Final Paper - Academic Writing
Final Paper - Academic Writing
Achievement
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Literature Review
Writing has been widely seen as the most pivotal and taxing skill within formal
really important, especially when one enters a university or enrolls in graduate studies,
because ‘‘students entering academic disciplines need specialized literacy that consists of
the ability to use discipline-specific rhetorical and linguistic conventions to serve their
purposes as writers’’ (Berkenkotter et al., 1989, para. 2). Bridgeman and Carlson (1984),
for instance, conducted a survey of the writing needs of entering undergraduates and
relatively high number of international student enrollments. The result indicated that
writing was crucial not only for graduate schemes but also for professional success after
graduation and the most successful practicing engineers were all good at writing.
Similarly, Zhu and Flaitz (2005) noted that both undergraduate and graduate students
expressed desperate needs for producing good academic writing and that this skill needed
to be sharpened. As a result, deficiency in writing may hinder students from many aspects
of life.
especially for students who are studying English as a second language (L2) or a foreign
language (Graham, Harris & Mason, 2005; Zhu & Flaitz, 2005; Bridgeman & Carlson,
1984; Jenkins et al., 1993). Acknowledging the importance and the intractable nature of
writing, over the past decades, scholars have conducted numerous studies to suggest
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consensus among scholars is that motivation is one of the powerful factors affecting
concept of L2 motivation as “the extent to which the individual works or strives to learn
the language because of a desire to do so and the satisfaction experienced in this activity”
(p. 10). Motivation which gives impetus to action has been receiving much attention from
researchers as it has proved to be useful and important (Miner, 2003). Dörnyei (2005) is
in agreement when he claimed that if students did not maintain strong motivation, they
could not achieve their ultimate learning goals despite their exceptional learning
Cognitive psychologists, e.g., Deci and Ryan (1985), proposed two types of
motivations: intrinsic and extrinsic motivation. According to them, learners with intrinsic
motivation do the activities because of their own pleasure and satisfaction. In other
words, there are no external cues, e.g., promised rewards or pressure, needed to trigger
their behavior. Learners with extrinsic motivation, on the other hand, are driven by
externally imposed incentives or punishments. The learners perform a task because they
either expect to receive some tangible rewards or approval or are afraid of losing some
motivation express positive attitudes toward the community of the target language and
motivated learners want to learn a language due to functional purposes (e.g., getting a
better job, attaining social status, etc.). In the area of L2 motivation, integrative and
instrumental motivation has been the most influential theoretical model and “the centre of
studies, Gardner along with other co-authors reported that students driven by integrative
factors were more successful than those with instrumental motivation (see, e.g., Gardner,
However, the concept of integrativeness and instrumentality was critiqued for lack
his associates (1959, 1985) were challenged by numerous studies. The study investigating
(1961) and the study conducted by Lukmani (1972) exploring motivation to learn English
of Marathi-speaking high school students revealed that the more successful students were
instrumentally motivated. Dörnyei (2009) also contended that the notion of integrative
motivation was “rather limiting” and “did not make too much sense in many language
learning environments” (p. 10). As a result, Dörnyei (2005, 2009) attempted to put
second language acquisition and determining the learning outcome (Yousefi &
learner’s work and study, yet presents challenges for most writers. Therefore, in an effort
to facilitate academic writing, investigating the relation between L2MSS and the intended
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globalization, Dörnyei (2005) first introduced the L2MSS, based on the theories of
possible selves (Markus and Nurius, 1986) and self-discrepancy (Higgins, 1987). This
An individual has “ideas, beliefs and images about their potential and about their
goals, hopes, fears” (Markus & Nurius, 1986, p. 955), explaining that the self-system and
specific behavior are strongly connected to each other. This relation had been examined
explicitly when Markus and Nurius (1985) proposed the possible selves theory,
representing “individuals’ ideas of what they might become, what they would like to
become, and what they are afraid of becoming” (p. 954) in the form of three distinct
components: the expected-self, the hoped-self, and the fear-self. This cognitive concept
functions as future self-guides, providing not only motivation for behavior in the future
but also a context for judgment of now-self (Markus & Nurius, 1986).
that motivation comes from the desire to reduce the discomfort caused by the gap
between their hope self and their actual self (Dörnyei, 2009). The three components were
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used, but precisely defined as technical terms, including: the ideal self, the ought-to self,
and the actual self. Among them, the first two components refer to a person’s self-
mechanism while the remaining present self-direction to pilot the real self.
Reconceptualization of L2MSS
dynamic of second language learners. Since 2011, many studies have been carried out to
2019), Saudi (see, e.g., Moskovsky & Alrabai, 2009; Moskovsky et al., 2016), Turkey
(Yetkin, & Ekin, 2018), Indonesia (Subekti, 2018), etc., showing that the three internal
L2MSS’ components
Dörnyei’s (2005, 2009) L2MSS consists of three components: the Ideal L2 Self,
the Ought-to L2 Self and the L2 Learning Experience. Being the center of this model,
learners' desired self and their current self (Dörnyei, 2009) has received a large amount of
attention from researchers. It has been found to be the strongest predictor of the other
dynamic nature of second language learners, especially with learner’s subjective intended
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The theoretical framework L2MSS not only inherited from previous research on
motivation but also innovated the ideas from Gardner (1972, 1985) to make them relevant
(Gardner, 1985) and the Ideal L2 Self (Dörnyei, 2005, 2009) refer to the concept of
identification of oneself, they are not mutually exclusive, but complement each other
(Claro, 2019). The difference between these two is that while integrated motivation
concerns identification with an external factor, namely the L2 group or community, the
Ideal L2 Self represents identification with an internal factor because it relates to their
meeting external expectations and avoidance of bad results (Dörnyei, 2005). This less-
internalized dimension entails more with the one’s attributes during their learning, instead
The strong relation between this dimension and learners' motivation during their
among most researchers on the importance of the Ideal L2 as the strongest predictor of
to be more significant in many studies. Regarding studies in the Turkey context, society
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learn language (Yetkin & Ekin, 2018). Csizér and Kormos (2009) also found that parents'
external factors was also found in Asian culture where influence from community and
peer played an equal or stronger role in shaping motivation compared to the Ideal L2 Self
(see, e.g., Kim & Kim, 2012; Taguchi et al., 2009; Huang et al., 2015; Kong et al., 2018).
attitude when they engage in their language class (Dörnyei, 2009), highlighting the
A Dutch linguist, Kees De Bot (2014) argued that motivation is dynamic due to
various external distractions. Diane Larsen-Freeman (2014) in her ‘Ten ‘Lessons’ from
Complex Dynamic System Theory: What is on Offer’ also stated, “A change in any of
these contributing factors (the time of day of the class, the teacher, the method,
interaction with other students, etc.) may restore the learner’s motivation and lead to
more salutary results” (p. 15). Therefore, students’ engagement directly linking to
However, despite the need to be examined carefully, this component receives less
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attention from researchers in comparison with the other two self-based dimensions in
L2MSS. Therefore, many have argued for its prominent role in shaping L2 motivation.
Ushioda’ s (2009) studies found that there was a strong relation between learners’ past
experience and their L2 learning, indicating that current experience might influence
achievement. Apart from the three components of L2MSS that are mentioned above, the
intended learning effort also plays an essential role in determining the effect of L2
On the one hand, as mentioned in the study of Alharbi (2017), the intended
learning effort was defined as “the learners’ willingness to act upon their motivation” (p.
18), which was the most essential contributor for them to acquire knowledge practically
in their self-directed learning process and shaping motivation in L2 learning. On the other
hand, the intended learning effort can be seen as the learners’ behaviors that were
motivated by several factors to reach the final achievement when learning a language
efforts in learning English” (Arslan & Çiftçi, 2021, p. 4), and according to Putra (2021),
he defined it as a “desire and intention” of the learners, which stimulated them to invest
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their time and energy to demonstrate their academic performance (p. 2). In general, from
these perspectives, the intended learning effort can be seen as the intrinsic motivation
(i.e., willingness and desire when learning a language), and the extrinsic motivation
In many studies, researchers tend to combine the intended learning effort with
other components of L2MSS (The Ideal L2-Self, the Ought-to L2 and the L2 Learning
Experience) in order to figure out whether they are related to each other or not, and how
effective they are on the learners’ performance. For the first purpose, it is indicated that
there was a strong relationship between L2MSS and the intended effort (Moskovsky et
al., 2016). Particularly, the former elements were proved to be significant predictors of
the latter (Al-Hoorie, 2018; Xu & Ji, 2021; Martinović, & Burić, 2021). However, Arslan
and Çiftçi (2021) argued that it was the intended effort that contributed to the prediction
of aforementioned components. Therefore, it could be concluded that the L2MSS and the
intended effort can have certain effects on each other to some extent. Additionally, the
L2MSS forms a strong and positive relationship with the intended effort (Yetkin & Ekin,
2018), which is aligned with Al-Hoorie’s (2018) and Martinović’s (2021) studies.
Although a critical correlation between L2MSS and the intended effort has been
confirmed in recent studies, the discrepancy of the level of influence among the
motivational system components on the intended learning effort is still a debatable topic
correlation of intended effort with the L2 learning experience” (p. 733). This was in line
with the results from the Arslan and Çiftçi’s (2021) study, which indicated a strong
When it comes to the Ought-to L2, Zoltán Dörnyei (2009) concluded that the
intended effort played a marginal role in creating the students’ learning behaviors, which
agreed with the striking evidence given by Al-Hoorie when he drew a conclusion about
the moderate connection between the Ought-to L2 and intended effort. Sharing the
common point of view with Dörnyei and Al-Hoorie, Ghorbani and Rashvand Semiyari
(2022) also reported a modest role of the Ought-to-L2 that had been predicted in the
Iranian students’ effort. Despite the medium level of contribution from the Ought-to L2
that had been proven above, there was “no significant relationship with intended effort in
any language group” (Yang & Chanyoo, 2022, p. 260). As a whole, from the research
about the Ought-to L2 and the learners’ effort, it showed that the relationship was slight
When we consider the final factor of the list, the Ideal L2-Self did perform a
converse role, compared to the Ought-to L2. According to Dörnyei (2009), it was
was not only convincing when being evaluated with Chinese, Japanese and Korean
learners but also demonstrated a positive relationship between these two variables in the
study of Yang and Chanyoo (2022). Moreover, apart from being “the most important
variable explaining the intended effort” (Ghorbani and Rashvand Semiyari, 2022, p. 36),
effort.
components on the intended learning effort, it is widely agreed that “the Ideal L2 Self
came forth as the strongest explanatory variable”, which was followed by the “Attitude
towards L2 Learning and then by Ought-to L2 Self” (Ghorbani & Rashvand Semiyari,
2022, p. 37). The comparison between the impact of the Ideal L2 and that of the Ought-to
L2 on the intended effort was also obvious in the findings of Martinović and Burić
(2021).
It can be concluded that due to the influence of L2MSS components, the intended
strive for achieving their aims and plans in the active learning process (Yang, 2019).
Although there was a slightly different level of influence from the L2MSS on the
intended learning effort, “the regulatory bias of intended effort is not limited to the
L2MSS studies” and “this construct has also been used in relation to other motivational
achievement
learning to write. Writing skill is not simple since it is not only about completing learning
tasks but also expressing thoughts (Ariyanti, 2016). As mentioned in Leki’s (1983) and
Hyland’s (2003) studies, writing is the communication among writers as well as between
writers and readers. Among different kinds of writing, academic writing defined as “a
mental and cognitive activity” has been considered as the most advanced level (Fadda,
2012, p. 124). According to Paker et al., (2004), two phrases, academic achievement and
academic success, can be used similarly. Nevertheless, Choi (2005) illustrated academic
achievement is when learners complete the course requirements and reach a high GPA.
After a decade, York et al., (2015) concluded that academic success contains six
Over the last decades, writing ability has played an important role not only in
academics but also in future careers (National Commission on Writing, 2004). The
demand for academic proficiency increased when writing assignments were encouraged
to be required for any courses (National Commission on Writing, 2003). Despite its
importance, “academic writing is a challenging task” for most L2 learners at any level
(Wischgoll, 2016, p. 187). This formal writing is not based on the author’ s preconception
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but data from multiple sources will be analyzed, combined and organized in an impartial
way to support author’s position toward a topic (Boscolo et al., 2007); therefore, students
encounter numerous difficulties during their writing learning (Hyland, 2003; Erkan &
Saban, 2011). With arrays of hindrances, researchers have attempted to find out what
constitutes academic writing success, and a significant relation between motivation and
writing performance has been pointed out (Graham et al., 2007; Nasihah & Cahyono,
2017). The section below will explore the relation between intended efforts (one kind of
The relationship between intended learning efforts and academic writing achievement
In recent research, authors have used the term intended learning efforts as the
relevant criterion measure to investigate how much effort that learners put into their
section above, intended learning efforts were regarded as motivated behaviors; however,
perceived learning efforts (PLE) and intended learning behavior (ILB). Also in this
study, there were unexpected findings that PLE did not show the relation to L2 language
Besides, the results in Kim and Kim’s (2011) and Al-Hoorie’s (2016) studies revealed
that intended efforts appeared as a weak predictor of achievement. On the contrary, there
was other research supporting the role of intended learning efforts in language learning.
When compared to the three components of L2MSS, this motivational factor was
success (Yetkin & Ekin, 2018). In addition, Shih (2019) indicated that intended efforts
connected with self-efficacy, which leads to achievement. This means that learners with
high effectiveness make more effort into the learning process, and as a result, they do not
face many challenges in academic performance. Other research (e.g., Bandura, 1997;
Pajares & Urdan, 2006; Zimmeran, 2000) together shared the same point. Furthermore,
Yang (2019) suggested that intended efforts would be enhanced by creating a study plan
(i.e., what learners should do) at the beginning and reflecting frequently. Consequently, it
is remarkable that when being an independent variable, intended efforts cannot directly
In general, the correlation between the intended learning effort and academic
writing achievement has not been fully explored. According to Wong (2018), this
criterion acts as a bridge connecting L2 selves and reading achievement. Another study
reported that the intended effort indirectly related to writing outcome through learning
objectives and strategies (Shih, 2019). From all the aforementioned studies, we draw out
that the intended learning effort has influences on academic achievements in both direct
or indirect ways.
(Csizér & Kormos, 2009); Japan, China and Iran (Taguchi et al., 2009); Saudi Arabia
(Al-Shehri, 2009) with different participants from various educational attainments with
and without English majors to evaluate and validate the L2MSS precisely. The findings
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in the previous three years revealed that all of the mentioned research provided solid
support for the hypothesized system. Moreover, there was a close correlation between the
L2MSS model and Higgin (1987, 1998)’s previous models. The L2MSS was also found
to be in parallel with the theories proposed by Gardner (2001), Ushioda (2001), and
Noels (2003), which gave it further support (Dörnyei, 2009). In addition, Azarnoosh
manifested in his work that the L2MSS was verified in a variety of language and cultural
contexts and “has been found to be related to other SLA theoretical frameworks and
concepts.” (2014, p. 325) by citing numerous reliable studies in the same line; therefore,
L2MSS could be seen as a trustworthy and validated scheme when it comes to predicting
motivation. Alongside its relation to intended learning efforts, the L2MSS model has
Three main components of L2MSS show different extents of their predicting ability,
which will be mentioned later. In the academic language learning context of this writing,
Moskovsky et al. (2016), Subekti (2018), and Bushra & Sheikh (2022) shared the same
findings in which L2MSS had no effect in predicting achievement. In other words, the
Zhang (2021) contributed to this relation by indicating that L2MSS had a weak effect in
L2MSS model and L2 achievement, Al-Hoorie (2018) discovered that the relation of
L2MSS and achievement was “weak but there seem to be several means to improve the
predictive validity of the Ideal L2 self when it comes to actual language achievement.”
(p. 736). As can be seen, the impact of L2MSS components came into sight in
between Ideal L2 and L2 achievement and a weak interconnection between the Ought-to
L2 Self and achievement. Khan (2015) and Apple et al. (2020)’s research could
strengthen this connection when their findings likewise indicated that the Ideal L2 Self
affected students’ L2 achievement more remarkably than the Ought-to L2 Self. Besides
the two selves from L2MSS, the third component and the L2 Learning Experience, could
possibly create a connection with L2 achievement, as proven in Tan et al. (2017)’s work
his examination, Tort Calvo (2015) concurred that while the L2 Learning Experience was
significantly connected to the Ideal L2 Self and retained influence on learning outcomes,
the Ought-to L2 Self’s impact was revealed to be negligible. However, despite the scanty
(2022) believed that the “Ought-to L2-self drew a more intensive impact on learners’ L2
learning outcomes than the Ideal L2-self.” (p. 51). This result, however, was detected in
different learning contexts, which means the Ought-to-L2 could only prove its strong
optimistic L2 achievement, the Ideal L2 is the dominant component. Among all three
components, the Ought-to L2 Self has a weaker capacity to forecast L2 achievement and
and language skill achievement, proven by numerous studies. Three remarkable research
studies demonstrated different outcomes when applying L2MSS to estimate macro skills
performance: (1) The Ideal L2 affected achievement in listening skills (Chuah et al.,
2022); (2) All the L2MSS components influenced communication skills (i.e., the Ideal L2
was the dominant factor, followed by L2 Learning Experience and the Ought-to L2 had
the most negligible impact) (Darling & Chanyoo, 2018); (3) The Ideal L2 Self was also
Österberg et al. (2022) argued that limitless research had shown motivation to be critical
explored the connection between academic writing skills enhancement and motivation
using the L2MSS model. In these investigations, the Ought-to L2 was found to have
weak connection with writing and even cause a negative effect on students’ achievement
(Jang & Lee, 2019; Tahmouresi & Papi, 2021); however, the final findings firmly
supported the motivating force of the Ideal L2 Self that it had a direct facilitative effect
the L2 Learning Experience had a positive effect on writing results. These two variables
however, there seems to be no sign of any investigation to shed light on the relationship
between L2MSS, intended learning effort, and writing achievement, as well as their
affection for each other in the Vietnamese context. Referring to its undeniably essential
for higher education learning outcomes, investigating academic writing using the L2MSS
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