Writing Task 4 Jake Peterson

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Jake Peterson has a history of intermittent hair loss and mental health issues since he was 13 years old. He has tried various treatments including steroid creams and homeopathy, but his condition has worsened in recent years with increased anxiety, weight loss, alcohol consumption, and issues maintaining relationships and participating in activities.

Jake Peterson first presented with hair loss 5 years ago following a bullying incident. He was prescribed steroid creams but later discontinued them. He has experienced personality changes, aggression, sleep issues, and recurring anxiety and hair loss in the past year.

Jake Peterson tried steroid creams prescribed by a trichologist initially but discontinued them later. Last year he tried homeopathic treatments which were ineffective and his physical and mental health deteriorated further.

Occupational English Test

WRITING SUB-TEST: NURSING


TIME ALLOWED: READING TIME: 5 MINUTES
WRITING TIME: 40 MINUTES

Read the case notes and complete the writing task which follows.

Notes:

Assume that today's date is 30 August 2019.

You are a nurse at a boarding school. Jake Peterson is a male student at your school and has come to you
complaining of hair loss and associated depression.

PATIENT DETAILS:
Name: Jake Peterson
DOB: 17 Mar 2001 (18 y.o.)
Address: School: Holly House School, Brenkridge

Social background:
Student at boarding school for past 8 yrs
Parents work & live abroad
Father (male-pattern baldness – onset in 50s)
Mother (depression – onset in 40s)
Non-smoker; 20 units alcohol/wk
Karate black belt; champion swimmer

Presenting complaint:
Alopecia – hair loss from 13 y.o.; intermittent cycles (loss and regrowth); aetiology not confirmed –
various possibilities
?Depression

TREATMENT SUMMARY:

Mar 2014 School clinic – presented with hair loss in patches; anxiety
?onset – school bullying incident, Pt said ‘not a major thing’
Referral to trichology specialist

May 2014 Trichologist: no aetiology established; possibly exacerbated by stress


Prescribed steroid cream (betamethasone dipropionate 0.05% cream 1-2x/day for
3mths)
Personality changes, aggression + sleep loss
Medication discontinued

2014 - 2018 No further hair loss; intermittent hair regrowth


Dec 2018 Return of anxiety and pronounced hair loss
General health check – Ô6kg over last 2mths
Recommended to see doctor re hair loss, anxiety, weight loss. Student reluctant, asked
about natural remedies, e.g. homeopathy. Discussion re efficacy, student still keen to try

Feb 2019 No results + cost implications of homeopathic treatment (kalium carbonicum and silicea)Ò
student Ódistress and low mood
Problems forming/maintaining peer relationships
Affecting sports participation

Mar 2019 Referred to school counsellor – did not attend

May 2019 Check-up: Ó alcohol consumption, min 28 units/wk

June - July 2019


Exam time – extreme anxiety (necessary to arrange separate exam room) – Óhair loss

30 Aug 2019 Student concerned about transition to university shortly and independent living
Letter to university medical practice:
• monitor
• organise special exam arrangements

Writing Task:

Using the information given in the case notes, write a letter to Mrs Kullan, a university practice nurse. In your letter,
briefly outline Jake Peterson’s history and your concerns. Address your letter to Monica Kullan, Senior Nurse
Practitioner, University of Marchbank Health Centre, Hillsdunne Rd, Marchbank.
In your answer:
●● Expand the relevant notes into complete sentences
●● Do not use note form
●● Use letter format
The body of the letter should be approximately 180–200 words.
30 August 2019

Ms. Monica Kullan


Senior Nurse Practitioner
University of Marchbank Health Centre
Hillsdunne Rd
Marchbank

Re: Jake Peterson, 18 years-old

Dear Ms. Kullan,

Jake Peterson, who has been suffering from intermittent cycles of alopecia, requests your
assistance and support as he transitions from high school to your university.

He first presented in the clinic 5 years ago with complaints of intermittent cycles of hair loss
in patches and regrowth following a bullying incident. A referral to a trichologist was made
and he was prescribed steroid creams for three months for which he discontinued later on.
He has shown personality changes, aggression, and sleep deprivation since then.

He returned a year ago with a recurrence of his anxiety and worsening hair loss. He was
recommended to see a doctor but preferred homeopathic treatment for which was
ineffective and had worsening physical and mental health. He also had issues with
maintaining a relationship and participation in sports activities. He also consumes at least 20
units of alcohol per week. During the exam, he was sent to a separate room due to extreme
anxiety.

With this, it would be greatly appreciated if you could assist him in transitioning to your
university and independent living. He also requires monitoring of his condition and please
organize special exam arrangements as necessary.

Should you have any concerns, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Nurse.

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