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Sample Report

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Writing Task 1 (Academic IELTS Module)

Double Line Graph, Practice task 1 from ‘Target Band 7’ book, Page 48.

The graph below shows how prices of "high-tech gadgets" changed over time in Somecountry.

Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.

The graph compares the average prices of advanced technology devices in US dollars. It can be clearly
seen that the navigation systems is more expensive than smart phones during the whole period Commented [ieltsblog1]: were
between years 2004 and 2006.

In 2004 Jul-Dec, navigation system and smart phones were the most expensive which is 3900 USD and Commented [ieltsblog2]: systems
3100 USD respectively. As the time went on, the prices of both gadget types dropped in 2005 Jan-June, Commented [ieltsblog3]: , priced at
to 3200 USD for a navigation system and 2800 USD for a smart phone. It is interesting to note that the
prices of both navigation systems and smart phones was getting the closest in 2005 Jul-Dec, which is Commented [ieltsblog4]: became almost identical
3100 USD and 2900 USD respectively. Commented [ieltsblog5]: at

In 2006 Jan-June, the prices of navigation systems went up by 400 USD whereas the costs of smart
phones faced a decline of 200 USD. The only period when prices plunged in both gadgets was 2006 Jul- Commented [ieltsblog6]: of
Dec, there was a plateau in the prices of smart phones (2700 USD) in contrast with navigation systems Commented [ieltsblog7]: plunged
reached it lowest point (2700 USD). Commented [ieltsblog8]: those of
Commented [ieltsblog9]: reaching their
Overall, as the time going both of the gadgets is getting cheaper.
Commented [ieltsblog10]: years went by,

Go to the next page to see the Evaluation Report Commented [ieltsblog11]: were becoming

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Evaluation Report

Word count 179

Comments The overview in this report contains appropriately chosen


information. The key features have been identified and
described in a logical way. Paragraphing of the report is fine.
However, there are some mistakes in word choice, grammar
(verb tenses in particular), referencing and sentence structure.
These should be addressed in order to gain a higher score.

Estimated Band Score 6.5


Task achievement Coherence/Cohesion Lexical resource Grammar and Accuracy
7 7 6 6

Suggestions 1. Pay more attention to the grammar and the way you
construct sentences.

2. Be careful with word choice and watch out for spelling errors.

3. Manage your time so you have a few minutes left to


proofread the task response. Correcting any obvious spelling
and grammatical errors is an easy way to lift your Band score.

Click here to get your writing checked: https://www.ielts-blog.com/check-your-ielts-writing/

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