niche"
1990a: 145), i.e., to suggest that the "niche" they wish to establish does indeed
exist. The questions raised in the Introduction section will be answered in the
This finding strongly suggests that these eNS sites contain neurons
and fibers.
One explanation could be that basal glycemia was 151 vs. 127 mg/dl
for NA.
Pedagogical Justification
In spite of the widespread use of hedges in academic writing, this phenomenon is
largely ignored in pedagogical materials geared to non-native speakers of English
(NNSE). In an excellent review and critical analysis of ESPIEAP textbooks, Hyland
(1994) concludes that in most ESP course books explanations on epistemic
strategies are inadequate, the practice material is limited, alternatives for modal
verbs are omitted, and empirically-based information concerning the socio-
linguistic rules of English scientific discourse communities is absent. In other words,
the important pragmatic area represented by hedging devices is under-represented
(not to say neglected) in most ESP course books and style manuals. As Hyland
(1994: 244) states, "the overall picture indicates a need for greater and more
systematic attention to be given to this important interpersonal strategy."
There are two clear pedagogical justifications for explicitly addressing
hedging as an important linguistic function and for assisting learners (even
those in the earliest stages) to develop an awareness of the principles and
mechanics of its use.
Reading exercises
1.1. Ask students to circle tentative verbs and modal auxiliaries in a
passage:
Our results show a relation between smoking habit and the pro-
portion of DNA modification in cervical epithelium. The presence of
modification in cervical epithelium and the correlation with smoking
habit strongly suggests that the modifications are a consequence of
exposure to tobacco compounds ... Women with high proportions of
DNA modifications may have an increased susceptibility to cervical
cancer. Our study then contradicts the results of the International
Agency for Research on Cancer (1986) which claimed that there was
not enough evidence to conclude that smoking is a cause of cervical
cancer. Prospective studies of women with a high proportion of modi-
fied cervical DNA should be carried out to establish the risk.
Writing exercises
In preparing a written statement, ESP students have to choose speech acts that
are socioculturally appropriate (e.g., knowing how to disagree with the results of
2.1. Present students with utterances containing facts and ask them
to rewrite the sentences with tentative verbs of interpretation/opinion
(or vice versa, to present students with opinion or comment utterances
and ask them to rewrite the sentences with assertive verbs). The
following passage could serve as an example:
2.2. Explain to the students that when they report their own study,
they should not sound too sure of the benefits (either practical or
theoretical) of their work, without undermining the importance of
their research. Students should know, for example, that tentative
verbs such as to appear, to seem, to suggest can be used instead of
the modals may, can, could to generalize from results when present-
ing their findings and to emphasize the speculative nature of their
statements.
Conclusion
Hedging is a human enterprise, a resource which is inherent in common
language. In our daily interactions with our peers, we, human beings-as social
beings, par excellence-feel the need to modulate our speech acts in order to
guarantee a certain level of acceptability and the possibility of coexistence. The
same remark applies to scientific language which is a product of human
relations.
The "strategic stereotypes" called hedges permit language users to say
something and to comment on what they are saying. From the repertoire of
linguistic forms at their disposal, scientists-as any other language user-resort
to those forms which better fit their communicative purposes and which they
think will allow them to gain communal adherence and warrant the highest
degree of acceptability for the claims they present to the world's store of knowl-
edge, i.e., to the scientific community at large.
Frangoise Salager-Meyer holds an. M.A. in Russian language and literature from
the University of Lyon (France) and a Ph.D. in Foreign Language Education from
the University of Texas at Austin. She has taught Russian for Specific Purposes
and French at the University of Texas at Austin and has been teaching ESP at
the Graduate School of Medicine of the University of the Andes Merida, (Venezuela)
since 1980. Her research interests include discourse analysis and contrastive
rhetoric.
Notes:
1. The examples presented throughout this paper are authentic state-
ments drawn from the British Medical Journal (1993, Vol 306)